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(FAN FIC) Star Wars: Fate's Kindness
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(FAN FIC) Star Wars: Fate's Kindness | 12.12.2009 , 05:16 PM
So this is my fan fiction story. I don't know too much about Star Wars canon other than the 6 movies and a couple games, including KOTOR I & II, JKIII: Jedi Academy and what the holonet has to offer on TOR.

I don't have an editor, so I've done my best to edit my own work and apologize for any grammatical errors or anything that doesn't make sense in general.

I hope you like it, and please, feel free to leave your criticism.

EDIT (3/15/2010):Alright so since this thread has gotten to be pretty long I'm going to write up a table of contents for everyone, so you can find each part amongst this big mess of a fan fiction.

Page 1
Part I - The Crash
Part II - The Jungle
Part III - Survival
Part IV - Rebirth
Part V - The Village
Part VI - The Kill
Part VII - The Trio

Page 2
Part VIII - The Offer
Part IX - An Interlude
Part X - Showing Off
Part XI - Near Death Experience

Page 4
Part XII - Force Users

Page 6
Part XIII - Alive

Page 9
Part XIV - Empty

Page 11
Part XV - Divide

Page 15
Part XVI - Love

Page 16
Part XVII – The Truth

Page 20
Part XVIII - Pain

Page 26
XIX – Buried





STAR WARS

FATE’S KINDNESS


The War between the REPUBLIC and the
SITH EMPIRE has ravaged many worlds. The
Republic cannot afford to spread their forces
thin and protect every world, thus leaving
many planets unprotected.

But there is hope for these worlds that the
Republic has deemed strategically expendable.
This hope lies in the smugglers of the galaxy,
bringing food, weapons and supplies to these exposed
planets. Once considered petty criminals, scum to most, these
adventurers are now welcomed as heroes
on many planets.

One such young smuggler, ELONA ALSILIUM, has
been at the front of the struggle. Risking life and limb
she has been credited with single handedly saving
entire worlds. But there is something she is hiding from
not only those who hunt her but the people
she helps… she has a son…





Part I - The Crash

The young boy ran down the corridor at full speed, his arms pumping and his legs flying out from underneath him. He reached out with his left arm at the end of the corridor, flinging himself around the corner and starting again at full speed. About halfway down the dimly lit passageway, just as he was passing a doorway, he felt an impact centered directly on his solar plexus.

It wasn’t so much that something had hit him, it was that he had ran into something. How something had materialized out of nowhere, he did not know. He contemplated the implications of an invisible object in the middle of the corridor as his feet flew out from beneath him and his balance reversed and inverted. As he fell backwards towards the cold, metal floor, he came to the conclusion that spies were on the ship and had placed invisible floating mines in the middle of the corridors as traps. His life flashed before his eyes in mid air, or was that simply the mine detonating?

He hit the ground hard, and the boy wasn’t sure what had knocked the wind out of him, the impact in mid air or the impact on the ground. Whatever it had been, he gasped desperately to refill his aching lungs. Looking up at the supposed location of the invisible object, he saw a familiar arm extended out from the open doorway, and theories of spies hijacking his ship, The Escort to Eden, disappeared altogether from his mind.

“Ouch, mom! That hurt!” How his mother had been able to thrust her arm out of the doorway just at the right moment to deal that blow to his chest was beyond him, but then again she had always been able to do some strange things. He had his suspicions, but he never voiced them because he knew she would just deny everything. Her arm disappeared from the door way, presumably to return to doing whatever it was she had been doing before striking a near fatal blow to her son.

“Jon, you know better than to go running down the hallway like a crazed mynock. What if you fell? Hit your head? What if we were attacked and the gravity stabilizers went offline and you went flying into a bulkhead?”

“I would probably be in better shape than I am now,” he managed, feigning greater injury than he had actually suffered.

“I don’t want to hear it young man. Besides, why aren’t you studying with RC-42?” R-C was Jon’s mother’s protocol droid, and had been appointed Jon’s unofficial tutor. Since Jon spent all of his time either in spaceports or on the Eden, he didn’t have much opportunity to attend an actual school. Which was fine with him, he loved traveling from world to world with his mother, meeting strange aliens and dodging Sith blockades. He couldn’t think of anything more exciting then adventuring throughout the galaxy and helping the Republic war effort. The sharp pain in his lungs slowly fading to a dull ache, he began to stand up slowly, continuing the façade of severe injury by holding his stomach and breathing heavier than necessary.

“I have finished my studies for the day. The droid synapse logic theory is way easier than I thought it would be. I even did a little lab work on R-C.” He chuckled at how clever he was as he peered through the entryway and saw his mother bent over her work table. Jon couldn’t make out what she was working on, so he stepped into her work shop and peered over her shoulder.

“I hope whatever you did does not interfere with his protocol subroutines.”

“’Course not. I just gave him a little upgrade.”

“Good, because I don’t speak Falleen and I need to renegotiate the price of these blasters we’re carrying.” She seemed intent on whatever it was she was doing, so all Jon could do was nod and watch her work. He couldn’t quite tell what she was working on, but his guess was some kind of blaster. As she worked he spoke with her quietly. His mother had always been a tinkerer. He often spent long hours with her in her workshop, talking with her, asking her to tell him stories, true or false didn’t matter. But he knew not to ask her about his father. The last time Jon asked his mother about his father, she hadn’t spoken to him for almost a week.

“Why do you hate the Sith so much, mom?”

“Jon, haven’t I told you about all of the terrible things they’ve done? How many people they’ve hurt, killed, tortured? The Sith are nothing more than a black mass of evil trying to envelope the galaxy.”

“I know, but I was talking with this Twi’lek at Nar Shadaa, and he said this Sith aren’t so bad.”

“A lot of people think the Sith are the best thing since hyperspace travel, but that doesn’t make them good. One thing you’ll learn as you get older, Jon, is that you’ll have to make decisions for yourself, and you can’t let the opinions of others influence your own beliefs. Just because something is popular doesn’t make it right.”

Jon nodded. He had heard his mother speak like this before. She never forced her opinions on him, she only told him what she believed and let him decide things for himself. He didn’t really understand what was so great about the Republic, versus the Empire. They both seemed like two forces striving for power over the galaxy. Just because the Republic had control before the Sith didn’t mean they should be able to keep it, or that they had any right to have control over anything in the first place.

No, Jon figured everyone should just go out and adventure like him and his mother. No senators, no Jedi Order, no Sith Lords, no one to tell anyone else what to do. Just free spirits, floating in the wind between the stars. But there was also a part of Jon that knew better than this. But this part of Jon was not ready to take over his way of thinking just yet. Despite adventuring with his mother and considering himself quite the learned and experienced child of ten, Jon knew that his mother sheltered him whenever possible.

“But mom, who says what is right and what is wrong?” She smiled while still keeping her eyes on her work. Jon could now tell for sure she was building a blaster, but it looked smaller than the one she always carried on her hip.

“No one can tell you what is right and what is wrong. That is something you need to figure out for yourself, it’s different for everyone. Look at us, Jon. Do you have any idea how many laws we’re breaking bringing weapons to the Falleen people? But if it wasn’t for people like us, planets that don’t have support from the Republic would fall to the Sith in a millisecond.”

Jon nodded. He understood that just because the government told you something was wrong, did not necessarily make it so. This was a concept he had learned at an early age, and was reinforced by their way of life. He knew that helping people fight for their freedom was the right thing to do, despite breaking both Republic and Imperial law.

“I think that blaster is a bit small for a Falleen soldier.”

“I’m not building it for the Falleen.”

“Then who’s it for?”

“Jon, it’s for you.” She held up the completed blaster to the light, and inspected her work. The blaster was small and black. It had the standard laser scope on it, as most blasters did, but it made the blaster look off balanced due to the smaller size of the weapon in general. But other than that it looked sleek and well built. Jon’s eyes went big as he watched his mother tinker with it for a minute longer before turning to him and beaming at him.

“Jon, I won’t always be around to protect you. You’re getting to be old enough to handle a weapon, and I know you’re more than capable of handling the responsibility that comes with it.”

“Mom, what are you talking about? You said you’d never lea-“

“And I won’t, ever, leave you if I have any choice in the matter. But sometimes life throws some hard punches and we have to roll with them in order to survive. You are a young man now, Jon, and I love you very much.” Tears welled up in her eyes as she knelt down in front of him. Jon was tall for his age, and when his mother knelt down on one knee she actually had to look up at him to meet his gaze.

“Don’t pretend that R-C hasn’t been teaching you how to shoot when you finish with your studies early. I know because I was the one who told him to do so.”

“But he told me never to tell you!”

“And I’m very mad at you for lying to me about that, but we’ll get to that later.”

“Wait a second that’s not –“

“Jon, you need to be able to protect yourself, because what we do is very dangerous. I’ve tried my best to be a good mother to you, and I know that taking you on dangerous smuggling operations isn’t exactly the environment for a child to grow up in. I’ve left you in trusted friends care for when I go on really dangerous jumps, and I’ve even hidden you when we’ve been boarded by the Sith, but you’re getting too big to hide anymore, Jon, the missions are getting more dangerous and… well, and it’s time you became a man.”

Jon was speechless as his mother handed him his very first blaster. Despite it looking smaller than normal blasters, it was still heavy and too big for him. Inspecting it he quickly made a checklist in his mind of all the features the blaster had. He looked up at his mom and saw that she was crying again.

“Mom, why are you…”

The bulkhead behind his mother exploded, sending her body smashing into his, and he was thrown backwards against the opposing bulkhead. Banging his head against the metal structure of the ship, the last thing he remembered before it all going black was an angry voice over the ship’s communication systems.

“This is Captain Kreal Vortek of the Sith Fleet! Prepare to be boarded! Elona Alsilium, you have been charged with smugg…”

And then there was nothing.
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12.13.2009 , 03:21 AM
Part II - The Jungle

His own coughing woke him up. His eyes were blurry and all they revealed to him was black. The air was acrid around him, and he couldn’t take a breath without coughing. Jon tried to move but found he was pinned under something. He could not make out what it was, all he could tell was that it was heavy.

Jon’s sight slowly returned to him, but all he could make out was sparking panels and a smoky corridor. He wasn’t sure where the smoke was coming from, but he knew where there was smoke, there was fire. The thought of burning to death, pinned to the metal floor plates of the ship like this frightened Jon. He did the only thing he could think of to do. He called out for his mother.

“Mom!” He coughed, breathing was already hard and it took that much more effort to speak, let alone yell for help. Silence followed his coughing fit.

“Mom! Help! Mom, please I’m stuck!” Still nothing. Jon’s sense o f panic began to overwhelm him and he started to look around wildly, afraid. What if the Sith had taken his mother from the ship, and left him to die? He thought of the vast, emptiness of space and he felt very alone. Shaking his head, he threw out those thoughts. Everyone told him that he had quite the imagination, and he often “let it run away” with himself. Well, everyone meaning R-C and his mom.

“R-C! Mom! Anyone?” He called out again, and this time, instead of silence, he heard some familiar beeping.

“Young…*beep* … Master …*beep*…FORMATTING MEMORY SUBROUTINES…*beep* …what …*beep* …happened?”

“R-C! R-C! Are you okay? Where’s my mother?”

“I believe … RUNNING SYSTEMS DIAGNOSTIC …that I have suffered … DIAGNOSTIC PROCESSING … some damage… *beep*…*beep*…*beep*”

“Can you move? Can you check the status of the ship?”

“Young Master, *beep*, I believe that I am able to do that.” Jon heard some rustling behind him, and straining his neck he could vaguely make out the shape of the protocol droid moving towards one of the ship consoles. R-C bent over the console a moment, appeared to work with it briefly, and then turned towards Jon.

“Young Master, I believe that the ship has had a complete power failure and all systems are offline…DIAGNOSTIC COMPLETE. MAJOR DAMAGE TO MEMORY, LOGIC AND SUPPORT SYSTEMS SUSTAINED. RECCOMENDED MAINTAINANCE IMMEDIATELY.”

“Then how is life support still working? Are you okay, R-C?”

“Young Master, I believe I have suffered some damage to my internal circuits.”

“Can you help me lift this support beam off me? I can’t move.”

“Young Master, my original design is that of a combat droid. It was only with *beep*…*beep*…ACCESSING MEMORY FILES…*beep*…well, I received protocol routines at some point. When, I am unsure, but they are there. Maybe I have yet to receive them…*beep*…LOGIC SYSTEM FAILURE…*beep*”

“Can you or can you not help me?”

“Young Master, of course.” Jon watched as R-C approached, and hoped that the droid’s logic systems were intact enough to understand that the beam needed to be pulled upwards, not pushed downwards.

“We have to look for my mom,” Jon said as R-C gripped the beam and gently pulled it upwards and away from Jon. Jon stood slowly and quickly looked himself over. His clothes were blood stained, but he didn’t feel pain anywhere, except a dull ache at the back of his head. Remembering the impact with the bulkhead before he blacked out, he reached back and felt a large bump on the back of his head. Look at his fingers in the dim light, he saw no trace of blood. His concern for his mother deepened as he thought of where all the blood on his clothes could have come from.

“Young Master, perhaps we should check the bridge.”

“Let’s go.” Jon began climbing quickly through the wreckage strewn hallway, making his way towards the bridge. R-C followed deftly, keeping pace easily with Jon. The ship was dark except for small fires and sparking consoles. The smoke was almost permeable and Jon had to cover his mouth with his shirt with one hand while he climbed.

As he moved through the ship he noticed his sense of up and down was off. If he had to guess, it seemed like the ship was tilted at an almost thirty degree angle to the starboard. He made a mental note of having to check the gravity stabilizers. As he neared the bridge he began calling out for his mother again.

“Hey mom! Mom! Are you okay? Mom!” Jon noticed that as he approached the bridge light was streaming in from the windows. He was suddenly afraid that the ship had been tractored into some kind of bay after the attack, and that they were surrounded by Sith soldiers, just waiting to board and kill everyone on the Eden.

Entering the bridge he was blinded by the light from the bridge windows, but as hey regained his vision, he saw his mother slumped over the pilot console.

“Mother!” Jon ran to her, the bridge being relatively clear of debris, and lifted his mother off the console. She limply fell back into the pilot’s chair, her head rolling to the side. Blood soaked her shirt, and she was unconscious.

“Mom!” Jon felt tears well up in his eyes as he looked upon the unconscious form of his mother. He had never seen her like this, and although she was obviously breathing and very much alive, he suddenly felt abandoned.

“R-C, what should I do?” He looked up at the red metallic form of the droid hovering over Jon and his mother.

“Young Master, do not fear, I happen to be well versed in *beep*…SEARCHING MEMORY FILES… *beep*…I don’t know, Young Master. I know I have treated an injured …SEARCHING MEMORY FILES…*beep*…wookie? …*beep*… I believe returning power to the medical bay and having the ship’s medical systems take a look at your mother is our best option.” Jon nodded, quickly thinking as his eyes roamed his mother’s unconscious form, searching for her injuries.

“The first thing we have to do is make sure we’re safe, which means finding out where we are and if the Sith are still on top of us. The gravity stabilizers seem to…”

“Young Master, I apologize for interjecting, but I believe turning around and looking out the bridge window will answer some of your questions.”

“What are you talking about…” Jon turned and looked out the window. By now his eyes had adjusted to the blinding light, and he only had to squint a little to see out the window. What he saw made his mouth drop and his hopes fade.

“R-C… where are we?”

“Young Master, I believe that we *beep* ACCESSING MEMORY FILES…*beep*…ACCESSING LOGIC SYSTEMS…*beep*… I believe that we have died and gone to heaven. And heaven is a jungle planet.”
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12.13.2009 , 08:24 PM
Part III - Survival


Sweat ran into his eyes, bringing along with it the painful sting of salt and soot from the electrical fires that had long since died out. His muscles cried out and his fingers bled. He did not remember the last time he had had a shower, or a decent meal. The lizards he had been catching were small and meager, and hardly enough to feed both him and his mother. With his mother in the condition she was in, he had been slipping her half of his share without her knowledge.

Fire had consumed the ship almost immediately after he and R-C had dragged his mother and what little supplies they could find from the wreckage. Almost nothing was left except blackened bulk heads and charred remains of what had always been Jon’s home. He had scoured the burnt wreckage several times and had scavenged most everything useful. But there was still one thing he had yet to find. Even if it was ruined, he had to at least find the remains.

His mother’s condition had worsened. With the med bay on the ship destroyed and half of R-C’s memory in the same boat, all Jon could do was clean and dress her wounds with little knowledge of whether he was making it worse or better. She was unable to move very much, her wounds had probably paralyzed her. She was in and out of consciousness, and he wasted no time while she was lucid. He would make sure she would eat and drink what little they had before slipping back into sleep or delirium.

He had learned from her that somehow she had detonated a pocket of gas inside an asteroid belt near the Sith ship, which had destroyed it and damaged the Eden. She had managed to set the Eden down on a planet, which one she did not know. All she knew was that the equator was one large jungle, while giant, continent sized glaciers grew the farther north or south you went. She had no time to scan the planet for any form of inhabitants, but if there were any she said they would have noticed the crash and investigated by now.

R-C hadn’t been much help with anything other than manual labor. Jon had attempted to repair his logic system as best he could, but the damaged memory was gone forever. They had built a small shelter about a klick from the crash site, near a trickling stream. Jon had searched nearly five kilometers in each direction, but had found nothing in the way of edible fruits, game or a more reliable water source. R-C had spouted off something about underground rivers before he short circuited and was offline for almost a full day while Jon tried to repair him. From then on Jon informed R-C to only attempt access of undamaged memory sectors. From then on, R-C had offered only minuscule bits of advice.

Jon pulled at an exploded console, digging through the rubble. He had found a relatively undamaged part of the ship. Really it was more like a slightly less burnt corner of a hallway, but it was something, and it was right where he last remembered seeing the object of his search.

He had left R-C with his mother, and informed the droid to give her food and water if she woke from her almost comatose like state. Jon had also told the droid to attack and kill anything that moved, be it animals or people, he didn’t want to take any chances.

Pulling the last piece of wreckage from the corner of the corridor, he scanned the floor briefly, but did not see anything of any use, and more importantly, he did not see the item he was looking for. Sighing inwardly, Jon started to turn away from the heap of wreckage, but a small reflection of light caught his eye. He stopped, and leaned over the wreckage. Looking closely, he saw that the light had reflected off the scope of his blaster. His search was a success.

Pulling the blaster from underneath the rubble, he examined it, looking for damage. The scope was a little smudged, but other than that it appeared unharmed. Jon marveled at the chances that this lone weapon would survive the fire when little to nothing else had. His heart filled with hope. He had been afraid to hunt larger game than the small half meter lizards he had been catching. All he had been using were sharpened sticks to kill and clean the food. Now he might be able to find something a bit more…hearty.

Exiting the wreckage was not difficult, the fire had opened many new portholes that had not been there before, and Jon had familiarized himself with all the openings. Standing a few dozen meters away from the black mass of metal and debris, Jon took aim at the Eden and fired.

The sound of energy discharge filled the crash site, and the blaster bolt slammed into the wreckage, causing the debris to spark and resound with a clang. A small smile crossed Jon’s face. The jungle would not win. The jungle, in Jon’s opinion, could offer nothing that he could not handle with a blaster.

Though hunger gnawed at him, Jon ran through the trees, vines, plants and brush that covered the jungle floor. He ran like he owned the Jungle, knowing exactly where to plant each step, never climbing higher than necessary and never descending lower than necessary. Avoiding plants that looked dangerous and insects that, having learned the hard way, bit, Jon was at home in the jungle.

As he had traveled through space, Jon had always felt restless. His mother had told him it was simple wanderlust. Jon had never felt at home in space. The cold, hard metal of space was so dispassionate. In the jungle, there was life all around him. He could feel the creatures of the forest looking down upon him, he could feel the trees reaching upwards towards the light, stretching with all their might to catch every last ray of sunlight.

Hunger had become Jon’s constant companion. What little he did allow himself, he relished. Each meal that he had had since the crash was the best he had had in his entire life. But not one of them had ever fully satisfied him. At first he had been afraid of the hunger, knowing that he may starve. But after accompanying him for so long he had grown accustomed to its presence, and Jon had almost forgotten what it was like to not feel it with him.

Hunger provided Jon a sense of clarity he had not known before in his entire life. The air was clearer, the ground more firm, the plants, animals and sunsets were more beautiful, more alive. Jon felt more in touch with everything around him.

Jon had tentatively spoken with R-C about his companionship with hunger, to see if the droid could offer any insight. Jon knew that R-C had never felt hungry in his entire existence, but perhaps he had known someone who had.

R-C had tentatively answered, knowing his memory core was corrupted, and informed Jon that he had once encountered monks who fasted for weeks at time, saying that hunger allowed them to meditate with better clarity than they could with full stomachs. Jon had found this fascinating and had begun meditating at the end of each day, when he was too tired to hunt or scavenge the wreckage.

Arriving at the camp site, Jon saw that R-C was bent over his mother. Quickly going to them, he realized that his mother was awake and talking, faintly, with R-C. Running for the water and food, Jon brought the small stores to his mother and kneeled before her.

“Jon…” she managed, barely, coughing hard into her blanket.

“Shh, mother, don’t speak. Here, eat this. Drink this.” He held the water up to her cracked, dehydrated lips. Her eyes lost focus for a moment, and Jon was afraid she would slip back into the nothingness she had come from. But her eyes quickly focused on Jon again, and she forced a smile.

“Jon, you need to listen to me.”

“No mother, you need to drink.”

“Jon…I am your mother…and you will listen to me.” Jon became very still, and stared at his mother for a moment. He put the scraps of lizard and cup of water down, next to her arm, and waited for her to speak. She took several deep breathes before continuing.

“I need… I need to tell you about your father.” Her eyes began to lose focus again, and Jon quickly brought the water up to her lips. She drank this time, but it seemed in vain for she coughed most of it back up.

“Jon… your father, he was a great man. He would be so proud of you. You are so much like him… I am so happy you turned out…to be…so much like him…” Tears began welling up in Jon’s eyes. He had never once heard his mother speak of his father, not once. He didn’t know what to say. He had always wondered about his father. What he was like, what he had done for a living. Was he a smuggler like Jon’s mother? Had he been caught and imprisoned, or killed even? She seemed to be fading quickly, and Jon gave her some more water.

“Jon…you need to know… it was my…it was my fault that your… that he went away. That he left us.” Jon’s mind reeled. What was she talking about?

“He wanted…he wanted you, Jon. He wanted us. He wanted to be with us…but…I drove him away.” Jon sat there, staring at his mother. Now, of all times she told him. She told him this now. Anger suddenly filled him. How could she make that choice for the both of them? How could she deny her son his father? She looked up at him and begun to cry openly.

“I’m so sorry Jon. I’m so sorry.” Seeing his mother cry was more than he could handle, and he broke down as well. Throwing his arms around her, he cried out.

“Don’t be sorry mom, I love you so much. I’m so scared, I don’t know what to do.”

“Be strong, Jon. Be strong for me. Just be…just be…strong…”

And she was gone. No, she wasn’t dead, not yet anyway. Her eyes had lost their focus again. She had drifted back into that nothingness that she had come from to speak to Jon. To tell him of his father, and to reveal that she had chosen to raise Jon by herself.

Jon sat next to his mother and cried for a long time.

About a klick away from the campsite, two figures crouched on a branch of one of the mighty trees of the jungle and looked upon the pathetic campsite through a scout lense.

“Who do you think they are?” asked a distinctly feminine voice.

“I do not know,” replied a much older, much more masculine voice.

“It looks like one of them is injured.”

“Hmm, yes.”

“And the other is just a boy.”

“I believe you are correct.”

“We should help them.”

“No.”

“But Master…”

“Maddi, you know our laws.” There was a long pause, and Maddi nodded reluctantly. The one she called Master turned from the sight of the camp and leapt from the tree, landing silently on the forest floor below. Maddi took one final look at the camp before following her master.
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12.13.2009 , 10:12 PM
Part IV - Rebirth

Jon’s mother died twenty days after the crash. How she had continued living so long with such serious injuries was beyond Jon. His only guess was that her enduring will had forced her body to continue working beyond all reasonable limits. In the end she went quietly in her sleep, but it didn’t hurt Jon any less to wake and find her cold and hard.

R-C had been little comfort, saying that he believed he had known Jon’s mother a long time and he also believed that she had been a good person, but couldn’t be sure.

Jon stopped hunting after Elona died. He didn’t see the point. It was hard to want to live knowing you’d be spending your entire life on a Jungle planet with only a broken droid to keep you company. With a war going on, casualties were frequent and no one would come looking for his mother’s ship, assuming that she would have finally been killed by the Sith. And in a sense, that was true.

No, Jon did not blame the Sith for his mother’s death. He figured that perhaps, if he was in their position, he would do the same. Really, they were only doing their jobs. He blamed himself for not doing more. Maybe he could have reactivated the systems in the med bay, or studied medical treatments in his studies. Oh, he had had so much free time…

But it was thoughts like these that left Jon cold and dead inside. He let the coldness creep in and consume him. It was better than feeling pain, than feeling sadness.

R-C apparently had enough memory intact in his programming to know he was programmed to keep Jon alive, and caught what little food he could. It was even less than what Jon had been catching. With R-C’s memory in shambles and his logic system still not fully operational, it was amazing that he hadn’t wondered off and gotten himself lost or damaged beyond repair by that point.

Jon ate what R-C caught, and he drank what water he could find, but no more or no less. It was as if he had entered some form of purgatory. A place where he wasn’t quite alive, but not yet fully dead. He was waiting for his turn. He was waiting to pass on, and perhaps see his mother again.

He also had strange waking dreams. Sometimes he would see his mother and he would speak with her for a while. But if the conversations lasted too long he would end up having to shoot her because he knew she was a lie. Every time he killed her she would cry out, “Why Jon? Why did you kill me?”

A month had gone by since Elona’s death, and he must have killed her again at least a dozen times. But in all reality he had lost count.

His father would come to him sometimes as well. He would appear as a dark, hooded figure standing off a distance in the jungle. Jon would run to him, but no matter how hard nor how fast Jon ran, his father eluded him, always staying the same distance away. Jon would cry out to him.

“Father! Father, help me, please! Why did you leave us to die?”

Never once did Jon’s father reply to him. He only stood there and watched.

R-C became worried at Jon’s strange behavior. Jon would disappear from camp for days at a time, and would reappear looking more haggard, more starved and wild than he had before he left. His hair that he had always kept short was now shaggy and almost ear length. His face was gaunt and his eyes popped out of his head like some ghoul in those horror holos that Elona never let him watch, but he did anyway.

Jon had begun talking to himself, even when R-C was nearby. Sometimes R-C would reply to Jon’s strange questions, only for Jon to retaliate harshly, sometimes threatening violence if R-C didn’t keep quiet. In the end, R-C just decided to shut down most of the time. Powering up only to hunt and gather water for Jon, he never spoke to Jon again.

One day, almost two months after the crash, Jon found himself suddenly in the clearing of the wreckage of the Eden. How he had arrived there he did not remember. He was surrounded by people he knew. His father was standing on the far edge of the clearing, watching him. His mother was standing next to him, pleading with him. For what she was pleading, he could not tell. After a while he just sort of tuned her out.

R-C was there too, but he was simply standing around letting his inner circuits explode. What a dumb droid.

Making his way towards the crash, he was surprised at how hard it was to move. It took so much energy just to put one foot in front of the other. He didn’t remember it being this difficult just to walk, but then again he didn’t remember much of the past month.

Entering the wreckage from the largest hole created by the fire, Jon methodically made his way through the debris and rubble to his mother’s room. Largely undamaged by the fire, Jon had already scavenged what he could from the room. There was little left inside, and his hazy mind was confused as to why he had returned.

His mother had not followed him into to the wreckage. Why she couldn’t go in, he didn’t know. But he was relieved to be free of her pleading without having to shoot her again. How many times had he shot her now? He couldn’t remember.

He began to dig through her room. Not sure what he was looking for, he slowly began tearing it apart. The bed, her dresser, her ruined computer console, he disassembled everything. Finally he came to her footlocker at the end of her bed. He had already been through it and had found nothing to help him survive in the jungle. But for whatever reason, he opened it again.

There were blankets, clothing, personal memorabilia…Jon stopped looking as he held a small holocron is his hand. The first time he had gone through the locker he had simply tossed the holocron aside. Now it gave him pause. He activated it, and a small distorted image of his mother appeared.

Something deep inside him stirred. This wasn’t like the apparitions he had been seeing in the jungle. This was somehow… more real.

“Jon, if you’re seeing this, then you have snuck into my room and gone through my things. How dare you young man! This holocron is fitted with a security device and will alert R-C that you have invaded my room. Shut down the holocron now and go find R-C before he finds you!”

Jon sat there, watching his mother scold him. He almost wanted to apologize to the holocron for violating her personal space. But he was silent. He knew R-C would not come looking for him. He was shut down at the camp site half a klick away. It would be hours before he powered back on and came looking for Jon.

The holocron, however, did not shut down. His mother continued standing there, with her hands on her hips for several minutes. He just watched her, fascinated by her mannerisms. He watched as her head tilted forward in that familiar way that meant he was in trouble. After several minutes passed, the holocron flickered and his mother no longer looked angry.

“Jon, if R-C hasn’t alerted me and I’m not punishing you by now, then something bad has probably happened. Jon, if something bad hasn’t happened, I beg you, please turn off the holocron now.”

Jon sat there motionless, barely breathing. He didn’t want to breath too hard for fear of missing a word of what his mother said. The holocron flickered again.

“Jon, if you’re seeing this then that must mean something has happened to me. I don’t know what or how I left you alone, but no matter what happened, I want you to know Jon, that it isn’t your fault.” Jon continued to stare at the holocron, eyes wide.

“I know how you are, Jon, always taking responsibility for whatever happens. That’s what I love about you Jon, you take responsibility for your actions. Most people skirt responsibility whenever possible, and blame others. Not you, Jon, no. Everything is your fault.” Jon nodded silently. He knew it was his fault she was dead.

“Let me tell you something, Jon. It is not your fault. Whatever happened, you need to know that I chose this life for myself and it is my own responsibility for whatever happens to me. I knew it could end badly someday, but that was my choice. It was worth my life to help others in need. My only regret is that I have involved you in that struggle. That is why I purchased RC-42. He’s your bodyguard, Jon. He’s your best friend. He will protect you no matter what happens. That’s what he’s programmed to do.”

Jon’s mind began to spin. He knew that RC had always protected him. He had never known that was what he was solely programmed to do.

“You must be scared. I’m so sorry for leaving you alone. I hate myself for doing that. I’ve sure been a pretty terrible mother, haven’t I? I was too selfish to let someone else adopt you, or even to quit smuggling. The truth is I loved you Jon, from the moment you were conceived I knew that it was my fate to love you, and take care of you.” Jon’s face felt wet. He reached up and touched his cheek. He did not know when he had started crying.

“Jon, I love you. You are so strong. You get that from your father, he was always stronger than I. I don’t know if I’ve told you about him yet, but in all probably, I haven’t. You need to know what he was to me. What we were to each other, and why he left us alone. It’s my fault he…” the holocron flickered again.

“Be strong, Jon. I don’t know where you are or what kind of predicament I’ve left you in, but no matter what happens, follow your heart. I made the mistake of not listening to my heart and look where it got us. Always know that I will be with you, forever.”

The holocron shut off, and Jon was left alone.
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12.14.2009 , 01:31 PM
I loved Jon's internal dissection of events, the creativity of the young boys mind, filled already with thoughts of danger due to his lifestyle, turn quickly to the ideas of invisible spies. A child like any other, full of imagination and lust of adventure.
Even in the first few paragraphs, you create a believable character.

A quick catch -- in this portion: "despite breaking both Republic and Empirical law."
I believe you mean "Imperial Law", as "Empirical" involves information derived from direct observation (as in a scientific experiment).

Other than that, I didn't catch anything while reading through. No worries about not having an editor - but kudos on reading through to catch things before posting.

I like the story so far. It is moving a a good pace and not dragged down by too much info, yet doesn't feel like any detail is being glossed over. It has some intrigue to it - stranded on a jungle planet, strange observers, mysterious father. I'm excited to see where it might lead.
 
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12.14.2009 , 10:53 PM
Thanks Kithlis, for the the review. I have several more parts written, all I need to do is edit them for what mistakes I can find and then post them. Also I'm continually writing more.

Thank you for the correction, Imperial instead of Empirical. I should have known that. I've changed it.

I'm about to post the next part, maybe two, in just a few minutes. Just a final scan through and then I'll post them.
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12.14.2009 , 11:14 PM
Part V – The Village


The night Jon had found the holocron, RC had come for him. The droid had carried Jon from the wreckage of the Eden, back to their camp. For three days Jon did nothing but eat, sleep and drink. Somehow RC had come across a nest of lizards, and Jon, for once, did not go hungry.

On the fourth day Jon rose at sunrise, feeling refreshed and rejuvenated. His heart ached for the loss of his mother, but he felt her love for him still. His apparitions had left him alone for three days, at least, ever since he had returned with RC from the crash site. RC was still not speaking to Jon and Jon did not know if Droids had feelings, or if they could be hurt. But if they did and could, Jon had hurt RC’s feelings. Jon didn’t know how to make it up to RC, but he would try.

Jon spent the day filling a pack with as much food, water and supplies as he could find. It was time to stop moping around and spend some time searching the jungle. If he was going to live here, he had to find out as much about it as he possibly could.

His plan was to walk five days north, and then return to camp. He would then refill his rations, walk five days east, and then return to camp. He would do the same thing to the south and west. The idea was to discover as much of the forest as possible without venturing too far from the camp. Ideally he would find a better, more permanent camp site. If he couldn’t find one after forty days, he would revise his search and begin anew. With his blaster holstered at his hip, he wasn’t afraid of anything the jungle had to offer him.

Jon had rigged two small communications devices from the wreckage of the Eden. He gave one to RC and instructed the droid stay at camp and to contact him only if RC encountered any danger or anyone willing to help. RC, still not speaking to Jon, had accepted the communication device silently.

“I don’t know how much energy either of these devices has, so I’ve rigged them both to power on if a signal is received from the other. So don’t turn it on unless you have to. In the mean time, I would greatly appreciate it if you gathered food and water while I am gone for my return.” RC simply looked at Jon.

“RC… thanks for looking after me.” Still silence. Jon didn’t know if the droids voice communicator was damaged or what, but he decided it best to just leave the droid be for a while.

The first trip north was cut short. Three days into the hike Jon ran across a ravine that he was unable to cross. He walked half a day to the east and half a day to the west only to find no means of traversing the ravine. And so he returned to camp two days early. If RC was surprised to see Jon back early, he did not show it. After refilling his supplies and spending the night at camp Jon set off again to the East.

On the fourth day of Jon’s journey to the east, he came across a small village. He didn’t know he was even near the village until he walked out of some very dense foliage right into the middle of it. There was no clearing, no tall or obviously sentient made structures. At first Jon wasn’t sure of what he was looking at. The small, time-worn structures looked to overgrown by jungle, and some had even collapsed. Jon’s first impression was that the villages was abandoned. But he was cautious as he slowly made his way from shelter to shelter, examining everything.

It wasn’t until he came across the first body that he began to formulate theories on what had happened to the village. The bodies looked decomposed, and most had been reclaimed by the jungle. The skeletons were definitely non human, but of a race Jon was unfamiliar with. As he continued through the village, he began to realize that it had at one time been bigger. Due to what Jon assumed was fire or some other destructive force, most of the larger structures had been destroyed. The only remaining structures were small, and would have barely served as homes for a small family.

Jon found little in the way of anything useful. Some of the homes had clay pots and dishware, but Jon had no use for these things. In others still Jon found jewelry, wooden bows and arrows, broken spears and what looked like sling shots. Finally he came to the final structure that was standing, a larger shelter that had perhaps been home to a family. He entered quietly, the cloth doorway having been shredded at some point in the past.

Passing the threshold of the home, Jon felt a pang of sadness flow through him like a wave. He did not know why he felt so sad all of a sudden, this shelter was no different than the others. There were bodies, jewelry, clay pots, even a weapon clutched in the rotting hands of one of the larger skeletons. Jon looked at this body, this organic mass that had once held life inside of it and felt a tear trickle down his cheek.

In his mind he could see the alien crouching in his home, knife in one hand held towards the doorway, the other sheltering his wife and child from the oncoming danger. This alien father had known that it was hopeless, but he would protect his family all the same. Fear and confusion ripped through the father as the destroyer violently entered the home, shredding the cloth entry away…

Jon realized that the sadness had been growing inside of him from the moment he had stepped into the camp. No, before that even. It had been growing the closer and closer he had come to the village, almost for two whole days, but he had not realized it until this very moment.

Jon picked the knife from the hands of the alien father, and found it fascinating. It was small, perhaps twenty, twenty one centimeters long, made of some strange metal and had equally strange markings on the hilt. A small part of Jon was curious how these people had manage to craft a metal knife when all the other weapons appeared to be made of wood and stone, but Jon had other things on his mind.

The sadness was beginning to overwhelm Jon as he stood there, clutching the knife. His face was now very wet and he did not understand why. Why would he care so much for these people? People he had never met, never had any kind of connection? Why would he feel so much pain at the atrocity, the massacre that had occurred in this village?

Something else besides sadness was beginning to well up inside Jon. At first he didn’t recognize it, and was confused. But then his emotions made themselves apparent as his fist tightened around the hilt of the knife: anger.

He was lost to it, consumed by it. How could someone do such a thing to a whole village of people? How could they innocently slaughter so many? Whoever had done it had been powerful. Though he did not know how or why, it seemed to Jon that there villagers had not offered much of a struggle. His anger grew.

Before Jon knew what was happening he was outside, amongst the broken, decaying village. He could barely control himself, and he needed to channel his anger somehow. Direct it at something. It was at the point of boiling over inside of him and he needed to release it. He could not direct it at the village, or any of the dead within the village, for they were innocent. They had done nothing but try to protect themselves while living the best they could. There was nothing wrong with that. Jon’s vision began to blur and he felt something growing inside him…something monstrous, something he had never known before…something called hate.

At that moment a small voice in the back of his head spoke to him calmly. How that voice could be calm at a time like this, Jon did not know. There was vengeance to be had! Jon could almost taste it on his lips, and he licked them to savor every last bit of it.

But the voice persisted, louder this time, insistent but still calm. Again, Jon asked himself, how can anyone be calm when faced with such horrible acts of evil? But his vigor began to waiver, and he began to question himself.

What was it to get so angry over? Sure, what had happened here was wrong, if his guess was even remotely close to what had actually happened. But time had passed, this could not have happened less than a decade ago, and whoever had done this was either consumed by the jungle or had left the planet. There was no vengeance to be had. And if that person was still on the planet, what service would Jon be doing to anyone by taking more life?

Jon’s vision cleared and he looked down at the dagger. He breathed slowly for a moment, and listened closely to that small voice in the back of his head. Be strong, it said to him.

Jon loosened his grip on the dagger, and turned his palm downwards to let it fall to the ground. But at the last minute, he turned his fist upward and closed his fingers around the hilt. He would keep the dagger. Not as a reminder of this village, nor as a reminder of tragedy that had occurred within it. But as a memento to his inner struggle, to his mother and her courage to help him through his darkest hours.

He left the village quickly after that, wrapping the dagger in some leather and stashing it at the bottom of his bag. He would never use it for anything except the most dire need. Anything less would be an insult to the alien father.
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12.14.2009 , 11:52 PM
Part VI – The Kill


As Jon laid on the soft, muddy ground and waited for the killing blow, he thought back to what brought him to this moment. Every decision, every action, every reaction, and so forth. Everything leading up this moment, the moment of his death. The moment he would no longer exist as he knew it. The end of the universe, for him.

He thought of the crash, he thought of the jungle, of survival and death. He thought of finding his mother’s holocron. He thought of RC, and how he felt sorry for the droid. What a terrible existence it would be for him, with the primary purpose of his programming… deleted. Jon thought back to finding the village, to the dagger in his pack. His mind returned to the day he left camp for the final time. The day he headed south.

Upon returning to the camp from the desolate village, he did not stay long. Even though Jon felt a new strength upon him, a reassurance of his will and control over his emotions, the discovery had troubled him. Jon did not feel it prudent to remain at camp for three nights, as he had before, as an interlude between expeditions. He stayed but one night at camp, restored his provisions and was off once more, this time to the south.

Before setting off for the day Jon meditated every morning. He found it helped him concentrate during the hike, and allowed him a sense of peace he did not feel otherwise. He did not know if he was even meditating properly, or if he would continue with the habit. All he knew was that he enjoyed it, and it brought him comfort.

On the final day of Jon’s excursion south, he had still not found anything of interest. He was beginning to feel that there was nothing to this jungle other than abandoned villages, trees and lizards. Plus one crashed starship, one broken down droid and one orphaned boy. He did not let this bother him though. If the jungle had nothing to offer him, he would offer nothing to the jungle. Thoughts like these are what kept him going.

Jon was about to make camp for the night and return home in the morning when he caught a particular smell on the wind. He had never thought that his sense of smell was all that great, and had really only smelled the wet, moldy jungle and nothing else for weeks. But he smelled something new, mixed in with the wet and moldy. He smelled blood.

Unsure of where the smell was coming from, he looked around in every direction. Unable to spot anything to hint of an injured animal, person or … thing, Jon was at a loss. His curiosity was aflame now, for what reason he did not know. His rational mind told him to flee. Blood was a sign of danger. But something deeper told him to investigate.

Snapping his fingers in an epiphany, Jon wet his finger and stuck it up high in the air like they did in those old holovids. Feeling the air moving across his finger, Jon could tell the wind was blowing west. So he turned and headed east, towards the source of his curiosity.

Jon almost tripped over the carcass. It seemed to rise up from the jungle floor, as if it was calling to Jon, as if it was placed there for him. How Jon had almost missed the dead beast, he did not know. It was almost two meters long and was probably three times the size of Jon himself. From the claws and teeth of the creature, Jon assumed it was a herbivore. It was large and bulky, built for strength, not speed. Examining the corpse Jon discovered several wounds. Gashes on the back of the hind legs and the throat made Jon curious. Why cut the legs? Why not go straight for the throat?

Looking at the carcass, Jon suddenly felt anxious. He quickly realized from the blood still oozing from the wounds that this was a fresh kill, and the predator that had brought this very large creature down would soon be back. Making a decision, Jon knelt down in front of the carcass and began to cut meat from the bone. If Jon was quick he could dry the meat and survive for several weeks on what would take him only a few minutes to scavenge.

As Jon worked he would wrap each piece he cut from the carcass in pieces of clothing, and carefully placed them in his bag. His anxiety grew as time went on, knowing that danger drew closer every minute he stayed. He continued stripping the carcass until his bag was full.

At last he placed the last piece into his pack and surveyed his work. One whole beefy leg of the thing was stripped down to the bone. Jon smiled to himself, stood up and brushed himself off. He began to reach for his bag when something made him freeze. It was a loud cry from directly behind him. It was the fact that the cry sounded sentient that made him freeze.

“You bastard!” Jon felt an incredible impact centered directly in the mid of his back, sending him flying forward and over the beast. He fell to the muddy ground hard, his breath knocked out of him and his face smeared with mud. Flopping over onto this back, he fought for breath and to clear his vision from the mud, his hands pawing at eyes.

“How dare you steal my kill! This is mine!” Jon had wiped enough of the mud away to be able to see blurry shapes and outlines, and he saw a figure charging towards him, coming over the beast. His sense of distance must have been off. It looked like the carcass was a good ten meters from him. He had been hit hard, but nothing the very angry hunter could have done could have hit him that hard, hard enough to send Jon flying over ten meters. The figure didn’t look much bigger than Jon himself.

“I will kill you for your thievery!” Jon, though dazed, pulled out his blaster, aimed and fired as quickly as his foggy mind and slowed reaction time would allow. The figure disappeared from Jon’s vision for a moment, and taking the opportunity he stood as quickly as possible and continued to wipe mud from his face. As Jon’s vision cleared he could not spot his attacker. Hearing something to his right, he dived forward, rolled, pulled the blaster up and fired just in time to send a blaster bolt into the jungle as the attacker knocked his weapon out of his hand and kicked him square in the chest.

Jon staggered backwards a few meters, his breath knocked out of him again. Fighting for air, he put his guard up and appraised his attacker. Surprised, he realized his attacker was a young girl, not much older than he.

She was of some race other than human, but resembled humans closely. Her skin was blue and her hair was jet black, her eyes a fiery red and her lips were pulled back over sharp fangs in an unfeminine snarl. She charged again, but this time Jon was ready for her.

She brought her foot up for another kick to the chest, but this time Jon caught it and pulled her leg upwards. She was sent flying backwards with a surprised look on her face. Jon did not hear a satisfying thud as he had expected to when she hit the ground. Instead he felt her other foot, the one he had not caught, catch him underneath his chin.

Jon had never felt his jaw break before. He had broken his wrist once, tripping over something in a space port and landing on his arm awkwardly, and that had been painful. But he had never felt physical pain like this before. His vision went black and hot sharp needles filled his entire skull full of pain. He did not remember falling on the ground, but he remembered looking up and seeing the girl hunter standing over him. She was breathing hard and looked to be favoring one of her arms. She spoke slowly.

“Now, you thieving rat, you die.” She brought her foot up over his head, and Jon waited for the darkness to return.

He thought of all the decisions that had led him to this point. All the choices he had made that had brought him to this kill site, to this girl hunter, who probably would have been kind of pretty if she didn’t have that I’m going to kill you now look on her face. If he had only stayed at camp a few days longer, or if he had walked faster or slower, or better yet, if he had simply walked away from the carcass, this never would have happened.

Jon waited for the darkness, but it never came.

“Maddi!” The boot was still held over his head, but it was unmoving now.

“Master?”

“Maddi, what are you doing?” There was silence, and Maddi withdrew her foot from above Jon’s head.

“Master, you said…”

And finally the darkness came.
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12.15.2009 , 12:42 AM
Saving thread to read later sorry for post.
Jedi Consular: Ok guys I throw some buffs ,force sleep the sith to the left and then ....
Group: eeerrrmm ....could you just heal us please?
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Joined: Mar 2009
12.15.2009 , 11:43 PM
EDIT: Holy Force, Batman, I've posted out of order! I'm not sure if anyone is reading this or noticed at all, but if you did read up to this point and were confused about what's going on, I understand! I posted part eight before part seven! What was I thinking! I feel like a nerf herder!

Part VII – The Trio


Jon’s return to consciousness was slow in coming. At first he was afraid to wake up, because the closer he came to awareness the more pain he felt. He ran from the pain, back into darkness, venturing towards wakefulness only enough to test the waters of pain.

As time went on the pain subsided, and Jon was able to return further and further into the waking world. He could tell there was movement around him, and that people were talking over him. Someone seemed angry, spiteful. Another voice was more calm, controlled. He was grateful to this calming voice, as he recognized it from the kill site. It was the voice of Maddi’s master, and the person who had saved Jon’s life.

Jon didn’t know how long it took, but it came to a point where the pain was all but gone, and he was finally able to fully wake. He opened his eyes and looked around him. He was in a small cavern lying next to a fire. There were supplies scattered about, wooden tools and clothing hanging from the walls of the cave. Given the fact that he was in a cave, everything seemed organized, clean. If a cave could be clean. He tried to sit up, but felt his head swim, so decided it best to stay put for the moment. Just as he shut his eyes to resume resting he heard voices approaching from outside the cave.

“But Master, our laws say –”

“Do not quote our laws to me, Maddi. I know them well.”

“Yes, but Master, we know nothing about this boy.”

“And he knows nothing of us. Would you have had I turn you away when you came to me?”

“No, but this is different.”

“I do not see how.”

“Well, it is though.”

“Maddi, simply saying something is so does not make it so. If you have an opinion about something, I am willing to listen. But do not make unreasonable statements without supporting facts. Understand?”

“Yes, master.”

“Good, now, our guest is awake. Let us greet him properly.” Jon had intended to feign sleep. How Maddi’s master knew he was awake, he did not know, and he opened his eyes in spite of his plan and watched as his attacker and his savior entered the small entrance to the equally small cavern.

As he remembered, Maddi was young, and was in fact prettier without a look of hatred on her face. She appeared shamed, as if having just been scolded by a teacher. In a way, it had sounded like she had. Jon would put her age at a few years older than he, perhaps fourteen, fifteen. He did not know how her race aged, however, and she could be years older or younger than that. Her master, Jon was surprised to see, was human. He looked to be perhaps forty five or fifty. As Jon looked closer he realized that the man was perhaps younger than Jon had originally guessed, but looked weathered and aged beyond his years. How old the man really was Jon did not know. He was dressed in a simple brown tunic and trousers and carried nothing with him other than a beard and a long ponytail.

“It is good to see you… still alive, space boy.” Maddi’s words seemed forced. Jon tried to reply, but found that pain occurred every time he attempted to open his mouth to speak. Maddi and her Master sat down next to the fire at opposing angles from Jon, forming a circle around the warmth.

“Easy, young man. I have done what I can to heal the injuries you and Maddi caused to one another, but your jaw has not yet fully healed. It will take several days, I believe, before you are able to speak again.” Jon nodded gently, afraid his head would swim once more.

“What you did, out in the jungle, was very brave, though very foolish. From your clothes and blaster I can tell you must have just recently crashed on this planet. Did anyone else on your ship survive the crash?” Jon shook his head. The man lowered his head and gazed into the fire.

“My condolences for you loss, young one.” Maddi was silent, watching Jon carefully. The man motioned towards Maddi.

“This is Maddi, she is my apprentice. We reign from a village about a month’s journey south of here. It is a small village, of mixed heritage and origins, but we are happy. It is custom that, once a master takes an apprentice, the two are exiled from the village for an undetermined period of time. For some, it takes years, others, decades. Maddi has been studying under me for five years now.”

Jon nodded, looking from Maddi back to her master. Maddi remained silent, unmoved by what her master was saying.

“Among my people I have no name, some such as Maddi call me Master. Others only speak to me directly without labeling me. For the moment it is a non issue, for you are mute for the time being. We will cross that bridge when we come to it.” Jon nodded again, unsure of where this was going. As the man spoke a sense of calm was washing over Jon, easing his fears and settling his anxieties.

“We would like to extend an offer for you to stay with us, until you are fully healed.” Maddi glanced at her master for the briefest of moments before returning her eyes to Jon.

“It is a harsh jungle out there, and your wounds will take time to heal. Once you are able to speak, perhaps you will tell us the story of how you came to be on this planet. Until then we ask only that you respect our home like you would your own.”

And so it went for several days. Jon was on his feet quicker than he had thought, and to his surprise, the cave was bigger than it had seemed at first. The room that he had awoken in was only a small part of a larger structure of caverns and passageways. At first it was a little confusing, finding his way around, but after a while he was easily able to walk in and out of the cave without more than a second thought.

Even though most of the time he was not alone, Maddi and her master tended to give Jon a wide birth. They spoke to him little and mostly just to offer food and water throughout the day. Jon found eating almost as difficult as speaking, but his hosts had the foresight to serve him mostly stew or soup. On the morning of the fourth day of Jon’s recovery, Jon felt strong enough to go for a walk in the jungle. He left his room and the cave without seeing either Maddi or her master, and taking careful note of landmarks and trail markers, set off into the dense greenery.

It felt good to walk amongst the damp trees and plants once more. The cave was damp as well, but it wasn’t the same. The air felt more alive outside. He breathed the wet, musky air in deeply and sighed, releasing some pent up energy that had been gathering during his stay in the cave. As he walked amongst the trees Jon realized he had forgotten any form of weapon. Though this made him anxious, he assumed that most major predators had learned to avoid the territory surrounding the cave.

But still, Jon did not travel far from the cave. After about an hour of casual walking, Jon found a small clearing with a large mound of blue moss in the centered in the middle of the clearing. Laying down on top of the soft, cool fungus, Jon closed his eyes and meditated.

Clearing his mind completely, he focused on his breathing. He imagined with each intake of breath he was drawing energy from the forest around him, and with each exhale he was letting go of negative energies and emotions. For a long time he sat like this, feeling the life around him. The small, hurried animals scurrying around the large unmoving trees. After a while Jon thought he could almost feel the insects as well, buzzing, crawling and slithering all around him. The life around Jon danced, strived, warred against itself but mostly it grew. He could feel the trees stretching upwards, branches reaching outwards and upwards to catch as much sunlight as possible.

He sensed more than heard someone enter the clearing and sit down at the edge of the trees facing him. He could sense some hostility from this person, but felt no immediate threat so he stayed motionless, breathing deeply and continuing to imagine the connection around him. After several hours of sitting like this with the hostile person watching him, waiting, Jon opened his eyes and saw Maddi sitting across from him.

“I see you’re feeling better.” Jon nodded, not quite ready to test his speech as of yet. Maddi continued staring into his eyes, as if searching his soul. She was silent for a long time, and after a while Jon felt the hostility surrounding her fade.

“I’m sorry I attacked you.” Jon shook his head, pointing to himself and then back to her.

“I know you’re sorry for taking what wasn’t yours. But you were doing what you had to survive. For all you know, some animals had killed the yelik.” Jon listened to Maddi, and cocked to his head to one side when she had finished speaking.

“Oh, a yelik is that grazer that we were fighting over. They’re big and slow but really smart and hard to kill. They actually burrow below the roots of trees and eat the fruits that grow at the top. The one that you found I had managed to catch on the forest floor during a rare migration from tree to tree.” She smiled, proud of herself for catching the creature in a moment of weakness. The smile faded quickly though, and she shook her head.

“But I couldn’t have done it without Master teaching me about how to find which trees have yeliks, and how to tell when they are getting ready to move to another tree.” Jon could only nod, fascinated at how quickly Maddi had opened up to him. He found himself a little mesmerized by her words, her singsong voice such a contrast to what it had been when she had attacked him.

“Are you able to speak yet?” She looked at him quizzically, and Jon shook his head.

“Have you tried? You’ll never speak again if you don’t try.” Jon looked at her for a moment before he opened his mouth to speak.

“Thank… thank you for letting me stay with you.” Maddi beamed, her sharp teeth pearly white. Jon found that it caused him no pain to speak, and that he liked her smile.

“See that wasn’t so hard. Come, let’s find Master so you may tell him your story.”
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