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Remi the Grey


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kabeone
07.09.2012 , 07:28 PM | #81
Epilogue

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bright_ephemera
07.09.2012 , 08:52 PM | #82
Excellently done! Almost every line of A New Bargain made me cheer even harder. Great read, through and through.
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Earthmama
07.09.2012 , 09:02 PM | #83
Aaah love! Every moment, You really had me guessing if Scourge would betray her. Beautiful work!! Bravo!

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Kalterien
07.09.2012 , 11:18 PM | #84
OMG... that was both sweet and well.. wow..

I'm sorry it had to end but that was an incredible read. Thank you.
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kabeone
07.11.2012 , 06:39 PM | #85
Thanks for reading and all the kind comments.

This and the Short Fic thread is the first time I've written anything that wasn't a technical manual in over a decade. It was so much fun that when I woke up yesterday and did not have anything to write it made me pretty sad. I was also drawing a blank for this week's writing prompt, though I did already post something. So this morning I woke up and I wanted to continue the story. I decided to keep posting to this thread because I don't want to clutter up the forums, though if anyone thinks I should make a new thread I welcome the input. I really don't know forum etiquette for this kind of thing.

As the line goes, "Happy endings are just stories that haven't finished yet."

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kabeone
07.11.2012 , 06:43 PM | #86
Part 2.1 More Wrath

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kabeone
07.11.2012 , 06:45 PM | #87
Part 2.2 The Hand

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kabeone
07.11.2012 , 06:54 PM | #88
Part 2.3 About a Boy

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Kalterien
07.11.2012 , 07:51 PM | #89
O__o

That is all...
"Bow before me, or fall before me." - Daigotsu Kanpeki
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kabeone
07.12.2012 , 03:06 AM | #90
Quote: Originally Posted by Kalterien View Post
O__o

That is all...
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