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05.06.2009
, 05:31 PM
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Back to square one! I know, I know... how could I start all over after doing all that work? I mean, we're talking about throwing away about 8 hours of work here. How could I do that? No seriously... how?
Well, you may not realise it at first glance, but these few simple alterations of form are going to completely transform the entire picture. For one, they'll correct the hip issue. And because of that, the knee will fall right into place. Lastly, it will fix that whole "top heavy" issue. Essentially, the character will appear thinner and much more sleek and agile - which was the original idea. To do this took some figuring.
You see, the pose is not as straight forward as it appears to be, since there is a twist involved. And because of that, there are vanishing points to consider, horizon lines, and foundation or "strength" lines. Yes. All of those things you wouldn't think would be involved in a picture so simple.... effect everything! Trace your eyes with me for a moment.
The center line that goes from the top of the head, down to the bottom of the legs - that is the most important line of the picture! It's the strength line - her center of gravity. Everything plays off of that. Luckily, it's pretty simple to identify and not mess up (for this picture anyway.)
The Black lines are my alteration lines. The long one that splits the character in half is the horizon line - which is where the vanishing point plays from. You'll notice that there are other black lines coming from that which create a triangle. This little simple thing is why the hip and the knee were so hard to fix - they weren't drawn on the correct plane. You can see the underlying sketch beneath it. By comparing the two, you can clearly see where my problems occurred.
Lastly, her chest was slightly reconfigured. Oh so very slightly! Basically, the reason she appeared top heavy, was because the width of her shoulders was wider than her pelvis - which for a female, gives her a very masculine appearance. But it's not just as simple as lessening the gap a bit. No, the line on the top of the chest, is the collar bone. It must meet the vanishing point - which is indicated where the two longer lines at the bottom meet. See? Now... pay attention in art class next time! These "useless lessons" we all take for granted, are important!
Oh! How close I was to just eyeballing this stuff. So close... yet so very, very far away.... Now, I am being a good artist - discovering my mistakes, and more importantly, discovering how to fix them!
BAM! Problem's solved, friends!
I skipped a lot of "steps" here for the sake of space and time. But generally, a lot of cutting and pasting was involved... and a whole lot of just general line drawing. Now tell me, honestly - doesn't this look better?
Anyway, I kept the blouse in front of her hip on purpose. Even though I used it originally as a way to cover my mistake... I actually liked how it looked. So... I kept it! HAHA! Also, I kept all the other things I added because they ended up being awesome costume ideas. Let this be a lesson to you - mistakes.... can be useful!
Now comes the coloring... again. I think at this point I should say something important. Never be afraid to start all over if you have to. It's not as bad as it seems, and you'll thank yourself in the long run. Let this be another lesson to you aspiring artists.... DO NOT TRY TO FAKE YOUR TALENT! Always do your best. In the end, you'll appreciate the picture and yourself!
Anyway, I'm usuing the same colors I used from my initial coloring process. I really liked them, for the most part, but I also knew I didn't want to use black as a way to scale light and shadow. What to do?
Lastly, I would like to explore with you what I'm thinking about when I am drawing this character. I already had a "history" for her, and it wouldn't be fair to say that anything I added to the original concept of the picture, had nothing to with that history. On the contrary, it had everything to with it!
See, she's a Jedi, but she is more of an empathy based Jedi - she is a healer. But she also hasn't gone through a lot of formal training. She started it, but then because of her past, she sort of had to figure a lot of things out on her own. So, a lot of her costuming was brought into play to give her character more life. Don't get me wrong, I probably wouldn't have thought about these costume ideas had I not caught my mistakes.
But, in fixing those mistakes, whatever I added or altered, I knew had to fall in line with that story. I couldn't very well draw something on her that made no sense, whether I was hiding poorly drawn art or not - see what I mean? For instance, instead of Padawan Braids, I could have just drawn her a jet pack. But... I mean... it has nothing to do with who she is - therefore, I had to make sure whatever I did, made sense.
I gave her Padawan Braids, because she is still something of a Padawan - she is still learning about the Force. I gave her a blouse (like a robe) instead of a vest, because a vest would sort of give her too much of a rouge look (and she's trying to hold on to her Jedi heritage.) Besides, I already implied her being something of a rogue with the gloves (sort of a Fringer type.) And lastly, the stripes on her pants are inspired by none other than Han Solo - and we all know where his came from.... Corellia (which is where she's from, so it makes sense.)
I might be the only person who could deduce this background out of the character just by looking at the picture.... but hey... at least I thought about trying to put story into what is seen (HAHA!) Maybe it worked, maybe it didn't. Telling a story with a picture is an entirely different art - I don't think I'm there yet... but anyway...
You may not be able to see it really well from here, but this is where I started the "Pop-Out" process. Basically, this is a method used to make the picture standout more. The idea here is to remove all Black that isn't connected to a Gray Scale color. In other words, I am replacing the black outline of the drawing, with a color more suited to the color of the positive space it is making a boundary for. So, for her skin, I am using a darker skin tone (a light brown.) How do I do this? Eraser technique!
This technique can be relatively tricky, and somewhat time consuming - especially when you get into positive spaces (anything that is part of the picture) that are connected to each other. Like, her shirt is connecting with the skin on her arm. The idea I use here is that the line belongs to whichever object holds the space closer to the viewer in a 3-dimensional viewing. This is going to take some practice, because it really is a line by line basis. Sometimes the arm is closer to the viewer, sometimes the shirt is (just one example.)
Fundamentally, this is a method used to make the picture standout more. It gives it more life and even gives the picture a slight 3-dimensional look to it. Before this picture, I'd never tried to do this, so I was kind of winging it. I've since found better ways to execute this process, but in any case, I think it turned out great, here!
Lastly, I filled the background with a Dark Gray, because I was tired of staring at a white background that was hurting my eyes. I could have done that a long time ago though, HAHA!
(to be continued...)
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