Explain the story behind your favorite toon. Why has she/he been sent on whichever class story? Which companion did he/she romance? What did he/she name his/her ship? Why does the character have the name you picked? Which planet is he/she from? What was the person's previous occupation? What do they look like?

 

For my main, Bemra, her story is like this:

She was a smuggler to begin with. She has a sister that she practically raised. While on Ord Mantell, she passes a Jedi, who sends her away to Tython, leaving her sis to deal with Skavaak.

 

Bemra, named after a dream her mother had (the name was shouted in her dream.) soon progressed through her story. She named her ship Dream Chaser, because the dream was impossible to achieve at first. Like, c'mon, a smuggler turned Jedi? That was crazy!

 

Bemra was first born on Corellia. She romanced Archibal Kimble.

 

Detailed Story: Includes Spoilers... Don't read if you don't wanna be spoiled!

 

For those of you who want a chart:

Name: Bemra Rai Tydlr

Age: 22

Gender: Female

Planet of Origin: Corellia

Occupation before Jedi Knight: Smuggler

Ship Name and Reason: Dream Chaser, because Bem felt her dream of being a Jedi was almost impossible to reach

Reason of naming: Her mother heard her name shouted in a dream

Romance: Archibal Kimble, known as Doc

Relationships: Close to Lord Scourge and T7-01. Very close to Kira Carsen. In love with Doc. Not close to Rusk.

Physical Attributes

Hair color- Dark brown

Hair length- Short

Eye color- Brown

Body type- Thin

Height- 5'1"

Weight- 134 lbs

Blemishes- Scar on her right hand (Even smuggler has a bad day...)

Tone of voice- Kind, yet playful and also introspective

 

Dislikes

1. Rodians

2. Imperials in general

3. Sith Warriors/ Inquisitors

4. Creepy crawlies

5. RAKGHOULS! (she has a phobia of them)

 

Likes

1. Doc's bed head

2. Scourge's Sith Lessons

3. Kira's Nar Shadaa Visits

4. Her ship

5. Smuggling (being a jedi doesn't mean she can't smuggle!)

 

FUN FACTS

1. She still carries both of her blasters.

2. When she throws blasters in the air, she can fire them with her mind at targeted objects.

3. She had a Wookiee partner named Louie before becoming a Jedi.

4. Before she reaches the age of 25, her body is frozen in carbonite... and is brought back in the time of the Clone Wars.

5. Doc and her have one child, named Daccron.(Smuggler son. Figures.)

 

 

 

 

Can't wait to see your guy's responses!

Edited October 15, 2012 by Jessnjam

Well in reply to your first one i'll do my Vanguard

Stomvhal Skirrata is the son of an absentee Mandalorian father and a Republic Medic. Mandalorian was hurt during a hunt but actually showed some compassion on Onderon when a group of kids were about to be hit by errant blasterfire by the mark he was tracking. He threw himself infront of the blaster fire saving the kids but he was wounded in a few places. The republic medic oncall treated him and the two had a romance[ofcourse].

 

During this, ofcourse a child was born and the mother named him Stomvhal after a grandfather. Ofcourse the mando was told about his child and when the child became 8 the father tried to come back, mother flatly refused and and at the end of a VERY big blaster rifle told the father to take a hike. Stomvhal was raised to believe in the republic and also to have an inner strength of will. He enlisted at 18 and has been a trooper ever since.

 

For those of you who want a chart:

Name: Stomvhal Skirrata

Age: 26

Gender: Male

Race: Partial Cyborg. During a tour in the outer rim, he took a grenade close range and it messed up his face. To reconstruct it, they had to put in cybernetics around his eyes. But flip side is, they put in a comm so he can recieve voice only com calls without the need for a helmet or reciever.

Planet of Origin: Fondor

Occupation: Republic 1st LT

Command: Commanding Officer Republic Special Operations Squad 214: Talon Squad [yes i picked Talon cause Talon is my callsign from another game ]

Hair color- Black

Hair length- Close Cropped

Eye color- Green

Body type- Built like a Linebacker

Height-6'4"

Weight- 230 lbs

Blemishes- Scar under his left eye and ofcourse the cybernetics on his face.

Tone of voice- Like the man stepped out of the recruiting poster or the Drill Field.

 

Dislikes

1. Disrespect

2. Cowardess

3. Sith in general

4. Lightsabers

5. Bad intel, nothing to ruin a troopers day when intel craps the bed and you're going into a gunfight blind.

 

Likes

1. Women

2. Courage[doesn't have to be under fire, but courage in all things]

3. Defense of beings that cannot defend themselves

4. His squad

5. His rifle and all things that make his job easier to accomplish

 

FUN FACTS

1. Married to another republic commando who commands another squad who couldn't be more unlike him if she tried. While he'll obey lawful orders and bring badguys in alive, she just straight up blows them away orders be damned.

2. Has met his father, and atleast he knows where he got his size from.

3. Has actually disobeyed orders before, got asked to shoot people who could of been the enemy but he didn't.

4. Friends with a smuggler of all people. Guy is a great source of intel, plus if his squad is out on a mission and need something in a hurry, his buddy Feyd can get it, and does it on cheap!

 

Overall he's a straight laced leader of men, but he does have his wild streak underneath it all. I mean look at his wife! A kill them all and let the force sort them out who almost flies in the face of most regs, but hey, she gets the job done!

Edited October 12, 2012 by TalonVII

Nice toon! Oh and I forgot:

 

Bemra also has an Imperial Agent brother and a smuggler sister. (I'll do one for the imp agent later.)

My Bounty Hunter:

 

Chernan was born on Mandalore before the Great Galactic War started. Since he was too young to go to war at the time, he remained on Mandalore with his mother and sister. When he turned sixteen, he married a girl in his village. The two had a child - a son - and purchased their own ship. Just before the Cold War started, Chernan adopted a street urchin, a Mirialan. When the Cold War began, he sent his children to Coruscant. His human son, at the age of eighteen, joined the Republic army, but the adopted Mirialan son went back to his roots, becoming a freelance smuggler.

 

Chernan followed the Mandalorian code, fighting for the Empire, but he greatly disliked it, believing Mandalore the Vindicated had made a mistake in joining the Sith. However, he refused to join Jicoln Cadera's mad rebellion, believing it to be dishonorable. He figured when the Sith revealed their true colors, Mandalore would make the right choice and seccede from the Empire.

 

Gender: Male

Hair: Brown

Hair style: Cut in even rows

Identifying marks: Dragon tattoo on his right cheek

Blemishes: Burn scar on his left cheek

Body size: standard

 

Likes:

All things Mandalorian

The Republic

Doing honorable acts

Respecting tradition

 

Dislikes:

Sith and the Empire

Jedi

The Force

Dishonorable acts

Cold-blooded murder

 

I'll do my trooper and smuggler, his kids, later.

my sith warrior:

 

jarick and his twin brother jarich,sons of a smuggler called biddan and a zabrak bounty hunter called rohara were born both on their mother's ship after biddan abbandoned rohara;their force sensitivity was so strong that after a few years their mother noticed it and wanted them to join the jedi order,but something went wrong because only jarich managed to reach the order,jarick was kidnapped by imperial forces during the travel.

Led to believe trough brain washing techniques that he was born and raised on dromund kaas jarick started his training,but somehow a little part of his old self survived,he remained loyal to the principles his mother taught him when he was just a little child,mercy,fairness and self sacrifice,remaining true to this principles he continued his training and joined the sith accademy hoping to change the empire from within,but sadly he will never remember who his true family was.

 

 

 

name:jarick caesar

race:zabrak

hair color:none

romance:vette,she reminds him of someone very familiar,but he can't understand who

relationships:very close to his apprentice,jaesa willsam

goals:reforming the empire into a society of tolerance and equal rights

eye color:green

height:1.80 m

weight:75 kg

age:7 (kidnapped by the empire) 10 (training in the empire) 24 (sith accademy) 26(current)

distinguishing marks:a special light side ability used to protect his allies against the dark side

 

 

likes:

diplomacy

mercy

self sacrifice

honor

loyalty

 

dislikes:

senseless slaughter

the dark side

stupid thinking

hurting people

 

fun facts:

he likes getting paid but he never asks

his favourite lightsaber color is green but he uses a red black lightsaber

his favourite gifts are underworld goods

 

a picture of him:

http://i46.tinypic.com/2nbzzer.png

 

 

(btw nice stories!)

Edited October 14, 2012 by _biddan_

Born a slave, she raised her two little sisters, Krenth and Enth, with the help of her little brother, Cherek. Cherek and Enth were captured and sold at auction when Onith was 13. She escaped the slave camp at 16. After living as a street rat for a few months, Braden found her and took her in to train her. The story started after four years of training.

 

Name: Onith Beeska

Age: 23 at beginning of story, 27 at end

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Planet of Origin: Nal Hutta

Occupation: Bounty hunter

Hair: Dirty blonde, shoulder-length

Eyes: Brown

Body: Muscular. 5’6”, 140 lb.

Scars: Three scars from her hairline to mid-cheek on the right side of her face

Romance: Torian Cadera

Ship: Darling, named by its previous owner

 

Dislikes:

1. Sith

2. Imperials

3. Sith

4. Cowardice

5. Sith

 

Likes: (not in order)

1. Underdogs

2. Knife-fights

3. Her family

4. Drinking

 

Fun facts:

1. Spent her entire time on Balmorra passing along as much information as she could to the Resistance.

2. When she married Torian, he took her name.

3. The span of story between Belsavis and Voss was actually her hiding out from Darth Tormen because she was pregnant with her first child.

4. Defected to the Republic post-story.

My trooper:

 

Backblast, being the son of a Mandalorian warrior, was trained extensively in the arts of combat. When his father left him and his adopted brother on Coruscant, Backblast joined the Republic military. Impressed with his skills, the Republic soon placed him in Special Forces. There he proved himself as a terrific medic but also a proficient demolitionist. He got his nickname when one of his training bombs exploded the wrong way, tearing out one of his eyes and scarring his face.

 

When Backblast's training was complete, he was assigned to Jagger Squad, also known as the Republic's Finest. His brother, Dankin, sometimes does supply runs or piloting missions for Jagger Squad, so the two still see each other often.

 

Name: Vevec

Nickname: Backblast

Body size: Large

Specialty: Medic

Eye color: Blue

Hairstyle: short, but unruly

Hair color: sandy

Identifying marks: cybernetic eye, also cybernetic implants on the sides of his head

Blemishes: scar from an accident during training

 

Likes:

The Republic

Mandalorians

Honor

Combat

 

Dislikes:

Sith and the Empire

Dishonorable actions

Cowardice

Edited October 14, 2012 by YoshiRaphElan

My favorite of my toons is Eighan, my Zabrak smuggler. When he was still a little child(about 4 yrs old), the ship he and his family were travelling on was attacked by pirates. The pirates were quickly dispatched by Imperial forces. However, the captain of the Imperial rescue vessel, corrupt Sithspawn that he was, decided to mark the rescued passangers and crew as 'Cargo', enslaving and confiscating them as Imperial property. Eighan's father managed to overpower a shuttle pilot and escape with Eighan, but Eighan's mother and older sister were left behind in Imperial hands.

 

Eighan's father never forgave himself for being unable to save his wife and older child, and died a broken man when Eighan was 17. This left Eighan with a great hatred of the Empire(and distaste for the Republic for allowing the Empire to continue), along with a constant need to be on be move. He sought refuge in the stars, joining a number of freight crews and smuggling captains, learning anything anyone would teach him. He soon found he had a knack for piloting and gunplay, particularily duel-wielding(he's ambidextrous). Eighan's last captain before he came ot Ord Mantell, an old Duros, left him his ship and his last contract with Rogun the butcher, giving Eighan the start he needed to begin his rise to power as a Privateer of the Republic.

 

For those of you who want a chart:

Name: Eighan Dothe

Age: 29

Gender: Male

Planet of Origin: Iridonia(Born there, but raised on the Zabrak colony of Feldrona)

Occupation before Smuggler: Pilot and mechanic for a variety of ship captains

Ship Name: Starstream. It was the previous name, and Eighan didn't mind it.

Romance: Akaavi Spar, former Mandalorian.

Relationships: Treats his crew like family. Corso is like a brother, Risha a sister. Bowdarr is his most trusted friend and bodyguard. Guss is his lieutenant-in-training. And Akaavi is the best wife he could possibly ask for(though hardly the doting type).

Physical Attributes

Hair color- Sandy-blond

Hair length- Long, for a Zabrak. He has it wrapped around his horns, and is particularily proud of it.

Eye color- Green

Body type- Average build, but strong leg muscles due to many tiems he has led his enemies on a merry chase.

Height- 6'1

Weight- 192

Blemishes- None. He's proud of his pretty mug.

Tone of voice- Violent and angry, particularily when it's tim to kill Imperials.

 

Dislikes

1. Empire.

2. Slavery.

3. Republic being timid with the Empire

4. Bullying

5. A fair fight.

 

Likes

1. Akaavi(He didn't know beauty or perfection until he met her), and their 9 (future)children.

2. Unfavorable odds(Well, beating them, specifically)

3. Flying(No feeling like it)

4. Playing cards

5. Drinking soft liquor

 

Fun Facts:

1. His older sister, who he lost to Imperial slavers, is Darth Imperious, his universe's Sith Inquisitor. He has not found this out as of the end of the current class quests, though they have fought multiple times, along with the other 6 player classes.

2. An early partner of his on Ord Mantell, Coltun Orrick, is the current Major of Havoc Squad. Their Anti-Imperial values are shared, and they count on one another to bail eachother out of hotspots.

3. He's not attracted to non-Zabrak women. It isn't that he doesn't realize that they CAN be attractive, or that he dislikes how they look in general. Just that if they don't have horns on their head, he won't dance the horizontal tango.

4. He names his two blasters after contant insistence by Corso. His offhand blaster is Ath, named for a figure from Zabrak mythology who ushered Zabrak into the afterlife. His mainhand blaster is Sash, Zabrak for 'dancer'(meaning literally 'dust dancer', refering to ancient Zabrak courting rituals).

5. He wears a locket with a picture of his old family before beaing torn from them. It shows his father smiling(something he never saw), his mother looking tired but happy and holding baby Eighan in her arms, and his sister(about 6 yrs old in the photo) laughing and carrying a play lightsaber. It's the only thing that he still retains from that time, he never takes it off, and only Akaavi has ever asked about it. But he simply isn't ready to face the memories yet.

Edited October 14, 2012 by CastonFolarus

such worderful stories,maybe tomorrow i'll post my female smuggler's story.

Oh also for you troopers, i started a kind of sister thread to this one.

 

If you have troopers and a story about your squads, go ahead and toss them in!

 

http://www.swtor.com/community/showthread.php?t=544094

 

GAME ON!

enjoying everyone's stories!

 

My Gunslinger

 

Lorhin and her sister Sashel were found on Nar Shaddaa by a chiss jedi when they were little children. he took them back to the jedi temple where they met his pure blood friend. the latter eventually adopted them and raised them in the freighter ship he lived in. when the girls grew older, their adopted father enlisted in the Republic military and left them to live in the freighter alone. Lorhin and Sashel started their smuggling careers by delivering supplies to their father's unit whenever there was an emergency. what started as small jobs turned into a "family business", and a profitable one at that. Lorhin continued smuggling cargo throughout Republic territories while her sister eventually went back to Nar Shaddaa to set up her own medical business in the underworld. eventually, Lorhin took that fateful job which carried her to her current occupation as a Republic Privateer. She still keeps up her old smuggling job on the side.

 

For those of you who want a chart:

Name: Lorhin Kipplar Riggs

Age: 22

Gender: Female

Planet of Origin: Nar Shaddaa

Occupation: Smuggler/Republic Privateer

Ship Name: The Harvester - Lorhin named it that since she flies it around, "harvesting" credits with every new job.

Relationships: married to Corso, close to Risha, good friends with Bowdaar, Akaavi, and Guss

Physical Attributes

Hair color: burnette

Hair length: Short

Eye color: green

Body type: 2

Height: 5'7"

Weight: 136 lbs

Blemishes: none...that are visible anyways

Tone of voice: sarcastic and playful

 

Dislikes

1. Hutts

2. not getting paid

3. sith - they're so overrated

4. bullies in general

5. betrayal

 

Likes

1. her family and crew

2. credits

3. her ship

4. keeping busy

5. revenge

 

FUN FACTS

1. Lorhin eventually meets a Mirialan jedi who she teams up with on a couple Republic jobs. Lorhin becomes the jedi's go-to contact, and the two become close friends.

2. during her short stay on Tython as a child, she scammed a padawan out of his lightsaber.

3. she has a stuffed womp rat she sleeps with every night. its name is Jinkies.

Name: Taoré Timarick

Age: 25

Species: Human

Eyes: Green

Hair: Dirty Blond

Height: 5'9

Weight: 175lbs

YOB: 3665 BBY

Homeworld: Ossus (born on Corellia)

 

Class: Jedi Knight

Advanced Class: Jedi Guardian

 

Affiliation: Jedi Order, Galactic Republic, Champions of the Force

 

Rank: Jedi Master

Status: Alive

Marital Status: Married to Kara (Kira) Carson (Carsen)

Known Apprentices: Kara Carson (Kira), Artimos, Nexer

 

 

BIO:

 

 

 

Personality: Despite attaining the rank of Jedi Master, Taoré is still very youthful, and with that comes a seemingly endless pool of energy from which he draws upon to connect with people and the galaxy around him. Often making people laugh, telling jokes, always with a light-hearted, if occasionally explosive and sarcastic demeanour. However, underneath it all lies wisdom and knowledge far beyond his years, as well as a seething pool of internal struggle between utmost serenity and stillness, and a furious storm of chaos. Despite his ever-present energy, he firmly believes in the past and the future both influencing one another, and the present, but that ultimately, choice is what people have, and that choice seperates good from bad, and that we as people can always choose to do what is right. He can be a bit obsessive over things he enjoys (but not to any extreme his peers would frown upon), and always the first to speak out and rattle off fun facts and occasional useless information all for the sake of entertainment. He is also born with a HUGE rebellious nature, and will always stand for what is right, even when it goes against what his superiors believe, which is often, such as his belief in attachments, and isn't in the slightest afraid of telling anyone and everyone off for their foolishness. For this reason, above all, he is considered a maverick (a womanizer for a time) and labelled a "Gray Jedi" by his peers. He cares very deeply for others and will happily throw himself in harm's way to defend others.

 

Allies: Jedi Kara Carson (Wife, Former Informal Padawan);

T7-O1;

Doc Kimble;

Sarge;

Lord Scourge;

C2-N2;

 

Sergeant Shonto Reed-Timarick (Half-Brother/Clone);

Jedi Cayst Timarick (Sister-in-Law)

Captain Josh Grantan

Vera Varela

Master Ashling Cato;

Jedi Astarra Vin;

Jedi Artimos (Former Padawan);

Padawan Nexer; (Informal Padawan)

Padawan Lunika Koumori (Informal Padawan)

Padawan Laranna (Informal Padawan)

Padawan Zoralia;

Master Ty Eid (Former Master, MIA);

Master Rahmé Timarick (Father; Status: Active, Whereabouts: Unknown);

 

Grand Master Satele Shan;

Master Orgus Din (Deceased);

Revan (Status: Unknown)

Colonel Jace Malcolm

Lieutenant Larin Moxla

 

Enemies: Lord Kayven (Brother)

Sith Apprentice Saeja Kanno (Former Ally)

Agent Angeleecka Dimock

Darth Gabronth

 

Darth Malgus (Status: Unknown)

Darth Angral (Deceased)

Grand Moff Kilran (Deceased)

 

 

Weapons and Gear: Lightsaber (Hilt: Standard, Crystal: Green), Standard Jedi Equipment (including commlinks, jump lines, rebreather, scramblers, medkits, image caster, homing beacon), Jedi Robes (of black, grey, and beige colour) with additional light armor plates. Owner of a small Corellian Corvette, courtesy of the Jedi Order

 

Skills: Expert Hand-to-Hand combatant;

Master swordsman (specializing in Form V of Lightsaber combat in both variations, with adequate training in Form I, Form III, Form IV, and Form VI);

Capable of using the Dun Moch capability, often considered a "Sith" skill, but without succumbing to the Dark Side

Talented Speaker with great communication skills

Underrated Leadership Skills;

Underrated Tactical knowledge

Vast Knowledge of Myth and History

Capable Piloting skills

Skilled Archaeologist

 

Powers: Underutilized, but potent, telekinetic capabilities, capable of sending droids several times his size and strength flying with a simple push through the Force or sending charged telekinetic bursts focused through his lightsaber. He can also bend this telekinetic prowess to slow or even stop foes dead in their tracks for a short while or even break out of even the tightest restraints, including another Force user's own telekinetic use. He can also throw his lightsaber in conjunction with his telekinesis for sneak attacks and long range blows that seldom miss.

 

He has also shown an aptitude for the Affect Mind capabilities, one being very skilled with the "Mind Trick" but also in the subtler fashion of influencing people's thoughts, either to rally or to debuff, whether it be a war cry, taunting opponents to attack him, or get inside their heads with the often considered "Sith" technique known as the Dun Moch.

 

He has shown on many occasions he has an aptitude for Battle Meditation and minor skill in the Art of the Small, capable of using it's healing capabilities to great effect, though it requires the utmost concentration to effectively use the latter, whilst it is an simple matter for him to execute the former.

 

Taoré is also quite capable of using the Force to greatly enhance his strength, agility, speed, and leaping capabilities, often incorporating his natural agility to incorporate other elements of lightsaber combat outside of his comfort zone.

 

Though limited in his telepathic abilities, he can sense changes in people's emotions, and when he focuses, can often guess what a person is thinking without actually knowing for sure what it is inside their minds.

 

Though entirely unaware and can never access this ability, his spirit is unique in the Force that every few generations after his death, will return from the Force to the land of the living to continue to battle as one of the many avatars of the light against the darkness, returning at times when the galaxy is on the brink of collapse, and hope is lost. ((ie. NOT WHEN SOMEONE LIKE A LUKE SKYWALKER IS AROUND TO SAVE THE UNIVERSE!))

 

Likes - People who take charge of their lives

Strong Women

Sex

People with a good sense of humor

Helping others (even when he doesn't like them)

Independence

Lightsabers

History

Fantasy

His Friends

 

Dislikes - Authority

Sith

Betrayal

People who hurt others for pleasure

Politicians

Crime

Stupidity

People who don't even try to take care of themselves

Giving Up

Edited March 27, 2014 by Timarick

Wow! Great stories, guys! I updated my story so I can have more details. And I have a shout out to Spikespiegel! XD

Thanks for the help for JK Finale.

I actually re rolled my inquisitor so now she is now Aureva! anyway...

 

Aureva was born and spent most of her childhood in space and so considers her ship to be the closest thing she has to home.

 

A former slave to a once great imperial Political figure. experienced a shocking amount of comfort despite the cruel treatment her master inflicted on most of his other slaves.

 

soon before the events that led her to Korriban, A rival politician revealed to Aureva that the reason that her master did not mark her face and treats her almost like a human instead of a slave, is because he is her biological father. (not that he refrained from working her mother to death)

 

just as she was trying to comprehend this new found knowledge, Aureva was liberated from her position mostly due to collateral damage. she and her master were on a planet for business when her master was among the slave masters killed due to an order to liberate the slaves strong in the force.

 

Aureva is 19 at the start.

 

Has red brown hair and amber eyes.

 

has a slim figure

 

initally was wary of Andronikos becaue of her dislike of men believing them to be cruel by nature. (her primary examples being her master and Harkun) after Zash betrayed Aureva, she became very aware that women can be just as horrible as men. so she gradually adjusted and is now very close to Andronikos whom after getting to know him, she permitted herself to embrace her attraction to him. possibly due to the fact that he embodies traits she wishes she could allow herself to embrace.

 

Wants to be friendly with Ashara but cannot bring herself to be fully comfortable around her. (possibly due to their contrasting back rounds)

 

Gets along quite well with Talos as they share similar interests.

 

Adores Khem and teasingly refers to him as Khemmy!

 

Tolerates her apprentice. if she had her way she would be mentoring the Twi'lek..

 

This is a work in progress, I will add more later...

Hey, Jessnjam, you might wanna keep the part of your post that has actual Jedi Knight story bits under a spoiler tag. You don't want people to get spoiled with no warning, do you?

 

I'll edit later with my story.

 

Edit: Here's the one of my characters.

 

Name: Oridan Bendolo (His name is not derived from Obi-Wan (Ben) Kenobi. The similarity is a coincidence, I swear!)

Gender: Male

Species: Human

Hair color: Dark Brown

Eye color: Blue

Class: Jedi Guardian

Lightsaber Color: Blue

Planet of Origin: His family was originally from Alderaan, born on Coruscant.

Romance: Kira Carsen.

Padawans: Kira Carsen, Parthunir Pan (my twi'lek Shadow) and an unknown Chiss Consular (a planned character of mine)

 

Generations ago, Oridan's family, the Bendolos, were minor nobles on Alderaan. The family fell on hard times, and lost their noble status long before Oridan was born. The Bendolos would still cling to their old ideals of honor and integrity however, and many members of the family would serve in the republic military with distinction, all the way up to Oridan's own time, when his brother, Cid Bendolo, joined the Republic Special Forces.

 

Perhaps Oridan would have joined the republic military as well, had he not been found to be force-sensitive at a young age. As a padawan of the Jedi Order, he proved to be capable lightsaber duelist, and a bit of a recluse; Oridan would prefer to keep to himself when he could. He eventually ended his training on Tython and became a full knight of the Order.

 

There's more, but that's all I felt like writing right now. Ciao.

Edited October 15, 2012 by Ekas

Ok, I have a new toon, an Imperial Agent.

 

Name: Kiaran'salee

Age: 23

Gender: Female

Race: Chiss

Planet of Origin: Csilla

Occupation: Imperial Operative

Hair color- Blue

Hair length- Close Cropped

Eye color- Red

Body type- Wiry

Height-5'5"

Weight- 135 lbs

Tone of voice- Soft spoken and quiet.

 

Dislikes

1. Sith Interference

2. Ineffiency

3. Jedi

4. Beaurocrats

5. Bad intel, or whitewashing events.

 

Likes

1. Excitement

2. Adventure

3. Doing the job right

4. Good Tech

5. Good whiskey

 

Growing up on Csilla, Kira[for short] went to the Chiss Military academy from a young age, and was chosen for infiltration and wetwork due to solid sense of self and the ability to think on her feet. Transferring to Imperial Intelligence at 18 she went to Dromund Kass for further training and now does spying, espoinage, and anything that needs done.

 

She has done ops from the outer rim to the core to the unknown regions. Where ever she is needed, that is where she goes.

I added spoilers! forgot that not everyone has leveled their knight... XD put the whole story in spoilers so people can skip over it if they want to.

Given name: Krone Korbin

Name: Darth Gargauth

Known aliases: Many aliases, most are unrecorded.

Species: Human

Age: 34

Height: 2.2 m

Weight: 122 kg

Eye color: Grey

Hair color: Silver

Skin color: Tan

Faction: Empire, Grim Determination

Birthplace: Sernpidal

Relatives: Triplet Miraluka daughters and a Sith daughter.

Occupation before Sith Warrior: Wanderer

Ship Name: The Wandering Servant

Romance: Jaesa Willsaam (married)

Relationships: Darth Gargauth's crew is expendable if it serves the Empire (especially Quinn, minus Jaesa) but he will fight to the death for any one of them.

Blemishes- Scars over the right eye, and over his entire body (a road map of pain and anguish)

Tone of voice- Calm and even hiding the rage that blazes just below the surface.

 

Dislikes

1. The Republic

2. Betrayal

3. Disruptions

4. Self important attitudes

5. Spiders (nothing in the universe needs eight legs)

 

Likes

1. Jaesa's smile

2. Plans coming to fruition

3. Crush his enemies

4. See them driven before him

5. And to hear the lamentation of their women

 

FUN FACTS

Follow the link in my signature for the synopsis of the origins of Darth Gargauth.

Edited October 19, 2012 by Reynaga

My Commando

 

Volk Starshield was born on Coruscant during the Great Galactic War. He was fourteen years old when he witnessed the Sith Empire's attack on Coruscant at the end of the war. During the attack, he was able to save his ten year old sister, Valarah, but their parents were killed during the attack.

 

With the help of relatives and a moderate inheritance, Volk was able to raise is sister in comfort until he reached the age of eighteen, when he enlisted in the Republic Army. After basic training, Volk was immediately sent into combat operations in the Outer Rim, where he fought for six years, distinguishing himself in combat against separatists, pirates, and the Sith.

 

It was at the end of his tour, having earned the rank of sergeant, that Volk had his first encounter with Sith Lord, who killed his squad to a man, and left Volk to die after scourging him with force lightning.

 

Rescued by the Republic, Volk spent a year in a military hospital, with cybernetics derived from the Power Guard project used to mend his injuries and return him to active service. After being cleared for duty, Volk was sent to Ord Mantel to join the elite ranks of Havoc Squad...

 

 

Name: Volk Starshield

Age: 25 (at game start)

Gender: Male

Homeworld: Coruscant

Occupation: Major, CO of Havoc Squad.

 

Physical description:

Standing a full two meters tall, Volk's body was left heavily muscled after his Power Guard derived augmentations, allowing him to wield even the heaviest of assault cannons with ease.

 

Volk has brown hair and one brown eye. The left side of his face is covered with lightning scars, and his left eye is covered with a metal patch to protect the delicate cybernetic eye that allows him to fire his assault cannon accuratly.

 

Dislikes:

The Sith Empire

Imperials

Sith Lords

Treason

Cowardance

Ugnauts

 

Likes:

Big blasters

Shooting Sith with said big blasters

Elara's accent

Jedi

The Republic

The Army

Honor

 

Fun facts:

Personal nemesis to the Emperor's Wrath.

Ally of the Hero of Tython.

His younger sister, Valarah, grew up to become a Smuggler.

Edited October 19, 2012 by VarrusTheEthical
Grammar

I'll do my Agent

 

Khatria was not actually born in the empire, But the republic. She lived on the streets of Coruscant with her former friend and lover, Kai-Lynne, of Republic Special Forces. Kai-lynne was the muscle of the pair, and Khatria was the brains. They always talked about Kai-lynne's dream to fight for the republic, and Khatria always disagreed. When they were both of age, Kai-lynne went to Republic military boot camp, which ended the relationship. Khatria came to join Imperial Intelligence due to infiltrating a transport that was carrying Dark council member Darth Jaedus (spelling?). Due to her Cybertech and Slicing skills, which took her all the way to the engine room of said ship, Darth Jaedus asked her to join the empire's Intelligence agency instead of killing her. She agreed, using it as a chance to get back at the republic for taking her lover from her.

 

Basic info

Name: Khatria

Age: 21

Race: Blonde-haired human Cyborg (Had an implant to help with her slicing and "Droid craft", Got visible cybernetics when she "joined" Imperial Intelligence)

Planet of Origin: Coruscant

Occupation before Agent: Pirate looking for loot on the wrong ship

Ship name and reason: Heartbreaker: Because her job breaks the heart of anyone affected by it

Reason for naming: just because

Romance: none, for she thinks that romance=heartbreak

Physical Appearance

Hair color: Blonde

Hair length: Ponytail type look

Eye color: Blue

Body type: Average

Height: 5'6"

Weight: 150 LBS.

Blemishes: None to speak of

 

Planned build: http://www.torhead.com/skill-calc#401McfrzGoRdsZ0cZGM.2

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Also here is my Trooper:

 

Kai-lynne was born in the republic. She lived on the streets of Coruscant with her former friend and lover, Khatria. Kai-lynne was the muscle of the pair, and Khatria was the brains. They always talked about Kai-lynne's dream to fight for the republic, and Khatria always disagreed. When they were both of age, Kai-lynne went to Republic military boot camp, which ended the relationship. Since then, Kai-lynne swore that she would never fall in love again. She was the top in her class in both assault specialization and Melee-range tactical combat. She was just getting use to her military career when she was sent to Ord Mantell.

 

Basic info

Name: Kai-lynne

Age: 21

Race:Zabrak

Planet of Origin: Coruscant

Occupation before Trooper: none

Ship name and reason: Does not name ship

Reason for naming: just because

Romance: Still missing her lover, my agent

Physical Appearance

Hair color: Brown

Hair length: short

Eye color: gold

Body type: Amazonian

Height: 6'2"

Weight: 195 LBS.

Blemishes: scar from grenade backfire

 

Planned build: http://www.torhead.com/skill-calc#801hMhMZMsrbRrfkzs.2

Edited March 24, 2013 by stormdrakelord

These stories are awesome. I always love to see the kooky things people come up with. So I guess I'll pitch in with my nearest and dearest - my first Agent.(with cameos from trooper,smuggler and consular! Complex relations tree go now!)

 

Name: Skathe [Alias - real name unknown]

Age: 27 [unconfirmed]

Species: Chiss

Origin: Csilla

Occupation: Imperial Agent - Operative [Formerly Chiss Military Officer]

Current whereabouts: Unknown

 

Known History:

 

The agent known as Skathe is a steadfast Chiss loyalist, requisitioned from their military by Imperial Intelligence as part of the alliance and re-trained as a covert field operative. Little is known about his early life, but it is known that his father was previously an intelligence agent himself for the chiss, which may explain Skathe's rapid ascent in rank. Though recent revelations have revealed the agent to be a troublesome if skilled individual.

 

Sometime during his career - exact dates are almost impossible to pinpoint - he became involved with an assignment to assassinate a promising young Jedi padawan. Despite not being fond of the Republic or the Jedi, Skathe owes no particular loyalty to the Empire itself either. Upon discovering the Jedi was merely a child the agent turned on the rest of his squad and falsified a report of overwhelming retaliation from the Jedi situated on the planet. As this information has come to light only after his disappearance, no disciplinary measures were taken.

 

Skathe is known to have several 'Republic' allies - though all of these have since revoked their allegiance to the Republic and taken a neutral stance. The smuggler Jonae Vedek became longtime partners with the agent after Vedek's transport to Dromund Kaas for trial - which Skathe was aboard - fell victim to a pirate attack travelling through Hutt space and crashed on a nearby planet. The resulting scramble for survival and passage offworld seems to have struck a friendship of sorts, and Skathe retained Vedek on grounds of a potential informant into Republic activities.

 

The other ally is in fact family. An ex-Republic Trooper named Aethal, Skathe's half sister from the one-time affair of his father and a human woman. Raised in the Republic, neither sibling had any knowledge of the other until a chance meeting across the firing lines. Unsatisfied with her role anyway, Aethal abandoned her unit to join her brother in the Imperial ranks - though like her sibling she has no fondness for the Empire or the Sith.

 

Before his disappearance Skathe was reported to be on the run from a fellow chiss agent - a sniper going by the alias of 'Grimshaw' who according to Intelligence went rogue some time ago. What exactly the connection is remains unclear, but by all accounts Grimshaw retains some psychotic obsession with the other agent as well as a manic urge to kill and manipulate those in his path. The more outlandish claims suggest Skathe and Grimshaw once had a romantic relationship that ended violently when Grimshaw left the Empire.

 

Personality Traits and Description:

 

Skathe stands at roughly 5'10''. His red eyes, medium blue skin and dark blue hair mark him instantly as chiss, and he carries himself in a manner that suggests constant alertness. He is average in build, sharp in the facial features and has a long scar crossing over his right eye - reportedly from early military life and an encounter with a desperate enemy's vibrosword.

 

He has been described by colleagues as the consummate gentleman, never shouting or showing disrespect but always firm in his opinions and decisive in action. He is polite and self-sacrificing - traits which sometimes attract trouble in this line of work - but his disarmingly friendly style makes him unrivalled in information gathering and persuasion. Unfortunately, his reluctance to execute enemies has been known to result in added cleanup for Intelligence or the resurfacing of threats considered dismantled later on.

 

To the irritation of said colleagues, he is apparently not above sarcastic remarks when he feels the need.

Name: Frieze Brandeis

Age: 29

Species: Twi'lek

Origin: Tattooine

Occupation: Smuggler, Scoundrel, and Republic Privateer

Current whereabouts: Dubrillion

 

Known History: Frieze was born into slavery on the desert planet Tattooine under the rule of the Hutts. He learned the tricks of the trade and developed the street smarts needed to survive. During a vital and secret spice trade, his ship was boarded by Mandalorians under the Imperial banner and ransacked while the crew left for dead in orbit around Hoth. Luckily, a travelling caravan arrived almost a day later and he was rescued later as the only survivor. With vengeance on his mind, he took the mantle of "Frieze" as his heart had become cold as the planet Hoth. He severed his ties to his past killing anyone who got in his way and eventually reclaimed that lost ship to rebuild and remind him of that experience. Later he took up work as an arms dealer and spice runner working under a local patron on Nar Shaada. Frieze was contracted to deliver weapons to the wartorn world of Ord Mantell for an unknown buyer but couldn't comprehend that this simple stop would be the start of his greatest adventure yet...

 

 

Personality Traits and Description: A mild case of narcissism, ruthless and will not hesitate to kill anyone even women, has a soft spot for alien suffrage, dislikes patriotism, dependency, ineptness. he is a womanizer, cheats at pazaak, craves adventure, takes the easy way out of situations, combat pragmatist.

The Orden Legacy-

 

A group of friends that initially lived in the republic, they were separated at young ages when an imperial attack captured 3 of them. 1 escaped and the other 4 were evacuated. The emotional trauma from the attack led to them losing all memory of their friends and as such they each followed different paths. Rancerle turned up as a republic privateer after a series of jobs he took up after inheriting his ship from his adopted father. Feylara always had some deep seeded anger for the empire so when she first took command of havoc squad, she made sure that the imperials were at least running scared when she was through with them. Occula became a merciful sith lord seldom using her mastery of saber combat when an alternative was available. Farsal was taken in and raised by imperial intelligence agents and as such, became a sniper of unpresidented skill. The only one still remembering the attack, ossollilo developed a habit of spontaneously attacking imperial troopers. Eventually braden found him and he rose to be a true mandalorian (begrudgingly helping the empire). Tenzina had her memory completely wiped and was made to believe she was sith from the start. Her heart was never in it though and eventually she decided to only defend the empires interests, never attacking first. thorsas and amanhotep were made jedi and often traveled together even giving each other money and supplies. eventually the republic ordens realized who they were and made a pact to track down their friends. Rancerle found Ossollilo trying to sabotage an imperial doomsday weapon, thorsas found farsal after quite ironically, farsal tried to assassinate him. feylara found tenzina and knocked her out rather than try and convince her to come quietly. Amanhotep simply walked into Occula in voss ka. reunited they decided to just return to their lives but stay in touch (all except ossollilo who decided to return to coruscant with rancerle, he simply stated that te empire was bound to realise who was secretly sabotaging their death machines eventually).

Wow! Great stories, guys! I updated my story so I can have more details. And I have a shout out to Spikespiegel! XD

Thanks for the help for JK Finale.

 

I personally would've done what I did and adapt the JK story into your own without specifically stating the exact role the character played. For example in my post I said that he PARTICIPATED in the battles the JK class would have without flat out saying "He killed x, y, z." But either way, not a bad story for a character. Good job

 

EDIT: I also would slice out the Yoda aspect immediately. We are set 3500 years in the past. Yoda only lived to be 900. So we are faaar before his time. As for the prophecy of the Chosen One, aka Anakin, that's fine lol.

Edited October 30, 2012 by Timarick

The V'akarian legacy.

 

Avern had been a slave for as long as could remember unlike his fellow slaves he held onto each ounce of hate he earned from any beating or any jolt of lightning, eventually he came across a pure blooded sith slave and both fell into a single night together. Eventually Avern discovered he was connected to the force and subsequently sent to Korriban for training. The imperial solider he had loved gave birth to a daughter, Hazor. of course when she came of age she was sent to Korriban also.

 

after many swift and brutal imperial victories led by Avern the jedi council hatched a plan to secure this siths power. They secretly acquired DNA samples of this powerful sith lord and created a growth accelerated clone completely loyal to republic and its people named Arven. When he was ready the clone was sent to Tython for training. However not all of the hate from his "brother" was taken away, so he was left with 2 voices in his head telling him what to do. he managed, mostly but each choice was a struggle. While training on Tython Arven became great friends with a miralukan jedi named Arail. she shared a huge passion for jedi culture and history. Both believed in the republic and traveled through many dangers.

 

During a battle which nearly saw to the end of the sith lord Avern a bounty hunter literally flew in and eliminated the attackers. The first words out of the bounty hunters mouth afterwards was 'that'll be 25000 creds.'

 

At first the Rargus threw in with Braden and his team for the money. Overtime he grew to respect mandalorians, honor and teammates. similarly albeit Begrudgingly over time the two became good friends the bounty hunters jokes forcing even Avern to develop a small sense of wit. He would never admit it though.

 

A time on dromund kaas the pair ran into an imperial intelligence chiss agent named Alit. The CHISS had been given to the empire as a negotiation aid to further promote the chiss empire alliance. The female chiss was genetically engineered at birth to be perfect. She held a loyalty to the empire which bordered on fanatical. She always tried to do right where ever her mission parameters permitted. Her only hatred was for certain ignorant sith and a smuggler by the name of Neath. The mirialan smuggler had been contracted by the agent to transfer her to a republic world for a mission. The smuggler double crossed the agent and handed her to the republic from which she narrowly escaped from. But vowed vengeance.

 

During Rargus's early years as a bounty hunter of little renown, he had a run in with the republic military with a solider named sergeant Desharp. The sergeant pursed the bounty hunter and was rewarded by mortally wounding the hunter by shooting his eye. The bounty hunter got his revenge by completing an old saying "an eye for and eye". Desharp filed for a cybernetic eye through the military but the red tape would ensure she never received one. She was promoted to havoc squad shortly after. Rargus however used underworld connections to receive a new eye extremely swiftly.

 

There you have it guys I deeply hope you like this, took me ages to work it all out! Hahaha.