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In the Shadows - A Smuggler's Tale

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In the Shadows - A Smuggler's Tale

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Achraya
03.11.2012 , 07:09 PM | #21
Just read through the story and must say I liked it a lot. Your Smuggler had a nice personality, believable for what we know of the character and yet still unique, and I was always interested in where the story was going next.

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silvershadows
03.11.2012 , 11:25 PM | #22
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Just read through the story and must say I liked it a lot. Your Smuggler had a nice personality, believable for what we know of the character and yet still unique, and I was always interested in where the story was going next.
Thanks, I tried to keep the personalities of all characters true to the personalities they had in the game. I was mostly worried about the npc's I used and whether or not I was writing them correctly (Corso in particular though I've seen him rage quite a bit because he was my sole companion on my smuggler, wasn't sure how many people have played through the game in its entirety using only him, and Doc as well).

I do plan on writing sequels though, so if you were interested in where the story was going, there will be more to come, after I finish writing this Mandalorian story
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03.16.2012 , 06:39 PM | #23
Prologue, first chapter, and first part of chapter two of the next story done
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silvershadows
04.01.2012 , 09:10 AM | #24
Just bumping this up in preparation for my new story which should be coming in the next couple days. Granted, it isn't the sequel to this (will be working on that later!) but I'd like my stories somewhat close together

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SpoeMeister
04.02.2012 , 07:30 AM | #25
Simply amazing! I had goosebumps at some points of the story. And I liked how you gave an open ending with the baby, possibly being a very powerful user of the dark side.

Can't wait for your next one! Be sure to post here when it's ready with link, so I can find it easily!!
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04.02.2012 , 07:01 PM | #26
Spectacular!!!! You've even incouraged me to write one with my characters. Maybe ill post it if i ever get done with it.
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silvershadows
04.02.2012 , 07:30 PM | #27
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Simply amazing! I had goosebumps at some points of the story. And I liked how you gave an open ending with the baby, possibly being a very powerful user of the dark side.

Can't wait for your next one! Be sure to post here when it's ready with link, so I can find it easily!!

Thank you very much

The next story is tentatively titled "Mandalorian Vacation" (subject to change lol, because that title sounds lighthearted and the story really is anything but) and features my bounty hunter. I will be posting it here on the fanfic forums, and then I will probably be asking people which characters they find the most interesting and would like to read more about

Darth Umbral is probably my favorite next to my bounty hunter, and I have a few ideas swirling through my head regarding her child and it's future
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silvershadows
04.02.2012 , 07:33 PM | #28
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Spectacular!!!! You've even incouraged me to write one with my characters. Maybe ill post it if i ever get done with it.
Thank you as well

And you should write one.

I have a hard time reading other people's stories if they involve the companion characters I've written about, only because in my mind they belong with my characters, LOL!

However, the more that people find their imaginations sparked, the more people find the urge to write about their characters, the more fun stories there are for people to enjoy.

It's my dream to write professionally for the Star Wars extended universe, wish I had half a clue how to get into it, lol!
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RepublicGurl
04.02.2012 , 09:34 PM | #29
So awesome! You got Doc's character spot on! He's one of my fave companions, and I love the bickering between him and Kira.

Please tell me he'll be in a sequel??
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SpoeMeister
04.03.2012 , 07:21 AM | #30
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Thank you very much

The next story is tentatively titled "Mandalorian Vacation" (subject to change lol, because that title sounds lighthearted and the story really is anything but) and features my bounty hunter. I will be posting it here on the fanfic forums, and then I will probably be asking people which characters they find the most interesting and would like to read more about

Darth Umbral is probably my favorite next to my bounty hunter, and I have a few ideas swirling through my head regarding her child and it's future
Well, I am no writer but if you need an extra BH character in your story, I have a lightsided Bounty Hunter called Orrusos. If you want pics or a background, just ask. I think he'd be honored to help out fellow mandalorians :-)
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