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Kyneris
05.06.2014 , 09:05 PM | #171
I would like to invite everyone who has posted (or is thinking about posting here) to do this Mary Sue character test. I'm curious to see how it turns out.

The character in my signature scored a 31.
"Should we arrive at certainty without doubt and truth without error, it behooves us to place the foundations of knowledge in mathematics." - Roger Bacon
This is Vireth Danea, my Sith OC.

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Saroush
05.08.2014 , 10:31 AM | #172
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I would like to invite everyone who has posted (or is thinking about posting here) to do this Mary Sue character test. I'm curious to see how it turns out.

The character in my signature scored a 31.
Love that test! I got 53.

"Kestra Phana is suspiciously similar to you as you'd like to be. She may be popular, or she may not, but no matter what she's impossible to ignore; she stands out... just the way you always wanted to. There's never been anything special about her that she could see; boy, is she in for a surprise. She's come in for her share of hurt, but gotten off with minor damage. And you've been pretty kind to her, always ready to intercede on her behalf and give her a nice easy victory.

You may have let yourself get a little too close to Kestra Phana. Maybe she's you as you wish you were, or maybe you're just afraid no one will like her and are trying to give her a free ride. Have some confidence in your writing! Kestra Phana is a good character. Give her room to be herself before you stifle her."

I'll take it. After all, isn't that the whole point of RP? Pretending to be the person I always wanted to be?

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Sithke
06.12.2014 , 10:49 PM | #173
Species/Race: Human
Name: Anstadyl
Middle Name: Ewan
Last Name: Kenebi
Nickname: Cuts
Gender:Male
Age:31
Place of Birth: Alderean(Err spelling I am unsure of lol)
Height: 6'2
Weight: 196 LBS
Hair Color/Style: Black, Long, very well kept
Facial Appearance: Light scar along the right side of his face, large Havoc symbol tattoo on right side
Eye Color: Bluey Grey
Body Appearance: Large, muscalar
Home Planet: Alderan
Current Residence: None
Allegiance: Chaotic Neutral(Really on the Pub side)
Profession: Armormech
Armor/Clothes: Heavy Armor, sorta like Bounty Hunter armor (CM)
Primary Weapon(s): Esseles Autocannon(Upgraded
Secondary Weapon(s): Sheild Generator
Miscellaneous Item(s): Pistol(Cutscenes only)

Biography:Anstadyl 'Cuts' Kenebi is a former lietenant in the Republic Military. Two years ago, Cuts was taken as a prisoner of war. Tortured for two weeks, Cuts was rescued when a small squad of elites raided the base he was in. They sent a Medical Evac team to get him back to safety. Once there, exstensive medical procedures were needed to heal his many ailments including, many large cuts on his right foot that had become infected, 4 broken ribs, a broken femur, a broken nose, lung failure, 6 broken phalanges, broken ankles, and many other things. Unwilling to pay, the Republic drugged him and left him to die when a mysterious donor left enough credits to buy all the bacta and treatments needed. Cuts right foot had to be amputated, but there was enough credits left over to buy a top of the line bionic one. Having fully recovered, Cuts left the military. He drifted around till he helped found a shipping company.

Sorry for the bad spelling, but I really cant spell

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Sithke
06.12.2014 , 10:57 PM | #174
Quote: Originally Posted by Kyneris View Post
I would like to invite everyone who has posted (or is thinking about posting here) to do this Mary Sue character test. I'm curious to see how it turns out.

The character in my signature scored a 31.
I got a 19. Not sure on the whole score system here. Is it like golf or football?

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Grievesmad
07.27.2014 , 08:50 AM | #175
Species/Race: Miraluka
Name: Brykh
Middle Name: N/A
Last Name: Artosis
Nickname: N/A
Gender: Male
Date of Birth: 28 April
Place of Birth: Alderaan
Age: 19
Height: 1.4 meters
Weight: 30 kg
Hair Color/Style: Reddish-brown , short
Facial Appearance: Scorching across side of face from lightsaber attack
Eye Color: Mask is just a patchwork rag
Body Appearance: Thin and small
Home Planet: Alderaan
Current Residence: Nomadic
Allegiance: Empire
Profession: Assassin , Interrogator , Imperial Reclamation Service Officer , Sith
Armor/Clothes: Suit of armour greatly increasing stature with respirator mask.
Primary Weapon(s): Electrostaff (Green)
Secondary Weapon(s): Sabrestaff (Orange)
Miscellaneous Item(s): Force Focus , Cybernetic right hand , implants to reduce deterioration of body.

Biography: Born into a family of powerful Miralukans , Brykh became a schemer from intoductions to the nobles they had mind-wiped. Became an apprentice on Korriban after training in Mentalism for most of his life. His master cut off his hand as punishment for his arrogance. He searched up rituals from Tatooine and Balmorra for use on Nar Shaddaar where his family used these rituals on him. He began suffering madness and severe Dark Side corruption and eventually needed his Exosuit filled with Kalcta (solution of Kolto and Bacta , canon) to stay alive.

Likes : Suicide , Insanity , Aliens , Scheming , Power
Dislikes : Rationality , Mercy , Purebloods , Humans , Humility , Giving up Power , Anti-alien Sentiment

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Xakthul
07.28.2014 , 09:20 AM | #176
That guy is one f*cked up individual, Grieves
Duelist Mixalot, Grand Champ Tellsa, Lord Saml, Apprentice Syynx, Captain Cirris, Skirmisher Janewei, Jedi Knight Jugger'not, Agent Ez'zio of <Wookies and Cream>, Harbinger
"Aim for the trolls! Kill the trolls!"- Gandalf

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Meoix
07.31.2014 , 07:01 PM | #177
Species/Race: Human
Name: Junč
Middle Name: Barlokov
Last Name: Denora
Gender: Female
Date of Birth: 23 BTC
Place of Birth: Alderaan
Age: 24
Height: 170 cm (5' 7")
Weight: 62 kg (137 lbs)
Hair Color/Style: Dark Violet (Dyed, Black Natural), usually in a ponytail, though will let her hair out when relaxing.
Facial Appearance: Light fair complexion, no scars, freckles.
Eye Color: Light blue
Body Appearance: Small yet muscular frame
Home Planet: Coruscant
Current Residence: Tiny bare apartment on Coruscant
Allegiance: Loyal to the Republic
Profession: Republic military commando
Armor/Clothes: White Republic military armour. When not in service she'll rarely wear anything fancy, usually something simple like a blue t-shirt and slacks.
Primary Weapon(s): Assault rifle
Secondary Weapon(s): Pistol
Miscellaneous Item(s): Simple silver pendant in the shape of a dragon's claw around her neck. The claw holds a green marble.

Biography:
Junč's mother died in child birth. Her father, Jack Barlokov, once a member of the SIS, raised her as best he could. During missions he'd leave her mostly alone or watched by a fellow officer due to the frequency of urgent missions during the war. Much of this time was on various star ships or space stations. Moving around constantly she had few friends and focused her time studies.

Due to his high risk missions in the SIS, Junč's father worried about someone taking advantage of his still young daughter, so he taught her self-defense and how to use firearms.
Once Junč hit 16 however, her father was killed during an infiltration mission by the Sith.

Junč decided to follow her father's footsteps, though not in search of vengeance, but to protect those who still have loved ones to lose. She entered the Republic military, where she excelled even more then she did in the classroom. She was eventually picked out for accelerated training and special programs. She was eventually hand picked to join a commando unit serving in the Republic military.

She left what she had of her life behind to fight. She has a simple one room apartment on Coruscant now, the furniture includes a desk, a chair, a bed, and a mini-fridge. Her simple bare room mirrors her life outside of combat.
"That's just my opinion though, don't go spreading it around."

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Sylverstream
08.29.2014 , 07:53 AM | #178
Species/Race: Human (Cyborg)
Name: Mec'anical
Middle Name:
Last Name: Light-Shatter
Nickname:
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Height: 6'1''
Weight: 68kg
Hair Color/Style: Shoulder length black hair
Facial Appearance: Rounded but not chubby, smooth skinned
Eye Color: Blue, glows very slightly. Known to change to brown or red when angry.
Body Appearance: Slender
Current Residence: Nar Shaddaa
Allegiance: Empire
Profession: Biochemstry, constantly working on new med packs and stims for herself and her allies.
Armor/Clothes: Light armor. usually robes of some variant. Always wears a cloak or cape.
Primary Weapon(s): Force powers, naturally quite adept but does have the occasionally tenancy to loose control.
Secondary Weapon(s): Purple Lightsaber
Miscellaneous Item(s): Has neuro-implants increasing her ability to sense movement around her and to pick up on hormones changes, implants made by herself. (Could classify her a cyborg, unsure at the moment.)

Biography: This is where i'm struggling, I can't think of a back story other then what is listed, needing help desperately if anyone is able to offer some advice could they quote my post please. Thank you!

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CombriLace
09.02.2014 , 01:41 PM | #179
BIO:

Name: Giambattista
Gender: Female
Race: Chiss
Home Planet: Csilla
Age: 19

Physical Appearance:
Hair Color: Black
Hair Style: Bun, with two loose strands framing her face.
Facial Appearance: Described as being "childishly pretty" or "Jedi pretty". Light dusting of freckles on her face.
Skin Color: Dark blue
Height: 5’11”
Body Appearance: Looks as if a breeze could carry her back to Csilla. She uses this too her advantage.

Affiliation: Sith Order, The Sith Empire.

Class: Sith Warrior
Advanced Class: Sith Marauder
Moral/Force Alignment: Chaotic Good/Light Side

Equipment:
Weapons: Twin Single-Bladed Lightsabers
Clothing: Giambattista wears what she calls an elegant "loungewear top". Her master laughs and calls her a w***e. She also wears skin tight leggings she found during her time with the Order of Revan, in faded, scrawling text they read "Mission Vao" on the waistband. Her gloves and belt are from Csilla; and glow a comforting green on their edges.

Personal Ship: Fury-class Interceptor (Fondly called the Tin Coffin)

Personality: Giambattista is reasonable but impatient. While she is more than willing to negotiate for peaceful solutions, she does not give in and refuses to have anything but her own way; her negotiation boils down to "compromise but in my favour". Her temper can be ruthless and nigh on endless but is difficult to unleash. Shes honest and blunt in a manner that often gets her in trouble, particularly with Baras.

She hopelessly cares for her companions; a rather motherly, or older sisterly love for Vette and an adoration and admiration for her best friend, Treek.

Biography: Giambattista was born to House Sabosen, one of the Ruling Families of the Chiss Ascendency but was given to the Sith Order shortly after her birth. The Overseers know of her roots, but have never told her. As far as she knows she was born in Csaplar and given to the Sith shortly after.

She noted quickly as a child that she didn't fit in with the other Sith. Her anger didn't fill her, or grow to hate as it did with the others. On the rare occasions it did, it did not make her feel strong like the Overseers said; it made her feel weak. She felt at her strongest when she let the negative emotions flow out of her. When she was 7, she attempt to convey this to Overseer Andala and spent the next ten minutes in the Overseer's lightning grip.

By the time she was 10, she was at the top of all her classes and managed to rebuke every attempt her class mates made to out do her or take her out. It was around this time that the Overseers began to talk about one of her Sith ancestors and that it was a shame she had not inherited the glorious red skin. She doubted their claims of this ancestors; everything in her screamed Chiss but she said nothing, especially when she saw the fear and hate directed at her by her classmates.

When she was fourteen, she made her first kill. Another girl, a Twi'lek slave-turned-Sith named Byn attacked her in her rooms after a hard training session when she was most tired. It was the first time she truly understood the masters' want and need for power. The kill had felt good, and made her feel powerful and unstoppable.

She spent the next 3 days throwing up, much to the anger and frustration of her masters.

On her 17th birthday, Overseer Tremel summoned her to Korriban.

She meets Evangleon Daniel on Nar Shadaa and the two hit off. They feel like they've known each other for long then they have. He teaches her Cheunh, and tell her about life growing up in the Ascendency. When they have to part, they keep in contact. Evangleon never tells her that he's her brother.


SKILLS AND TALENTS:

Skilled Lightsaber Combatant: Being a Sith Marauder, Giambattista is very skilled with her signature Twin Lightsabers. Given her choice of weapons, it’s no surprise that she has become an expert in the Ataru form, which is much better-suited to Two Lightsabers than the other seven Forms.

Negotiation: Despite what her training attempted to instill in her, Giambattista, is an excellent negotiator. This has led her to be invaluable to Darth Baras, and has also allowed to out maneuver him and grab for power.


COMPANION CHARACTERS:
Malavai Quinn
Treek
Evangleon Daniel (Chiss Male, Imperial Intelligence Engineer Sniper. Also known as Cipher Seven.)

CREW SKILLS:
Slicing
Synthweaving
Archaeology

SUPPLEMENTARY INFO:
Voice Actors/Actresses:
Giambattista: Tara Strong (Rikku in Final Fantasy X, Harley Quinn)
Evangleon: Bertie Carvel (Actual Imperial Agent voice actor)


Soundtrack:
Main Theme/Fight Fight Fight!: Immigration Song by Led Zepplin
Giambattista & Evangleon Theme: Hey Brother by Avicii
Ambition and Power Climb: Anything by Hedley
Overcoming the Impossible: Merchant Prince by Thomas Bergersen
Seduction is a Perfect Weapon: Cockiness by Rihanna
Darth Femme Fatale: Oh No! by Marina and the Diamonds
Exploration and Relaxation: Short Change Hero by The Heavy


Chiss - Carnage Marauder - Giambattista


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colmatrix
09.21.2014 , 05:43 PM | #180
Name: Jeskus Mordo

Nickname/Call sign: Kingpin

Gender: Male

Species/Race: Human

Place of Birth: Coruscant

Age: 27

Height: 170 cm

Weight: 90 kg

Hair Color/Style: Dark brown, he cuts them short, but not too much. He also combs them in a stylish way, which is rare amongst Republic military.

Facial Appearance: He recently grew a beard and has a scar on his right eye.

Eye Color: Dark brown

Physical Appearance:

«Too bad you won’t join our side soldier; I could definitely use someone by my side with your … looks… Mordo…

- Darth Rhega, a Sith Sorceress and one of Jeskus’ many nemesis»


Pretty strongly built, Jeskus is very large and imposing. With arms as big as a rancor’s, he looks like he could tear through a Destroyer ship by himself. Mordo has seen many battles and warzones, which results in him having a few scars over his body. The easiest one to spot is the one he has on his right eye. It happened after his first duel with a Sith, Darth Erakis.

He has a small nose, a nice smile and eyes that seem like they could look through your soul. Jeskus is usually described as very good looking and he is very proud of it. He stands straight all the time and has an eternal smile on his lips, even while his most dangerous ops. Sometimes he is seen smoking one of his cigars. In conclusion, Jeskus Mordo is someone who is hard to miss, especially amongst the Republic army.

Armor/Clothes: When he is not in of his imposing combat armor, Mordo is seen wearing stylish clothing made by the best tailors of the galaxy. He takes great pride in always looking at his best. Even his armor has something classy to it.

Primary Weapon(s): He is usually seen fighting with a powerful and heavily modified blaster rifle.

Secondary Weapon(s): On his hip, he carries an also modified blaster pistol. Hidden in his vest is his trusty vibro-knife he calls ‘’Mister Stabby’’

Home Planet: Coruscant

Current Residence: He has homes all over the Galaxy, but resides most often in his Valor-class cruiser

Allegiance: The Republic

Profession: ‘’Hero of the Republic’’ as he likes to say, although it is true, we could also say he is a professional soldier.

Biography:

« Free spirited, arrogant, stubborn and way too much self-confident, this is what we call a Republic hero these days?

- General Garza on Jeskus’ recent fame»


Born on Coruscant, son to a rich business man and woman, Jeskus spent his early years in luxury. He received one of the best educations you could find in the Republic and led a very good life. Mordo was a very promising young man and his parents had great hopes for the future of Mordo Industries, since they planned on giving him everything after their deaths. Jeskus’ father, Hanar Mordo, made sure he could defend himself since he was very paranoid and afraid his competitors or employees would try to rob them at any time. He made sure he was trained in hand to hand combat and marksmanship by the very best instructors.

Landa, his mother, preferred he pursued more intellectual and artistic activities. He played a little music and read many books. By the time he was sixteen, he had quite the baggage. He had visited many planets and lived more in his few years than many people in their entire life. Jeskus always had trouble with his love life, never able to find a girl to love him back, which made him a little distant when it came to intimacy. But he never had any trouble finding friends; he is a very charismatic and agreeable man.

Jeskus’ parents died in a horrific car accident a few months after he turned seventeen. The Coruscant police couldn’t find any evidence of it, but it was strongly implied the accident was staged by Imperial Assassins, since Hanar was an outspoken enemy of the Empire and the Sith. Mordo Industries were taken over by an unscrupulous associate of Hanar, a Twi’lek named Mak Fede. He found an error in Jeskus’ parents’ will and used it to take everything from him.

Of course, Jeskus had some money, a small fortune as a matter of fact, but only a fraction of what he deserved. With absolutely no idea of what to do with his life, he decided to enlist in the republic military, even if he was underage to fight. The idea came from one of his childhood friend, a girl named Eva Callo. She came from a humbler family and didn’t have any other option, for it was hard to find a decent job in her part of Coruscant.

They joined in together, but with the kind of formation and education Mordo had received, it was clear to the Lieutenant who signed him in the military that he would be wasting his potential by sending him in the Republic’s rank and file. That is how Jeskus was enlisted in the Republic Special Forces division.

Even there he excelled, his private formation made him ready for just about anything the instructors could throw at him. He got out of the academy top of his class and was promoted to the rank of Sergeant. Sent to be the newest rookie in one of the Republic’s most famous Special Forces Squad, Havoc Squad, Mordo couldn’t have been any more proud.

What happened during his time with Havoc Squad is classified, and not much is known about it to this day. What the people know is only that he ended up being the squad’s CO only a few days after he integrated the Special Forces. He then embarked on a journey all around the galaxy that caused… well, Havoc, in the Sith Empire. Jeskus and his squad earned great fame during these days.

Although a pretty unconventional one, Mordo is one of the Republic’s most valiant defenders. It is important not to mix his fun-seeking way with unprofessionalism or treachery. He is actually quite the patriot and knows when it is the time to be serious. After Havoc, Jeskus led many operations all around the galaxy.

He stopped Darth Rhega’s forces from sacking the city of Hanak on Alderaan although he was outnumbered three to one. He clashed with Rhega’s forces many times since then. Another one of his enemies is Grand Moff Okk Kalders. Kalders and Mordo trained together in the Special Forces Academy, they used to be best friends until Kalders defected, along with many others of the Special Forces. Driven nearly insane by his Sith superiors, Kalders vowed to destroy Jeskus.

Drifting from operation to operation, Mordo never truly found a stable place in any unit after Havoc. He still has a powerful hatred for the Sith Empire and a desire to bring the fight to them. Mordo has been a great help to every operation he has been in, and although he feels ready to take command of a greater force, his quick temper has prevented him from earning any real promotion recently.

Note: The biography is a summary of Jeskus’ life, many short stories will come.