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Knightless: A Jedi Knight Alternate Universe

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Knightless: A Jedi Knight Alternate Universe

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kabeone
09.09.2012 , 07:30 PM | #1
This is about what the SW:TOR Galaxy would be if the Jedi Knight in the story line never became a Jedi but everything else that was going to happen tried to happen anyway. It is both a collection of short stories and a comic book.

If you are familiar with Remi the Grey this is the same character except she never becomes a Jedi. I am also attempting to draw this as I go so you get to see me stumble through that. Feel free to comment/critique anything.

Index of Comic pages from my Art Thread:
The Prologue That Wasn't: Cover, Page 1, Page 2, Page 3, Page 4, Page 5

Prologue

A Dish Best Served Cold: Story, Cover, Page 1, Page 2, Page 3, Page 4, Page 5

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kabeone
09.09.2012 , 07:49 PM | #2
The Prologue that Wasn’t
Reposted and edited from short fic. This is the origin story for Remi the Grey.

No Spoilers
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Comic Pages from Art Thread
Cover, Page 1, Page 2

Comic Script up to page 2 (derp)
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Morgani
09.09.2012 , 11:57 PM | #3
Excited and subscribed.

(Oh is that what that button is for?)

Will there be pictures?
Be to her Virtues
very Kind.
Be to her Faults
a little Blind.

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kabeone
09.10.2012 , 12:06 AM | #4
The links to the pictures are in the first post. I post them up in my art thread. I'm just linking them here because they're going to get spread out everywhere.

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SveinEternity
09.10.2012 , 05:58 PM | #5
I am so excited for more! I love your pictures too! I really like the one with Coremi's mother. It looks sweet when she assinates that dude.
The Eternity Legacy

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kabeone
09.10.2012 , 07:20 PM | #6
Quote: Originally Posted by SveinEternity View Post
I am so excited for more! I love your pictures too! I really like the one with Coremi's mother. It looks sweet when she assinates that dude.
Thanks! I am slow though... at my best I can do only one page a day. Yikes and I have the attention span of a... thing with a really short attention span... what was I saying?

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kabeone
09.11.2012 , 01:27 PM | #7
The Prologue That Wasn't Comic Script Page 3

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Comic Page 3 in FanArt thread

Notes:
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bright_ephemera
09.11.2012 , 04:57 PM | #8
Squee! I've been checking out the pages as they come up, now I have proper time to sit down and focus on cri-ooh shiny objects over there

I mean, um.

First off, I like how recognizable the models from game are. Both character appearances and clothes (love Selena's jacket!).

Spacing and overlay on panels is good...it's one of those things you don't often notice until it gets screwed up. And for heaven's sake, you actually work with a natural reading/gaze-flow pattern down the page. Page 3 in particular just leads the eye exactly where it needs to go. Easy to follow.

Ooh, I like the zone map in background of the rebel base!

In conclusion, yay!
the Short Fic Weekly Challenge - 70+ authors to date. 1900+ stories. New prompts weekly!
Bright's Fanfic Threads
Forever Shenanigans!
Ceterum autem censeo, Malavai esse delendam.

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kabeone
09.14.2012 , 09:08 AM | #9
@bright_ephemera Thanks for the feedback. I'm terrible at layout and color so I keep looking at other comic books going how do they figure out to DO that.

The Prologue That Wasn't Comic Script Page 4

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Comic Page 4 in FanArt thread

Notes:
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Earthmama
09.14.2012 , 09:36 AM | #10
Love it! Keep em coming Kabe!