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I got one, try this on for size.

 

Name: Moyter

Place of Birth: Gen'Dai Homeworld

Age: approx. 4,000 years

Species: Gen'Dai

 

Powers/Abilities:

 

As a Gen'Dai he had all the natural abilities that entails including regeneration, reflexes, and strength. He learned from both Jedi and Sith eventually forsaking both and embracing a philosophy akin to Alema Rar's The Balance.

 

He is highly skilled saber duelist and over his thousands of years of careful study, mastered all forms save for Vaapad. He can then put this into use combined with telekenesis to wield six to eight sabers at a time. four through his mind, and one in each hand with the ability to produce an extra two hands. (he enjoys Jar'kai). USe of all the sabers is rare and difficult, only achieved in rare moments of perfect clarity. He prefers to dual wield with 2 sabers wielded telekenetically. He also learned to use and collected other weapons such as lightwhips, force pikes, and darksabers though he considers them inferior to sabers, but useful in their own ways. He wears a helmet of Mandalorian Armor designed and enchanted by Sith alchemists to enhance the power of his force illusions. He also wears a cloak that can tear away but is laced with corotis to resist saber strikes to his back and that can dissolve into a smoke cloud to provide a cover screen.

 

In his younger years he yearned for knowledge and learned from the Jedi, fighting against the Sith in the GGW after his planet was ravaged by them. Over time he witnessed jedi hypocrisy undo what he's achieved and felt he'd learned all he needed, so by the time of the New Sith Wars he defected. From here he learned the Sith ways and gained power, but he felt the Sith were too destructive after Bane wiped them out. His mind couldn't accept the hypocritical jedi or the power mad Sith who destroyed themselves so he returned to his home, and adopted the traditional Gen'Dai stance of non-interference with an exception for protecting his people. He then rejoined the Jedi and became a scholar all in order to better ensure the safety of his people. For centuries he studied Jedi and Sith holocrons in the temple, refusing to take missions or teach apprentices. After order 66, he fled from planet to planet to avoid Palpatine's reach. He studied on Korriban and Ziost as well as hid for a time on Yavin IV, Tatooine, Ilum, and Mandalore to name of few of his more well known stops.

 

He has a special hatred for Luke and Sidious. His travels during the Imperial Era where attempts to find a way to reach Sidious after the Dark Lord attacked his planet and decimated his people. When Luke destroyed the first Death Star, he'd just learned that a few survivors (mostly young Gen'Dai) of his race where being held aboard. He blamed Luke for their murders and was further enraged when Luke stole his kill of the Emperor.

Feats of his power/abilities

 

- Defeated 27 Sith Warriors at once during the GGW, utilizing for the first time his ability to wield 4 sabers. He also killed the last few by dueling them with sabers wielded telekenetically for the first time. He later expanded upon this.

- Stalked and killed each member of a 12 man Jedi strike team hunting him in the caves of Ryloth immediately post Ruusan. Driving them insane through strong force illusions, even getting one to kill another.

- Studied several Jedi holocrons in the Temple during the Golden Age for many centuries.

- Studied Sith holocrons for decades during both the New Sith Wars and Imperial eras.

- Slew a dozen Sithspawn and sith beasts during his time on Korriban.

- Butchered three platoon of Stormtroopers using nothing but illusions and force wielded sabers.

- contained a small bomb's explosion within a force shield without trouble.

- rebuffed and held his own against force attacks from several Masters of the Prequel order during sparring sessions and training

- Captured an Acclamator II-class assault ship in his escape from Coruscant single handedly

- withstood a direct hit from a concussion missile using a force barrier.

- Was entirely dismembered by Jedi twice during the New Sith Wars, walked away both times.

- Visited and lived with the Aing-Tii during the Vong War

- Killed many Dark Jedi and assassins sent by Palpatine.

- Countless examples of telekentic, saber, force shield, and force illusions abilities throughout 3 wars and 4,000 years. (GGW, NSW, and Vong War)

(these aren't all in order)

 

 

So we're making these up right? How does it look?

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I got one, try this on for size.

 

Name: Moyter

Place of Birth: Gen'Dai Homeworld

Age: approx. 4,000 years

Species: Gen'Dai

 

Powers/Abilities:

 

As a Gen'Dai he had all the natural abilities that entails including regeneration, reflexes, and strength. He learned from both Jedi and Sith eventually forsaking both and embracing a philosophy akin to Alema Rar's The Balance.

 

He is highly skilled saber duelist and over his thousands of years of careful study, mastered all forms save for Vaapad. He can then put this into use combined with telekenesis to wield six to eight sabers at a time. four through his mind, and one in each hand with the ability to produce an extra two hands. (he enjoys Jar'kai). USe of all the sabers is rare and difficult, only achieved in rare moments of perfect clarity. He prefers to dual wield with 2 sabers wielded telekenetically. He also learned to use and collected other weapons such as lightwhips, force pikes, and darksabers though he considers them inferior to sabers, but useful in their own ways. He wears a helmet of Mandalorian Armor designed and enchanted by Sith alchemists to enhance the power of his force illusions. He also wears a cloak that can tear away but is laced with corotis to resist saber strikes to his back and that can dissolve into a smoke cloud to provide a cover screen.

 

In his younger years he yearned for knowledge and learned from the Jedi, fighting against the Sith in the GGW after his planet was ravaged by them. Over time he witnessed jedi hypocrisy undo what he's achieved and felt he'd learned all he needed, so by the time of the New Sith Wars he defected. From here he learned the Sith ways and gained power, but he felt the Sith were too destructive after Bane wiped them out. His mind couldn't accept the hypocritical jedi or the power mad Sith who destroyed themselves so he returned to his home, and adopted the traditional Gen'Dai stance of non-interference with an exception for protecting his people. He then rejoined the Jedi and became a scholar all in order to better ensure the safety of his people. For centuries he studied Jedi and Sith holocrons in the temple, refusing to take missions or teach apprentices. After order 66, he fled from planet to planet to avoid Palpatine's reach. He studied on Korriban and Ziost as well as hid for a time on Yavin IV, Tatooine, Ilum, and Mandalore to name of few of his more well known stops.

 

He has a special hatred for Luke and Sidious. His travels during the Imperial Era where attempts to find a way to reach Sidious after the Dark Lord attacked his planet and decimated his people. When Luke destroyed the first Death Star, he'd just learned that a few survivors (mostly young Gen'Dai) of his race where being held aboard. He blamed Luke for their murders and was further enraged when Luke stole his kill of the Emperor.

Feats of his power/abilities

 

- Defeated 27 Sith Warriors at once during the GGW, utilizing for the first time his ability to wield 4 sabers. He also killed the last few by dueling them with sabers wielded telekenetically for the first time. He later expanded upon this.

- Stalked and killed each member of a 12 man Jedi strike team hunting him in the caves of Ryloth immediately post Ruusan. Driving them insane through strong force illusions, even getting one to kill another.

- Studied several Jedi holocrons in the Temple during the Golden Age for many centuries.

- Studied Sith holocrons for decades during both the New Sith Wars and Imperial eras.

- Slew a dozen Sithspawn and sith beasts during his time on Korriban.

- Butchered three platoon of Stormtroopers using nothing but illusions and force wielded sabers.

- contained a small bomb's explosion within a force shield without trouble.

- rebuffed and held his own against force attacks from several Masters of the Prequel order during sparring sessions and training

- Captured an Acclamator II-class assault ship in his escape from Coruscant single handedly

- withstood a direct hit from a concussion missile using a force barrier.

- Was entirely dismembered by Jedi twice during the New Sith Wars, walked away both times.

- Visited and lived with the Aing-Tii during the Vong War

- Killed many Dark Jedi and assassins sent by Palpatine.

- Countless examples of telekentic, saber, force shield, and force illusions abilities throughout 3 wars and 4,000 years. (GGW, NSW, and Vong War)

(these aren't all in order)

 

 

So we're making these up right? How does it look?

 

Quite and looks good.

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Ok it's time to channel my hatred and make a Character that will squash Luke Skywalker

 

Name: Darth Ultio

Age: 28

Species: Sith

Place of Birth: Uknown

 

Abilities:

 

Lightsaber skills:

Ultio, did not focus on dueling, but still managed to master the sixth form of lightsaber combat and learned the third form in means of improving her defense.Later on she learned the aggressive form of Juyo.She could hold out against very powerful duelists but nothing more than that.

 

Lightning:

Ultio was an extremly powerful lightning user, and her purple lightining could kill force users in mere seconds. She could use Lightning Storm and Chain Lightning. Her lightning could even disintigrate instantly when charged. She could use abilities like Shock and Wracking Energy. She could could also utilise the powers like a Lightning Shield.

 

Darkness

Ultio could drain the essence of multiple beings at once, boosting her health and powers. She was able to use Crushing Darkness, and create a barrier to protect herself from any kind of damage.

 

Other abilities

Darth Ultio could use abilities like Force Repulse, Force Crush, and rarely Force Yell.

She could use Mind Trick and abilities like Force Insanity to a great exent, toying with her enemies, though a very strong willed force user could resist her abilities with nearly no effect at all.

Finally she could use the rare ability of Battle Meditation,combing with abilities like Force Horror and Dominate Mind, winning battles without firing a single shot, and albeit with great effort Deadly Sight.

 

Personality

Darth Ultio, was a mastermind using her powers to control others from a distance, and was a very formidable opponent, using her telekinetic, and Lightning abilities. She wasn't stubborn, and would try to escape a fight, when she realises she isn't going to win, and spread her troops, using her force abilities to outflank her enemies.

She was not a strategist, using her force abilities to take advantage. She utilised Dun Moch,and often researched her opponent if she knew his/her identity.

 

Allies

She only had one Apprentice, a Twilek named Tua,trained in shii-cho, juyo and ataru, who used a double ended saber. She only knew the basics of Lightning and Telekinisis. She could enter a trance along with her master that increased, the efficiency of abilities like Battle Meditation. She was in charge of her master's elite guard, another six men, that used two shotos each, and had little proficiency in the Force, but were able to resist all shorts of Mind tricks, Force Drain and other interactions with the mind. The wore heavy armor, protecting them from blaster bolts, small explosions, and even glancing blows from lightsabers. They were cmpletely loyal to their master and willing to risk her life for her.

 

Edit:Physicallity:

Darth Ultio was a young female, and was able to take a considerable amount of physical damage. She could use the Force to cross great distances, allowing her to escape diffucult situations.

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Chrysalis

 

 

Once a Jedi Knight, named Oah Serani, Chrysalis survived the Jedi Purge of Darths Revan and Malak, living through the Massacre of Dantooine, being one of it's sole survivors. The mass extinction of an entire academy of Jedi corrupted Oah, from then on he was never quite the same.

 

Surviving the Extermination of the Jedi at the hands of Darths Nihilus, Sion, and Traya, Oah met with his fellow Jedi Masters and their Pupils on Katarr, the Miralukan homeworld in. When Darth Nihilus' fleet arrived, something in Oah snapped, he felt the shear weight of the Darkness surrounding the Planet, the presence of a Mighty lord who he knew would be the Death of them all. Fully embracing the Dark Side, Oah erected an impenetrable shield from sheer Willpower, around Him.

 

The shield turned pure black as the Darkness felt its way around it, poking holes, probing for weaknesses, as Oah felt the deaths of his friends, his students, around him. The Dark Being who had caused such devastation lashed at Oah and pure and absolute forks of Dark Side Energy lashed out at Oah, penetrating his shield and causing Agonizing pain...

 

Oah tried his hardest to survive, attempting to minimize his shield for Solidarity, however it got caught on something as he shrunk it, and he had no time to check what. The Darkness had broken through.... And then... Nothing.

 

Oah awoke, different, transformed. Somehow, he had managed to feed off the Sith who had arrived, reverse the attempted connection on some level. Through Oah's dazed eyes however, he saw that Lord, The Darkness... He was taking a young child aboard his ship, (The Child blocking the Shrinking of his shield), at the last moment however, moments before the Boarding Ramp, the Darth turned, and looked Upon Oah.

 

And Oah saw death.

Oah saw horror.

Oah Saw fear itself...

 

Oah cried a Single tear, vowing vengeance. An innocent Miralukan confined to the will of a Horribly being, was not the force's intention, it was not right...

 

And so, in Oah's vow of vengeance, his lust for revenge, his hunger for power... Oah fell, a silent fall, a long fall... He fell into Darkness, and took up the name Chrysalis, named after the Ancient Chrysalide, Rancor Sithspawn.

 

To this day, Chrysalis is fixated on finding the Blinded one, the one he vowed to save, he has amassed a large force of ancient Massassi he encountered somehow remaining on Yavin 4. He combined them with corrupted Pilots and Cruiser Operators that he has bound to his will, and now Chrysalis is in command of a deadly fleet of Hammerhead cruisers and Republic Vessels.

 

 

Powers:

 

Has taken down a Capital ship with a large Bolt of Lightning.

Has shown the Lightsaber strength to Best Vandar Tokarre, Revan (As a knight) and Master Kavarr in a single duel.

A Master of Niman, Soresu, Juyo and Makashi, dedicated to single sparring. Masters of all other forms, but simply prefers to use these 4.

Shown abilities in Force Horror, Force Crush, Force Drain, Dark Healing, and Telekentics assaults.

Capable of using Force Maelstrom

Had the sheer Will to survive a Barrage from Darth Nihilus, the living wound.

Has been shown to use Red Lightning, but only when Empowered with Rage

Deep Knowledge of Sith Sorcery.

Morichro

Force Barrier

Battle Meditation (For Massassi, does not need it for fleets)

Darksight

Capable of Pure Dark Side Energy attacks, and able to channel it into his lightsaber.

 

 

More powers to come, but as he's going to be a Fanfic villain he can't be too OP... I'll think on it :p

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I seem to notice something so far, a lot of these guys have the same stuff. XD In particular Battle Med. Well I mean out of how many enemies there are so far anyway.

 

Aurbere lets see your non-force user! We need more of em!

 

Mine doesn't! :D

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Hey... Not to derail this thread any more, But Beni, would you mind looking over my opening Fanfic chapter if I sent it to ya? Sort of new to it (Aurbere too, if you want, but I know you're busy enough already :p)

 

Edit - It'll be way better than that character Bio, promise, I wrote that in a rush and not in my normal style :D

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I'm so confused.... You're saying Old Age... Then what's the second part? :o

 

Just a bad joke. Luke is completely overpowered by the current end of the EU; about the only thing that can stop him is...

...his great-grandson's indifference when Luke is a Force Ghost. Imagine the annoyance of being a fellow who not only had to learn the plural of apocalypse, but saving the galaxy from said events became a bit passe. Now imagine the feelings of impotence and annoyance when he cannot directly affect the living world...

...talk about an opponent he cannot defeat. The next generation's indifference to SW's equivalent Greatest Generation. He literally can only talk and give advice without a means of just saving everyone.

 

THAT is the enemy Luke Skywalker cannot defeat.

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The Del’ay’atth Dak’nar’etth

The Dark Ones with no Soul

 

Names: Lords Jurnus, Taruk, Ambivula, and Karasim

Age: over 5,000 years

Homeworld: Korriban

Species: Unknown, legends state either human or Sith

 

“We have transcended beyond this mortal plane.” – Lord Jurnus

Bio: The history of the Del’ay’atth Dak’nar’etth is one shrouded in mystery, although all the cultures that tell tales of them were once controlled by the Old Sith Empire it is not easy to discern truth from fiction. What is known for sure though is that these four Sith lords were among the most powerful in whatever time they lived within the empire. Although circumstances differ in these tales, they eventually ended up on the outlying planet of Turumar on the fringes of the Empire, where they succeeded in breaking away from the Empire. On Turumar they perfected themselves, or at least they did so in their own eyes. Ridding themselves of their physical forms and existing in a form not physical yet not entirely spirit either. Turumar became a taboo world no one who set foot on it ever returned, but on the world itself the last relics of the Sith Empire remained hidden coming out only if they felt an unwanted presence on their world.

 

“We are what you fear most.” – Lord Karasim

Power/Abilities:

Masters of Sith Alchemy- the whole planet of Turumar has succumbed to there will

Drain essence

Extensive telekinetics

Force Corrupt

Force Fear- masters of terror, their very presence can bring one to their knees

Force Plague

Force choke

Malacia

Force Bond

Farsight

Battle precognition

 

Since they lack a true physical form they can pass through objects without harm and are naturally invisible to the eye, only visible by the robes they wear.

 

 

Lightsaber skills: Each of the Lords has perfected a form of combat. Lord Jurnus is a master of Djem So. Lord Taruk mastered Juyo, whilst Lord Ambivula mastered Niman, and Lord Karasim mastered Makashi.

 

 

“We fight as one.” – Lord Ambivula

Feats:

 

Were able to successfully break away from the Sith Empire to such a degree that no one went near them.

Subjugated a whole planets ecosystem to their will.

Were able to break the chains of their mortal bodies and live in a wraith-like state.

Are able to exist in the netherworld of the Force and the mortal galaxy.

Toyed around with anyone who landed on their world until either driving them insane or killing them.

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The Del’ay’atth Dak’nar’etth

The Dark Ones with no Soul

 

Names: Lords Jurnus, Taruk, Ambivula, and Karasim

Age: over 5,000 years

Homeworld: Korriban

Species: Unknown, legends state either human or Sith

 

“We have transcended beyond this mortal plane.” – Lord Jurnus

Bio: The history of the Del’ay’atth Dak’nar’etth is one shrouded in mystery, although all the cultures that tell tales of them were once controlled by the Old Sith Empire it is not easy to discern truth from fiction. What is known for sure though is that these four Sith lords were among the most powerful in whatever time they lived within the empire. Although circumstances differ in these tales, they eventually ended up on the outlying planet of Turumar on the fringes of the Empire, where they succeeded in breaking away from the Empire. On Turumar they perfected themselves, or at least they did so in their own eyes. Ridding themselves of their physical forms and existing in a form not physical yet not entirely spirit either. Turumar became a taboo world no one who set foot on it ever returned, but on the world itself the last relics of the Sith Empire remained hidden coming out only if they felt an unwanted presence on their world.

 

“We are what you fear most.” – Lord Karasim

Power/Abilities:

Masters of Sith Alchemy- the whole planet of Turumar has succumbed to there will

Drain essence

Extensive telekinetics

Force Corrupt

Force Fear- masters of terror, their very presence can bring one to their knees

Force Plague

Force choke

Malacia

Force Bond

Farsight

Battle precognition

 

Since they lack a true physical form they can pass through objects without harm and are naturally invisible to the eye, only visible by the robes they wear.

 

 

Lightsaber skills: Each of the Lords has perfected a form of combat. Lord Jurnus is a master of Djem So. Lord Taruk mastered Juyo, whilst Lord Ambivula mastered Niman, and Lord Karasim mastered Makashi.

 

 

“We fight as one.” – Lord Ambivula

Feats:

 

Were able to successfully break away from the Sith Empire to such a degree that no one went near them.

Subjugated a whole planets ecosystem to their will.

Were able to break the chains of their mortal bodies and live in a wraith-like state.

Are able to exist in the netherworld of the Force and the mortal galaxy.

Toyed around with anyone who landed on their world until either driving them insane or killing them.

 

Wow, you just got my vote:)

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