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frauzet
09.30.2018 , 11:41 AM | #161
So far I am enjoying this trip to Tatooine, maybe more than I should, given Kit's condition.
Your description of Mos Isla is great, the ingame location recognizable.
I always liked Master Yonlach, and I'm glad he is doing well.
Is the Mirialan your Smuggler? I assume seeing her again will be interesting
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10.06.2018 , 10:34 PM | #162
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I am so sorry this is late. Not only has it been a very busy week for me. I was able to go see the Game of Thrones Live Concert, which was pretty stinking cool. And I'm celebrating a birthday today, but I was still unhappy with the chapter. I think I have futzed with it enough over the past week and a half to be okay with it. Still not pleased with this chapter. :/ But the show must go on ...
This one is kinda long.
No spoilers that I can remember.


PART II CHAPTER 35
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10.07.2018 , 02:45 AM | #163
I feel like a three-week vacation with Master Yonlach would be nice right now
Considered what he is going through, Adrik shows a lot constraint.
I'm glad he managed to get someone to deliver a message to Elara, and am looking forward to finding out what it says, and how Elara will react to it.
Also, I wonder whether Master Yonlach will reveal some more about Adrik's past and whether he will be able to help him with the block.
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10.08.2018 , 09:43 PM | #164
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A quick posting before bed.

There are no spoilers that I can remember

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Goodnight everybody

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10.09.2018 , 10:02 AM | #165
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10.11.2018 , 09:33 PM | #166
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Another quick posting. I don't think this one needs any editing, at least I hope it doesn't I need to get to bed. Hope everyone has a great day tomorrow.
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PART II CHAPTER 37

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Yesterday , 12:40 AM | #167
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Given Nox's rather... interesting outlook on life, he wondered why she and Kit had never exchanged more than a few blows.
They are a bit like strange cats in the courtyard. Yet, those do often seem to get by with a lot of hissing, too.
And if you can't win the fight, change the subject.

I hope you are feeling better today!
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All my stories from TDaOC and SFWC in chronological order

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Yesterday , 10:15 AM | #168
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PART II CHAPTER 38
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Yesterday , 01:37 PM | #169
A lovely quiet piece.
I like how you put in the safety instructions
It's nice to see the two of them grow closer again.
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All my stories from TDaOC and SFWC in chronological order