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Species/Race: Human

Name: Junè

Middle Name: Barlokov

Last Name: Denora

Gender: Female

Date of Birth: 23 BTC

Place of Birth: Alderaan

Age: 24

Height: 170 cm (5' 7")

Weight: 62 kg (137 lbs)

Hair Color/Style: Dark Violet (Dyed, Black Natural), usually in a ponytail, though will let her hair out when relaxing.

Facial Appearance: Light fair complexion, no scars, freckles.

Eye Color: Light blue

Body Appearance: Small yet muscular frame

Home Planet: Coruscant

Current Residence: Tiny bare apartment on Coruscant

Allegiance: Loyal to the Republic

Profession: Republic military commando

Armor/Clothes: White Republic military armour. When not in service she'll rarely wear anything fancy, usually something simple like a blue t-shirt and slacks.

Primary Weapon(s): Assault rifle

Secondary Weapon(s): Pistol

Miscellaneous Item(s): Simple silver pendant in the shape of a dragon's claw around her neck. The claw holds a green marble.

 

Biography:

Junè's mother died in child birth. Her father, Jack Barlokov, once a member of the SIS, raised her as best he could. During missions he'd leave her mostly alone or watched by a fellow officer due to the frequency of urgent missions during the war. Much of this time was on various star ships or space stations. Moving around constantly she had few friends and focused her time studies.

 

Due to his high risk missions in the SIS, Junè's father worried about someone taking advantage of his still young daughter, so he taught her self-defense and how to use firearms.

Once Junè hit 16 however, her father was killed during an infiltration mission by the Sith.

 

Junè decided to follow her father's footsteps, though not in search of vengeance, but to protect those who still have loved ones to lose. She entered the Republic military, where she excelled even more then she did in the classroom. She was eventually picked out for accelerated training and special programs. She was eventually hand picked to join a commando unit serving in the Republic military.

 

She left what she had of her life behind to fight. She has a simple one room apartment on Coruscant now, the furniture includes a desk, a chair, a bed, and a mini-fridge. Her simple bare room mirrors her life outside of combat.

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Species/Race: Human (Cyborg)

Name: Mec'anical

Middle Name:

Last Name: Light-Shatter

Nickname:

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Height: 6'1''

Weight: 68kg

Hair Color/Style: Shoulder length black hair

Facial Appearance: Rounded but not chubby, smooth skinned

Eye Color: Blue, glows very slightly. Known to change to brown or red when angry.

Body Appearance: Slender

Current Residence: Nar Shaddaa

Allegiance: Empire

Profession: Biochemstry, constantly working on new med packs and stims for herself and her allies.

Armor/Clothes: Light armor. usually robes of some variant. Always wears a cloak or cape.

Primary Weapon(s): Force powers, naturally quite adept but does have the occasionally tenancy to loose control.

Secondary Weapon(s): Purple Lightsaber

Miscellaneous Item(s): Has neuro-implants increasing her ability to sense movement around her and to pick up on hormones changes, implants made by herself. (Could classify her a cyborg, unsure at the moment.)

 

Biography: This is where i'm struggling, I can't think of a back story other then what is listed, needing help desperately if anyone is able to offer some advice could they quote my post please. Thank you! :(

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Name: Giambattista

Gender: Female

Race: Chiss

Home Planet: Csilla

Age: 19

 

Physical Appearance:

Hair Color: Black

Hair Style: Bun, with two loose strands framing her face.

Facial Appearance: Described as being "childishly pretty" or "Jedi pretty". Light dusting of freckles on her face.

Skin Color: Dark blue

Height: 5’11”

Body Appearance: Looks as if a breeze could carry her back to Csilla. She uses this too her advantage.

 

Affiliation: Sith Order, The Sith Empire.

 

Class: Sith Warrior

Advanced Class: Sith Marauder

Moral/Force Alignment: Chaotic Good/Light Side

 

Equipment:

Weapons: Twin Single-Bladed Lightsabers

Clothing: Giambattista wears what she calls an elegant "loungewear top". Her master laughs and calls her a w***e. She also wears skin tight leggings she found during her time with the Order of Revan, in faded, scrawling text they read "Mission Vao" on the waistband. Her gloves and belt are from Csilla; and glow a comforting green on their edges.

 

Personal Ship: Fury-class Interceptor (Fondly called the Tin Coffin)

 

Personality: Giambattista is reasonable but impatient. While she is more than willing to negotiate for peaceful solutions, she does not give in and refuses to have anything but her own way; her negotiation boils down to "compromise but in my favour". Her temper can be ruthless and nigh on endless but is difficult to unleash. Shes honest and blunt in a manner that often gets her in trouble, particularly with Baras.

 

She hopelessly cares for her companions; a rather motherly, or older sisterly love for Vette and an adoration and admiration for her best friend, Treek.

 

Biography: Giambattista was born to House Sabosen, one of the Ruling Families of the Chiss Ascendency but was given to the Sith Order shortly after her birth. The Overseers know of her roots, but have never told her. As far as she knows she was born in Csaplar and given to the Sith shortly after.

 

She noted quickly as a child that she didn't fit in with the other Sith. Her anger didn't fill her, or grow to hate as it did with the others. On the rare occasions it did, it did not make her feel strong like the Overseers said; it made her feel weak. She felt at her strongest when she let the negative emotions flow out of her. When she was 7, she attempt to convey this to Overseer Andala and spent the next ten minutes in the Overseer's lightning grip.

 

By the time she was 10, she was at the top of all her classes and managed to rebuke every attempt her class mates made to out do her or take her out. It was around this time that the Overseers began to talk about one of her Sith ancestors and that it was a shame she had not inherited the glorious red skin. She doubted their claims of this ancestors; everything in her screamed Chiss but she said nothing, especially when she saw the fear and hate directed at her by her classmates.

 

When she was fourteen, she made her first kill. Another girl, a Twi'lek slave-turned-Sith named Byn attacked her in her rooms after a hard training session when she was most tired. It was the first time she truly understood the masters' want and need for power. The kill had felt good, and made her feel powerful and unstoppable.

 

She spent the next 3 days throwing up, much to the anger and frustration of her masters.

 

On her 17th birthday, Overseer Tremel summoned her to Korriban.

 

She meets Evangleon Daniel on Nar Shadaa and the two hit off. They feel like they've known each other for long then they have. He teaches her Cheunh, and tell her about life growing up in the Ascendency. When they have to part, they keep in contact. Evangleon never tells her that he's her brother.

 

 

SKILLS AND TALENTS:

 

Skilled Lightsaber Combatant: Being a Sith Marauder, Giambattista is very skilled with her signature Twin Lightsabers. Given her choice of weapons, it’s no surprise that she has become an expert in the Ataru form, which is much better-suited to Two Lightsabers than the other seven Forms.

 

Negotiation: Despite what her training attempted to instill in her, Giambattista, is an excellent negotiator. This has led her to be invaluable to Darth Baras, and has also allowed to out maneuver him and grab for power.

 

 

COMPANION CHARACTERS:

Malavai Quinn

Treek

Evangleon Daniel (Chiss Male, Imperial Intelligence Engineer Sniper. Also known as Cipher Seven.)

 

CREW SKILLS:

Slicing

Synthweaving

Archaeology

 

SUPPLEMENTARY INFO:

Voice Actors/Actresses:

Giambattista: Tara Strong (Rikku in Final Fantasy X, Harley Quinn)

Evangleon: Bertie Carvel (Actual Imperial Agent voice actor)

 

 

Soundtrack:

Main Theme/Fight Fight Fight!: Immigration Song by Led Zepplin

Giambattista & Evangleon Theme: Hey Brother by Avicii

Ambition and Power Climb: Anything by Hedley

Overcoming the Impossible: Merchant Prince by Thomas Bergersen

Seduction is a Perfect Weapon: Cockiness by Rihanna

Darth Femme Fatale: Oh No! by Marina and the Diamonds

Exploration and Relaxation: Short Change Hero by The Heavy

 

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Name: Jeskus Mordo

 

Nickname/Call sign: Kingpin

 

Gender: Male

 

Species/Race: Human

 

Place of Birth: Coruscant

 

Age: 27

 

Height: 170 cm

 

Weight: 90 kg

 

Hair Color/Style: Dark brown, he cuts them short, but not too much. He also combs them in a stylish way, which is rare amongst Republic military.

 

Facial Appearance: He recently grew a beard and has a scar on his right eye.

 

Eye Color: Dark brown

 

Physical Appearance:

 

«Too bad you won’t join our side soldier; I could definitely use someone by my side with your … looks… Mordo…

 

- Darth Rhega, a Sith Sorceress and one of Jeskus’ many nemesis»

 

Pretty strongly built, Jeskus is very large and imposing. With arms as big as a rancor’s, he looks like he could tear through a Destroyer ship by himself. Mordo has seen many battles and warzones, which results in him having a few scars over his body. The easiest one to spot is the one he has on his right eye. It happened after his first duel with a Sith, Darth Erakis.

 

He has a small nose, a nice smile and eyes that seem like they could look through your soul. Jeskus is usually described as very good looking and he is very proud of it. He stands straight all the time and has an eternal smile on his lips, even while his most dangerous ops. Sometimes he is seen smoking one of his cigars. In conclusion, Jeskus Mordo is someone who is hard to miss, especially amongst the Republic army.

 

Armor/Clothes: When he is not in of his imposing combat armor, Mordo is seen wearing stylish clothing made by the best tailors of the galaxy. He takes great pride in always looking at his best. Even his armor has something classy to it.

 

Primary Weapon(s): He is usually seen fighting with a powerful and heavily modified blaster rifle.

 

Secondary Weapon(s): On his hip, he carries an also modified blaster pistol. Hidden in his vest is his trusty vibro-knife he calls ‘’Mister Stabby’’

 

Home Planet: Coruscant

 

Current Residence: He has homes all over the Galaxy, but resides most often in his Valor-class cruiser

 

Allegiance: The Republic

 

Profession: ‘’Hero of the Republic’’ as he likes to say, although it is true, we could also say he is a professional soldier.

 

Biography:

 

« Free spirited, arrogant, stubborn and way too much self-confident, this is what we call a Republic hero these days?

 

- General Garza on Jeskus’ recent fame»

 

Born on Coruscant, son to a rich business man and woman, Jeskus spent his early years in luxury. He received one of the best educations you could find in the Republic and led a very good life. Mordo was a very promising young man and his parents had great hopes for the future of Mordo Industries, since they planned on giving him everything after their deaths. Jeskus’ father, Hanar Mordo, made sure he could defend himself since he was very paranoid and afraid his competitors or employees would try to rob them at any time. He made sure he was trained in hand to hand combat and marksmanship by the very best instructors.

 

Landa, his mother, preferred he pursued more intellectual and artistic activities. He played a little music and read many books. By the time he was sixteen, he had quite the baggage. He had visited many planets and lived more in his few years than many people in their entire life. Jeskus always had trouble with his love life, never able to find a girl to love him back, which made him a little distant when it came to intimacy. But he never had any trouble finding friends; he is a very charismatic and agreeable man.

 

Jeskus’ parents died in a horrific car accident a few months after he turned seventeen. The Coruscant police couldn’t find any evidence of it, but it was strongly implied the accident was staged by Imperial Assassins, since Hanar was an outspoken enemy of the Empire and the Sith. Mordo Industries were taken over by an unscrupulous associate of Hanar, a Twi’lek named Mak Fede. He found an error in Jeskus’ parents’ will and used it to take everything from him.

 

Of course, Jeskus had some money, a small fortune as a matter of fact, but only a fraction of what he deserved. With absolutely no idea of what to do with his life, he decided to enlist in the republic military, even if he was underage to fight. The idea came from one of his childhood friend, a girl named Eva Callo. She came from a humbler family and didn’t have any other option, for it was hard to find a decent job in her part of Coruscant.

 

They joined in together, but with the kind of formation and education Mordo had received, it was clear to the Lieutenant who signed him in the military that he would be wasting his potential by sending him in the Republic’s rank and file. That is how Jeskus was enlisted in the Republic Special Forces division.

 

Even there he excelled, his private formation made him ready for just about anything the instructors could throw at him. He got out of the academy top of his class and was promoted to the rank of Sergeant. Sent to be the newest rookie in one of the Republic’s most famous Special Forces Squad, Havoc Squad, Mordo couldn’t have been any more proud.

 

What happened during his time with Havoc Squad is classified, and not much is known about it to this day. What the people know is only that he ended up being the squad’s CO only a few days after he integrated the Special Forces. He then embarked on a journey all around the galaxy that caused… well, Havoc, in the Sith Empire. Jeskus and his squad earned great fame during these days.

 

Although a pretty unconventional one, Mordo is one of the Republic’s most valiant defenders. It is important not to mix his fun-seeking way with unprofessionalism or treachery. He is actually quite the patriot and knows when it is the time to be serious. After Havoc, Jeskus led many operations all around the galaxy.

 

He stopped Darth Rhega’s forces from sacking the city of Hanak on Alderaan although he was outnumbered three to one. He clashed with Rhega’s forces many times since then. Another one of his enemies is Grand Moff Okk Kalders. Kalders and Mordo trained together in the Special Forces Academy, they used to be best friends until Kalders defected, along with many others of the Special Forces. Driven nearly insane by his Sith superiors, Kalders vowed to destroy Jeskus.

 

Drifting from operation to operation, Mordo never truly found a stable place in any unit after Havoc. He still has a powerful hatred for the Sith Empire and a desire to bring the fight to them. Mordo has been a great help to every operation he has been in, and although he feels ready to take command of a greater force, his quick temper has prevented him from earning any real promotion recently.

 

Note: The biography is a summary of Jeskus’ life, many short stories will come.

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Species/Race: Human

Name: Jirry

Last Name: Dalara

Nickname: Captain, Hound, Boss, Spark, Ace

Gender: Male

Place of Birth: Unknown

Age: 25

Height: 1.80 meters

Weight: 80 kg

Hair Color/Style: Carbon black

Facial Appearance: Sooted, tired

Eye Color: Brown

Body Appearance: He don't look like much, very average...people come to regret it (Body type 2)

Home Planet: Nar Shadaa, but mostly his own ship

Current Residence: XS Freighter in unknown hutt space

Allegiance: (Unofficial) The Republic (Official) His crew

Profession: Full time Smuggler, half time bounty hunter

Clothes: Azur blue coat that carries a bomb belt

Primary Weapon(s): Two guns he call Colby and Jack

Miscellaneous Item(s): Bombs...nothing else just BOMBS!

 

Personality: Every one may look at him and think: "A dumb nobody who sleeps on the street" Truth is he is probably the smartest person you'd ever meet in cybertech, slicing, marksmanship, explosives, and space piloting. His looks tell of a calmed person with no sense of bathing. The soot on his cheeks and the giant burn scar on the side of his face all comes from his experiments with explosive materials. His calmed look is actually a face of one who don't get much sleep. He spends nights in his office making new grenades and new tools for his two guns. His bed is five years old and has NEVER been used.

Likes: Explosions, violence when neccesary, silencing bothers, vengeance, technology, fights that end quickly.

Dislikes: Unnecessary violence, bullying for fun, random charity, snobs, egoistic behavior, explaining why he does things.

 

Biography: Nobody knows where he came from. His entire life has been a mystery to everyone who knows him, all they know is that he is one guy you don't want to get mad....boom!

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Species/Race: Human

Name: Jacor Tordek

Middle Name: None

Last Name: Tordek

Nickname: "Raider"

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: Unknown

Place of Birth: Unknown

Age: 22

Height: 6'1

Weight: 85 kilograms

Hair Color/Style: Naturally dark brown and shaven entirely bald all over

Facial Appearance: Solid face and strong jawline

Eye Color: Dark green

Body Appearance: Medium build fairly well built. Considered nondescript

Home Planet: Unknown

Current Residence: Defender-class light corvette "Raider"

Allegiance: Republic

Profession: Jedi Knight and subclass of Jedi Guardian

Armor/Clothes: Jedi Guardian Heavy Armour

Primary Weapon(s): Blue crystal lightsaber hilt

Secondary Weapon(s): None

Miscellaneous Item(s): Commlink, datapad, portable holomap, med packs, portable hologram transceiver, food capsules, A99 aquata breather

 

 

Biography:

 

 

Sunset

 

Jacor was found wrapped in a snug white bundle of blankets on the doorstep of a small building at a remote moisture farm in the south of the brutal Jundland Wastes located on the planet Tatooine as a small newborn baby. The owners of the farm who were named Jexter Tordek and Sarla Tordek a middle class couple aged in their mid twenties that were both 5th generation Tatooinian's. Being the good people that they were, they decided to take him in and raised the small child as their own. Days later they decided to name him Jacor and also gave him their own surname, Tordek. Throughout his life, he helped his father with working on the moisture evaporators whilst pushing through the intensity of the desert heat and persistent sandstorms to assisting his mother with cleaning the insides of the family home, helping water the plant life, and cooking for the family and the occasional visitors from neighboring moisture farms. Nearing the tail end of his early childhood, his father provided him with a blaster rifle and told him to go and clear out nearby wamp rats that had attempted to damage his moisture evaporators. Jacor dutifully followed his father's command and had on numerous occasions wiped out the vermin with one or two shots needed for the death of the creatures. After awhile, he developed decent skills with shooting in general and greatly enjoyed the thrill it provided.

 

As Jacor aged from his adolescence to his later childhood years, he grew strong from the constant work and good food his adopted parents provided him with and acquired a strong sense of moral values and great work ethic. Through his life, he attended primary, middle and secondary school at the neighboring school named "The School of Anchorhead" a fairly good educational institution catering kids with their from kinder garden, primary, middle and high school in the well known desert city and elsewhere. During his time there he met many different sentients composed of different races and cultures and met some good friends. Upon completion of his education with above average grades in all subjects, especially in information technology which he found he had a knack for, as well as physical education where he graduated in with honours in his class. Time passed and after celebrations with other classmates he decided to continue to assist his parents with their household activities without them requesting it as he felt it was the right thing to do since they provided him with an honest upbringing.

 

 

The Militia

 

Time quickly passed and at the age of 17 he noticed an advertisement for the Tatooine Militia and gave it some thought. Initially, he really liked the idea of doing a job that involved weapons and physical activity and soon after decided to join and soon after received a notification for his assessment day.

 

With the standard testing expected of an aspiring member of a paramilitary force done, he was given the "all clear" and was assigned to Alpha Squad, 3rd Platoon, of the 1st Jundland Waste's Infantry Company which numbered one hundred men in total. The newly recruited individual was assigned the rank of "Recruit". During his time there he received "on the job" training that an Infantryman would get and he excelled in small arms related activities as well as basic navigation, camouflage and field craft training and physical fitness sessions and assessments. Whilst serving, he was noted by his company commander Captain Raknar Ordek for having "great potential" and this was mentioned to his superiors who then decided to promote him to the rank of Private, signifying his full transition from a civilian to a member of the Tatooinian Militia.

 

One day his squad of twelve soldiers was tasked with guarding a moisture farm and came under attack by a huge party of fifty Tusken Raiders, some on Banthas. With a firm order, his Squad Leader, Sergeant Delton Mardek ordered the squad in a strategic defensive formation around the moisture farm and the unit's Radioman to call in for support. Moving into position near the white ledge opposite the depths of the desert, Tordek aimed his blaster rifle into the distance and scanned the horizon for any enemy forces as the squad did the same and the Radioman moved back to quickly call in the likely much needed ground support. Soon after, a hail of Tusken Raider war cries were heard and the Tusken's quickly converged upon their positions from all sides. Hastily, Jacor shot over a dozen down with pinpoint accuracy, scoring a few head shots as his fellow squad mates also took some of the enemy down themselves. But the worst was yet to come as the Raiders continued to attack the squad and overwhelmed it and killed many of them. With a desperate order, Sergeant Mardek ordered the final four of squad into the Farmer's building to protect the family alongside the Father. Jacor immediately accepted this order and proceeded with his Sergeant and his fellow squad members into the structure.

 

They soon after barricaded themselves in the structure with different kinds of furniture but were once again overwhelmed by the Tuskens. Out of ammunition, they drew their vibro blades as they heard ship's fly overhead. Without wasting a second, they engaged and killed numerous Tusken Raiders in close blade to gaderffii stick combat. At the end of it, Jacor, his Sergeant, the Radioman and two other squad members were left standing and woundless. They had fought like hell and saved the family. Sadly though, dad was dead. Reinforcements soon after arrived and assisted them with clearing out the remaining Tuskens and tending to the injured and dead.

 

After this encounter the squad were given "Rest and Recuperation" R&R for short for a month. During this time, Jacor spent time in Anchorhead, back at home, and exploring The Dune Sea. Now and then he would meet Jawa's and other moisture farmers and developed good relations with them. After about a year in the Militia, Jacor got a notice from his commander for a meeting. At the meeting, the seasoned duo discussed in detail his service history and life spent at home and suggested along with his Sergeant that he join the Army of the Republic which was noted as a professional military organization similar to the Militia. Jacor sadly thought this over and agreed. Soon after, he informed his family, friends and squad mates and was then shipped off to an Army of the Republic military base for the needed testing to see if he had what it took to serve in the legendary organization.

 

 

Army of the Republic

 

Some time passed and he was soon after shipped off to the militaristic planet of Carida. With an anxious wait for around a month which he spent working out at a local gym and resting, Jacor was finally given the chance to attend Basic Combat Training. Also known as "Basic". At this place he learnt most of what he learnt in the Militia and graduated twelve weeks later as an Infantryman but with a special "Reconnaissance" designation given due to his prior service in the paramilitary organization and his excellent performance in Basic. Soon afterwards, he was given Advanced Infantry Training which consisted of learning several infantry related skills ranging from advanced infantry tactics, advanced field craft, advanced camouflaging and concealment, and use of infantry weaponry and equipment. The course was commonly referred to as "AIT" and ran for five weeks. At the end of the course he graduated with honours and was named "the best in his platoon" by his superiors.

 

After that, he was assigned to the Reconnaissance Course also known as "RC" and spent fifteen weeks there. In this place he learned and practiced numerous specialized military communications with basic and advanced military equipment also ranging from specialized small arms, from light to heavy weapons and grenades all the way to demolitions training, instinctive weapons handling, basic and advanced speeder as well as ground vehicle based training. In addition to this, he learned and trained in squad based tactics to airborne insertion methods like HAHO and HALO and even underwater military diving techniques and with advanced re-breather aquatic equipment tactics of insertion and exfiltration to basic and advanced camouflage, field craft, stalking as well as basic and advanced reconnaissance techniques all in jungle, snow, desert and space based warfare training and methods centering on squad and platoon based tactics. Additionally, he learnt and practiced highly sort after assassination, reconnaissance, and VIP protection training all to make him a "highly specialized and extremely capable" soldier of the Republic Army.

 

Once more, he graduated with honours and was noted as having a "rarely seen level of physical fitness, reflexes and obsession to win at all costs". He was also given a dog tag which stated: "RT-3018" The RT for Reconnaissance Trooper and 3018 for his serial coded identification number. Tordek also spared a long thought for his friends and family, realizing he'd likely not see them again due to the intensity and longevity of military service life.

 

Time once again passed and he was assigned with the rank of Private to his platoon sized unit of sixty Soldiers. The unit was officially designated as: "Alpha Platoon, Rancor Company, 6th Reconnaissance Battalion, 8th Republican Army Brigade, 3rd Corps." His platoon which almost always partook in military operations as a sole body and seldom ever broke off into smaller groups of Soldiers was led by Lieutenant Zaydor Tarkal, a seasoned and grizzly former enlisted man who dubbed the unit the "Raging Rancor's". Time passed as they constantly honed their skills and soon after this they were tasked with proceeding to the planetary capital of the Republic, Coruscant. There they preformed urban reconnaissance on hostile Imperial and criminal forces centered around the Senatorial and Jedi Temple sections of the city. Time passed and their objectives were accomplished with no casualties over an intense six month deployment.

 

Once more, they were assigned this time to the planet Tatooine. Jacor's home planet. Secretly, he was glad to return "home." The unit was assigned to the Dune Sea area of operations and were ordered to split up into small squads of twelve Troopers each. Tordek, outfitted in far superior equipment compared to his Militia days utilizing his customized blaster rifle to scan the surrounding area with it's advanced optics and noticed a party of Tusken Raiders. He quickly alerted his squad and soon after the unit engaged the enemy. With even better precision, the man destroyed the violent monsters with his squad with relative ease. But worse trouble was brewing. A nearby Imperial infantry platoon had heard the blaster fire and engaged their position. With a swift and well placed order, the squad commander gave orders for the unit to spread out and engage the Imperials in open combat as they engaged the squad with accurate blaster rifle fire from a couple of hundred meters away. Hastily maneuvering away from the fire, the unit had taken some casualties and had just seven men left but was soon after reinforced by the entire platoon. The big brother had come to save the day as the large unit commenced cleaning up the now scattered and obliterated enemy unit of Imperial soldiers. All the soldiers cheered. The battle was won. The Imperials were all defeated and the Republican Army infantry platoon suffered only twelve dead in total.

 

Soon after a huge wave of the vicious beasts numbering about a hundred engaged their position and the unit was given the order to retreat to a nearby urban area encased within the sand. With great effort, the Republican Soldiers defended the position against constant Tusken assaults, held their position and repelled the enemy entirely, for now. The Lieutenant then gave the order for Private Tordek and his squad of now 12 members to proceed ahead as the Platoon provided them with overhead cover as they advanced. The unit advanced as ordered but were then faced with another group of Tuskens who suddenly zipped up out of the ground and they then charged. The men engaged them at point blank range with blaster cannon and blaster rifle fire but were overwhelmed bar Tordek. He expertly engaged and killed every last Tusken Raider with his rifle's bayonet and then was faced with the remaining one who eyed him off. Tordek dropped his rifle realizing it had run out of ammunition and that the bayonet was detached off of it and removed his combat knife. The monster lunged forward and smashed into him. Jacor took advantage of this and stabbed into it's chest, but with no luck. The monster smashed him to the ground and the man quickly wrestled it off of him and got to his feet as it sprung up to meet him. The man stabbed, slashed and headbutted the beast as it tore at him giving him non serious cuts and bruises with it's gaderffii, knocking his combat knife from his grip. He then resorted to beating the beast with his fist, punching it and smashing his head against it's own once more and the fight decayed into a slugging match. Tordek heard fighting in the distance as he quickly refocused on the monster and killed him with his own bare hands, smashing it's face and neck inwards, finally killing it.

 

Tordek's commander came right afterwards and informed him that evac also known as "evacuation" had arrived. A military shuttle flew overhead and quickly landed, picking up what was rest of the unit and taking them off the brutal planet as Trex looked on past the squad bay of the ship as he held onto the overhead railing and watching the battlefield fade away into the distance as they ascended upwards into the smoky, hot and humid sky away from the war torn battle ground littered with bodies signifying the carnage that had enveloped it.

 

Time slowly passed and Jacor Tordek stayed with his unit at the Republic Fleet and rested. Their mission had been accomplished. The Private was soon after awarded a Republican Bronze Star for his heroic, ferocious and ceaseless performance in combat on the planet of Tatooine as well as a promotion to Private First Class and was unofficially given the nick name "Raider" by his superiors for his fierceness in combat that resembled a Tusken Raider's. With great pride Jacor accepted the award during a relatively private ceremony aboard Carrick Station. But at the age of twenty and after two years of total military service the galaxy once again had other plans for him..

 

 

The Jedi Order:

 

Jacor was approached by a Jedi named Sylax Kerdl and force tested out of the blue. After being found to be force sensitive he was asked to join the Jedi Order. The man regretfully accepted and hated having to leave his unit behind but being advised but some of his close family members, squad mates, his unit commander, and regretfully his squad commander that he would be serving at his "fullest potential" as a member of the Jedi Order.

 

After a quick induction into The Jedi Order the rather unorthodox "Jedi" quickly flew through the various learning and testing and became a Jedi and rose through the ranks and eventually was given the rank of Jedi Knight. The man was tasked with numerous activities both covert and overt which ranged from helping those in need with technical related and social problems, defeating darksiders, preforming reconnaissance, sabotaging enemy equipment, training guerrilla fighters and even assassinations of highly dangerous individuals ranging from Imperials military forces to force users like Sith.

 

Nowadays he is travelling across the galaxy from the blistering heat of the sand dunes of Tatooine, to the snow ridden lands and biting cold of Hoth and into the vast and heavily armed space stations spanning across the galaxy, all in the name of accomplishing missions at any cost on behalf of the Jedi Order and the Republic.

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Species/Race: Sith

Name: Vitarus "Long lived"

Middle Name: N/A

Last Name: Xen’Dar

Nickname: Vit

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: 2 BTC

Place of Birth: Dromund Kaas

Age: 58

Height: 5’10” (170 cm)

Weight: 175 lbs (79 kg)

Hair Colour: Jet Black

Facial Appearance: Tendril beard, nasal jewelry, scarred right side

Eye Colour: Amber

Body Appearance: Average height but very fit, as befits the Wrath (Body Type 2)

Home Planet: Dromund Kaas

Current Residence: The Xen’Dar Estate in Kaas City

Allegiance: The Emperor and the Empire

Profession: Wrath of the Emperor; Lord Wrath

Armour: Heavy Battlemaster armour with spikes, cables, and a waist cape

Primary Weapon(s): Darth Baras’ lightsaber with a Black-Blue crystal

Secondary Weapon(s): Verpine shield generator

Miscellaneous Item(s): A collection of other lightsabers and crystals taken from Jedi & Sith as trophies or bought on various markets

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/275/1/5/actual_vitarus_by_viennachan-d81bf0t.jpg

(I used the character creator to get this shot because the lighting is very nice)

 

Biography: Vitarus was the firstborn of a prominent Sith family, to parents who were at the forefront of the Great Galactic War. His family was one of the founding members of the Order of Revan. Because of this, Vitarus was tolerant to aliens, was more grey than dark in most circumstances, and sought to bring stability to the instability of the Sith. Vitarus stands with Darth Marr in his support for the Empire. In instances where he agrees with who he’s fighting, such as Darth Malgus’ Rebellion & the Revanite Crisis, he feels conflicted but ultimately stands with the Empire. He fell in love with a blue Twi’lek, Vette, and they were married, however she died but a year later. Two years after that, Vitarus married a Mandalorian woman, Liudvika, and they had three children together. Liudvika died six years later; killed by agents of the Hutts. Still, Vitarus stands a very powerful and successful man in the Sith Empire, an agent of his Master's wishes.

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Species: Sith

Name: Aur

Middle Name: Jidai

Last Name: Marek

Nickname: Jidai

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: 7 BTC

Place of Birth: Anchorhead

Age: 20

Height: 178 cm

Weight: 72 kg

Hair Color/Style: Aur has black, tousled hair swept to the right which he usually prefers to keep trimmed if he's not required to embark on a mission for an extensive duration.

Facial Appearance: Aur's crimson face is characterized largely by the tendril-like masses of flesh which descend from the sides of his mouth and from the lower part of his jaw, from each of the sides of his face to his chin; aside from his Sith traits, Aur has a common physiognomy, which carries a countenance so ordinary to the nature of any person of any species it could be thought cordial, through which he conveys glances signifying a caring endeavor to attain understanding and sympathy.

Eye Color: Red

Body Appearance: Aur is fairly well-built, although he can become lazy or spend a few weeks doing things other than maintaining physical fitness.

Home Planet: Tatooine

Current Residence: Tython

Allegiance: Ashla

Profession: Jedi Guardian

Armor/Clothes: Aur usually wears heavy armor consisting entirely of Jedi robes; he mostly prefers to wear his brown, unhooded training vestments composed of fabric and metal issued by the Order from when he was a Padawan.

Primary Weapon(s): His exposed-crystal lightsaber which he constructed on Tython; he could handle a blaster rifle at a close range, if anyone needed him to, but he'd probably miss if he had to fire it at a distance, and he'd be terrible with blaster pistols, even at a meter or so away.

Secondary Weapon(s): Usually a shield generator; he could pick up a second lightsaber if it would prove itself to be more convenient at a moment, but he's more adept at using one and spending more time considering how the Force might aid him rather than what he could do with another weapon in his hand.

Miscellaneous Item(s):

 

Biography: Aur's descended from a distant lineage of Sith ancestors of the Kissai subspecies interbred with human Force-users who have remained in contact with the Jedi Order for countless centuries. His parents thought of migrating to Korriban after the Treaty of Coruscant was written. Aur doesn't usually divulge how his life unfolded over the next few years, unless people who deem him to be a friend ask. He had always been recognized as having a magnificent strength in the Force, although he lived with regular Republic children. He joined the Jedi Order at the age of 13. He always felt that true balance in the Force was not to deny that passion existed and had meaning, nor to feel equal darkness and light, but to extend compassion to everyone, although he would never protest against his teachers; he always sought to understand rather than to be understood, and always felt that what mattered most was that people knew someone cared about them. For the next 4 years, he mostly remained on Coruscant; he was later brought to Tython, where he passed his trials and became a Knight over the course of a year.

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Species/Race:Mirialan

Name:Arisydo

Middle Name:N/A

Last Name:Ora

Nickname:Gizka(Given due to her small size)

Gender:Female

Age:16

Hair Color/Style:Almost always obscured by hood presumed black

Facial Appearance:Youthful,Marked by a traditional Mirialan tattoo

Eye Color:Green

Skin Color:Green

Body Appearance:Slender,Youthful

Home Planet:Nar Shaddaa

Current Residence:Defender-class Starship

Allegiance:Jedi Order,Republic...sort of

Enemies:Various Gangs,Sith Empire,Galactic Senate(sees them as useless and only barely better than the empire)

Profession:Jedi Guardian

Rank:Padawan

Known Lightsaber Forms:Shii-Cho,Makashi,Soresu,Shien

Practiced Lightsaber Forms:Shii-Cho,Rudimentary Soresu

Armor/Clothes:Worn Black Heavy-robe(formerly owned by her sister)

Primary Weapon(s):Worn Battered Single-bladed Blue Lightsaber (formerly owned by her sister)

Secondary Weapon(s):N/A

Miscellaneous Item(s):Personal Shield Generator

 

Personality:Extremely Untrusting,Hates Republic troopers for their inability to protect anyone

 

Notable Quotes:"No Prisoners,Prisoners escape and when they escape they kill and the blood of those they kill are on your hands."

 

Family:

Sister:Jedi Guardian Kaia Ora(Deceased,Killed in gang violence)

 

 

=please forgive any spelling or grammar errors english is not my strong suit but i try=

=Edit removed secondary weapon for realism reasons=

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Name: Ryancerr

Middle Name: Jaek

Last Name: Drakon

Nickname: Hawk

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: Unknown

Place of Birth: Dromund Kaas

Species/Race: Epicanthix/Human

Age: 26

Height: 5'10

Facial Appearance:http://media.tumblr.com/a35bffc2808ce42ed042319ba6d23ab0/tumblr_inline_ncs2koL3fp1sx3lwe.png

Body Appearance: Strong Build, several scars in various places of his body as a result of action, Hawk tattoo on his arm as well as the name 'Kilbi' on the other.

Home Planet: Dromund Kaas.

Current Residence: Coruscant.

Allegiance: Sith Empire (Formerly), Galactic Republic, Republic Special Armed Forces.

Profession: Captain for R.S.A.F. Hawkbat Squad, Formerly a Imperial Lieutenant for the 221th Battalion.

Armor/Clothes: Prototype Commando Armor emblazoned with the Squad insignia

Primary Weapon(s): Blaster Rifle (Exact model unknown, heavily modified.)

Secondary Weapon(s): Standard issue Combat Knife.

Miscellaneous Item(s):

Family: Kilbi Drakon - Husband, Kath Drakon - Mother, Arok Drakon - Father, Wrax Drakon - Bother.

 

Biography: (Will complete if and when I can decide on most of the details)

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Species/Race: Human

Name: Jackema

Middle Name: Bobby

Last Name: Kennety

Nickname: Jack

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: 19 BTC

Place of Birth: N/A

Age: 30

Height: 6'0"

Weight: 204 lbs

Hair Color/Style: Brown, neatly combed

Facial Appearance: Nothing remarkable about the face

Eye Color: Blue

Body Appearance: Walks with a slight limp in the left leg, although never in public

Home Planet: N/A

Current Residence: Coruscant

Allegiance: Republic, Galactic Seante

Profession: Senator

Armor/Clothes: Dresses in formal wear almost constantly

Primary Weapon(s): Rarely has a weapon, but prefers a blaster rifle to anything else

Secondary Weapon(s): N/A

Miscellaneous Item(s): N/A

 

Biography: Born into an upper class family on an obscure planet, Jackema had a childhood trouble with sickness. When the war with the Empire started up, Jack joined the Republic Navy. During a regular routine run, Jack's ship was almost completely destroyed by an Imperial Cruiser. Jack, a lieutenant, was the highest remaining offical after the incident. Jack, whom had never been in command felt overwhelmed. He hoped another Republic ship would save them, but after a while, it became apparent that no one was coming. Jack decided to have the remaining crew get into the few remaining escape pods and hope for the best. One wrong turn, and Jack and his crew could be stuck on an Imperial planet. Jack and the crew crashed onto a planet that was currently being fought on. They crashed in the ocean, but luckily, some islands were nearby. After a few nights of attempting to signal a Republic base, Jack soon realized that their supplies were dwindling quickly. He and another one of the crew mates swam to a nearby island to try to find resources, but failed. After a few more nights, they found a canoe. Again Jack went out, hoping to find a Republic base. That night though, a horrible storm struck the ocean. Jack and the crewmember were thrown out of the canoe and into the ocean. The crew member drowned, but Jack was saved by some local native aliens. Before they could save him however, Jack was severely beat up. His knee was stuck hard and never recovered, the same goes for his back. The aliens took him to a nearby Republic base. Jack sent a rescue crew after his ship mates. That was the first time Jack had ever taken lead of anything, and he was a changed man for it.

 

Jack is a widower. His wife was killed by an assassin. After his wife, who was a politician died, Jack left his then profession of teaching at a school in Coruscant to join the Senate and continue his wife's mission of making the Senate work again and removing corruption. His closest friend, Dwight Nix, is also his adviser and formerly a Senator. Dwight left after Jack's wife died to help Jack continue his mission.

 

Now, Jack lives on Coruscant, representing the small planet he comes from.

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Species/Race: Sith Pureblood

Name: Ultek

Middle Name: Laken

Last Name: Blackblood

Nickname: Mir

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: 15 BTC

Place of Birth: Voss

Age: 32

Height: 6'11

Weight: 243 lbs.

Hair Color/Style: Bald

Facial Appearance: Strong Appearance with Broad Bone peaks.

Eye Color: Red-Orange

Body Appearance: Muscular w/ Broad Shoulders.

Home Planet: Dromund Kass

Current Residence: Korriban

Allegiance: Sith

Profession: Sith Lord

Armor/Clothes: Heavy Cybernetic Armor, with Red and or Black Cloak

Primary Weapon(s): Red- Black Lightsaber

Secondary Weapon(s): N/A

Miscellaneous Item(s): N/A

 

Biography: Born to a Force-Rich family, Ultek was given high expectations to carry on his dying family name. As a child, Ultek was introduced to a very brutal series of tasks that would harden him into a strong, capable Sith. Ultek exceeded every expectation no-matter what task was laid before him. He has his first kill at the age of 5, and his first Republic kill at 9. Not only were the trials hard, the brutal setting of Voss itself proved to be a challenge for Ultek, his family lived in the harshest region of Voss, known as Naraad Valley. this valley is notorious for very high temperatures, and violent native creatures. When Ultek was 18, he was sent to Korriban to receive formal training. With his brutal trials back home, Ultek flourished on Korriban. His brother, Lord Abaron, was ecstatic about his brothers success that he allowed him to join the group of Acolytes vying for Lord Baras, once again, Ultek won his trials, and became an apprentice. After many months of servitude to Lord Baras. Eventually, he was able to get his own apprentice, and he became Lord Ultek approximately 10 years after he first became an apprentice. For his 2 years of being a Lord, Ultek has won over 34 battles, 12 on Alderaan, 10 on Balmorra, and the other 14 on Hoth. He now overlooks the Acolytes at Korriban with his Brother.

 

 

The Blackblood Family Legacy: The Blackblood line goes back many millennia, and is also the most pure line of Purebloods to date. Some of its most famous members include Ora'Na Blackblood, who destroyed the Republics largest vessel at the time, by himself. Ancient records speak of a Koro Blackblood, he is said to have integrated the first Zabrak into the Sith. Recently, the Blackblood line has lost most of its luster that it once had, however that's about to change...

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Species/Race: Sith Pureblood

Name: Dacarus (Das-er-us)

Middle Name: none

Last Name: none

Nickname: The Shadow of Korriban

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: Unknown

Place of Birth: Korriban

Age: 2,000+

Height: 6'1

Weight: 170 lbs

Hair Color/Style: None

Facial Appearance: Hard to Explain

Eye Color: Red

Body Appearance: Muscular

Home Planet: Korriban

Current Residence: Korriban

Allegiance: Formerly Old Sith Empire, Currently the True Sith (himself)

Profession: Sith Warlord (formerly) Rebel

Armor/Clothes: Thick, Black Armor

Primary Weapon(s): Sith Sword, The Dark Side

Secondary Weapon(s): None

Miscellaneous Item(s): None

Backstory: In The days of old, Dacarus was an ambitious and powerful warlord. His greatest of achievement of the Era was the conquering of ZIost, when it had briefly been taken over by vengeful slaves. He aided Tulak Hord in his early campaigns, but eventually grew thirsty for power and, wanting Tulak Hord's power for himself, attempted to kill the Conqueror. For reasons unknown, Hord spared Dacarus and instead placed and preserved him in the tomb of Ajunta Pall in a similiar fashion to Khem Vhal. He was millennia later freed by a foolish Imperial Archeologists during the events of SWTOR. He founded a Alternate Sith Order known as the True Sith, and using his status as a pure and ancestral Sith, manipulated many Sith, Acolytes and Imperials to joining his cause in another attempt to become ruler of the Sith. There is now a full Civil War waged on Korriban, the Valley of The Dark Lords has been captured and the Sith Academy is the only "place" held by the Sith Empire. The War is currently in the favor of the True Empire and Dacarus has declared himself the "True Emperor" The Dark Councilman Darth Aruk was personally slain by Dacarus.

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Species/Race: Chiss

Name: Oshay'osaffbri'jurouni

Nickname: Yosaffbrij, 'Agent', 'Cipher Nine'

Gender: Female

Date of Birth: 4 BTC (3657 BBY)

Place of Birth: Csaplar, Csilla

 

Age: 13

Height: 157cm (~5'2")

Weight: 51 kg (~113 lbs)

Hair Color/Style: Jet black, cut to hang just to her jawline, but usually kept back

Facial Appearance: Youthful, with soft features that generally reflects her curious nature

Eye Color: Shades of red that vary with her environment, from cerise to scarlet

Body Appearance: Bold blue skin and slight of build, Yosaffbrij is often seen more as a curiosity than a threat - a fact that she takes great advantage of in her work. She is small, even for her age, and not the strongest Chiss in the Ascendancy, but she may well be among the brightest. Her movements are quick and precise, and she clearly has full dominion over her diminutive frame.

 

Home Planet: Csilla

Current Residence: Her ship

Allegiance: The Empire (not necessarily the Sith)

Profession: Agent with Imperial Intelligence

Armor/Clothes: Preferring flexibility to extreme protective garments, Yosaffbrij wears comfortable clothes that allow her to move around with ease. Growing up on an icy planet, she finds most other environs in which she travels to be uncomfortably warm, so prefers to wear as little clothing as possible while maintaining a professional appearance. Most often, this consists of a simple grey or black cropped top and matching pants.

Primary Weapon(s): Blaster Rifle

Secondary Weapon(s): Shiv

Miscellaneous Item(s): Stims, healthpacks, datapads, grenades. Everything an effective Agent needs.

 

Personality: Yosaffbrij does not share the xenophobic outlook held by most of her species, having been raised fascinated by tales of other cultures gleaned from her father's reports and her mother's teaching materials. Instead, she is rather curious about most other species, and has insight into many that often goes ignored by other aliens. She does, however, have a strong disdain for Force users - Light side and Dark alike. She loathes the domineering Sith Force users, disagreeing with the notion that they are fit to run the Empire, and though her experience with those of the Jedi Order is rather limited, she finds them to have a detestable 'holier-than-thou' attitude.

 

In her work, Yosaffbrij prefers to keep it simple. She does not abhor violence, but nor does she revel in it, seeing murder as but one tool in her extensive arsenal for completing tasks assigned to her from Imperial Intelligence. She is also not above using her feminine wiles to get her way, having shared beds with men and women alike to complete her missions.

 

Though extremely loyal to the Empire - and Imperial Intelligence in particular - Yosaffbrij has made a point of kneeling to no one. More than one Sith Lord has struck her down for her insolence, which only solidifies her conviction that those particular Force users are not to be respected - or trusted. She has not yet gone so far as to plan the downfall of any Sith Lords, but she is certainly not above it if they push her too far...

 

Biography: Born the child of an ace pilot in the Chiss Expeditionary Defense Force and an instructor in Xenosociology, Oshay'osaffbri'jurouni grew up hearing many tales of alien civilisations, and had often dreamt of seeing such cultures with her own eyes. By the time she was ten years old, Yosaffbrij had studied reams of knowledge on alien cultures, having practically lived at the Expeditionary Library from the time she could read.

 

At that point, she enlisted as a cadet in the CEDF, hoping to travel the stars and meet new civilisations as her father had. Unfortunately, she had grown up in self-imposed isolation, and did not realise that her bright and curious and generally outgoing nature were not entirely common traits. Another Chiss on the opposite end of their cultural curve teased her incessantly, calling her an 'alien-lover' constantly making snide comments as to the genetic makeup of her potential children. This rivalry culminated in a fight, during which Yosaffbrij got a vicious cut on her cheek. Her study of alien martial arts had paid off, though - the boy did not survive.

 

This, sadly, resulted in her and her family's exile from the Chiss Ascendancy. Fortunately, the Empire either did not know the reason for their exile, or did not care. Yosaffbrij's father became one of the best starfighter pilots in the Imperial Navy, though her mother had to settle for a minor job with Imperial Intelligence - the Empire did not like the idea of an alien, even a Chiss, instructing their youth.

 

Yosaffbrij continued her studies, and after two years of living on Dromund Kaas, her family was finally able to convince Imperial Intelligence that she was indeed ready to begin a career with the organisation. Though they had been allied with the race for years, few in the Empire completely understood just how quickly the Chiss matured - many in I.I. still considered Yosaffbrij a child, even though she could have been a decorated officer in the Chiss military ranks by her age.

 

The girl quickly proved herself, though, taking on the tasks as an Agent with gusto. She proved her mettle by going far above and beyond the call of duty during her first assignment on Nal Hutta, quickly gaining a reputation for clean, efficient work. Her minimal body count did not do much to impress the Sith Lords that tracked her progress, but her Keeper was impressed enough to designate her Cipher Nine after her first assignment.

 

Her current work has the end goal of bringing down an entire terrorist network. In the span of a few weeks, she has already taken down cells on Dromund Kaas, Balmorra and Nar Shaddaa. She sets her sights now on planets as far away as Alderaan and Tatooine - finally getting her dream of exploring the vast galaxy and meeting the creatures of her dreams first-hand.

 

Note: I wrote all this from work. I'll have to wait until I get home to work out some finer details, but this is the gist of the character : )

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Species/Race: Human

Name: Garno

Middle Name: (None)

Last Name: Willsaam

Nickname: Strong-Willed Willsaam

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: 24 TBC

Place of Birth: Tython

Age: 26

Height: 5'11"

Weight: 180 Lbs

Hair Color/Style: Black, short, slicked back

Facial Appearance: Slender nose and face, a scratch-like scar on his right eye

Eye Color: Green

Body Appearance: Slender, muscular

Home Planet: Tython

Current Residence: Coruscant

Allegiance: Republic / Jedi Order

Profession: Jedi Gaurdian / Jedi Council

Armor/Clothes: Jedi Battlelord armor

Primary Weapon(s): Yellow Lightsaber

Secondary Weapon(s): Force abilites, can propel large object at his enemies, force push multiple enemies away at once

Miscellaneous Item(s): Mandalordian necklace around his neck that he obtained from his grandfather.

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Updating it, as I've changed her quite a bit. Aindri's my main and which I've done all content with, so this profile is after chapter 16 of KOTFE.

First Name: Aindri

Middle Name:

Surname: Chaser

Title: Commander, Darth (formerly)

Call Sign: Tempest

Species: Human

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Bisexual

Date of Birth: 31st (don’t star wars months) around 10 years before the Treaty of Coruscant

Homeworld: Ziost

Current residence: Odessen

Current Profession: Commander of the Alliance against the Eternal Empire

Previous Profession: Darth Baras’s enforcer, the Emperor’s Wrath, the Empire’s Wrath

Affiliation: Sphere of Military Offense (formerly), Darth Baras’s power base (formerly) Sith Emperor’s power base (formerly), Order of Revan (formerly), the Sith Order (formerly), the Empire (formerly), Empire’s Fury (formerly), the Alliance

Masters: Overseer Tremel, Darth Baras

Apprentices: Jaesa Willsaam

Alignment: Grey, leaning darkside.

Species: Human

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Bisexual

Age: 20s

Height: 5 foot 8 inches

Weight: 160 pounds

Medical Information: standard vaccinations, blood type AB

Eye Colour: Grey (normal)/yellow (darkside)

Appearance: Aindri is athletically built, with light brown skin and dark blonde hair that reaches to her shoulders. She prefers wearing short sleeved t-shirts with loose trousers and sneakers when not in battle. In battle Aindri wears armoured gauntlets that reach up to the elbow and shoulder guards over a black long sleeved and high neck tunic, combat trousers, armoured boots, and a mask. She also normally wears a long hooded cloak when outside her ship and stronghold.

Primary Weapon: dark red-bladed Lightsaber

Secondary Weapon: dark red-bladed Shoto

Other Weapons: vibroknife, blaster and stilettos

Carried miscellaneous Items: Communicator, Holo Communicator, Med packs, ration packs, tracers, and datapad

Abilities: Aindri has mastered the Shii-Cho, Niman, Ataru and Juyo lightsaber forms, and has received training in Soresu, Makashi, Shien and Djem So. This has led Aindri to develop a composite form, whereby using Niman as a base she incorporates techniques from all lightsaber forms, including more techniques that were more unorthodox. Aindri has also trained in a variety of martial arts, such as Echani. Her willpower is great enough to be able to resist the mind techniques of the Dread Masters. Aindri specialises in telekinetics, having mastered Force Choke and Lightsaber Throw, which she uses in conjunction with lightsaber combat. Aindri also uses the force to augment her physical abilities and senses, has some proficiency with Force Lightning and has inherited the rare Shatterpoint ability.

Personality: Pragmatic, keeps useful opponents alive rather than killing them outright; sarcastic; can show mercy and compassion; respects powerful foes and encourages people to fight her at their best; respects those who try their best; smarter than people realise; often uses psychological tactics whilst fighting, frequently using Dun Moch in combat; hates betrayal; does not share the same anti-alien sentiments as most in the Empire; highly values knowledge and respects those who are experts in their chosen field; dislikes Jedi, though is willing to put this aside and work with them if needed; enjoys turning Jedi to darkside; quick temper.

Biography:

Aindri was born in the outskirts of New Adasta on Ziost to the Chaser Clan, a prominent Sith bloodline. Aindri was trained in lightsaber combat since she was five, learning various lightsaber forms before entering the Academy on Korriban. Being one of the oldest and a potential heir, she was a target of multiple assassination attempts; the worst occurred when she was 8 years old, which almost resulted in her death and took her a full year to recover from. Once she recovered sufficiently to travel, her uncle took her to Dromund Kass where she would stay with him and continue to train in the ways of the Sith. Years later, the entire family was called to the estate on Ziost where her siblings would compete to become the one who would train at the Academy on Korriban. At the gathering, Aindri would go on to defeat all her siblings, earning the right to study at Korriban and becoming the heir to the bloodline. Tremel, whom was visiting the head of the family, was impressed by this and had Aindri come to the academy early.

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Wall 'o text.

I appreciate the fact that you went through the trouble of typing all of that. It shows that you are dedicated to your character and that's awesome. Having said that, you character has some serious next-level mary-sue going on.

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meh, I know, but when you watch a lot of anime and read loads of manga, you start to imagine your characters as ridiculously powerful so they can keep up with the mains ones. So its a force of habit to make fictional versions of me as you say have 'some serious next-level mary-sue going on.':D. Believe it or not, that's the toned down version.
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meh, I know, but when you watch a lot of anime and read loads of manga, you start to imagine your characters as ridiculously powerful so they can keep up with the mains ones. So its a force of habit to make fictional versions of me as you say have 'some serious next-level mary-sue going on.':D. Believe it or not, that's the toned down version.

Well, if you'd like, I could help you craft a more believeable character instead of this anime-esque version you have going on.

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So first I say sorry, because my english is not that good (or how we would say in germany, badly translated into english: "My english is not the yellow of the egg")

 

Name: Glukho

Species: Sith Pureblood/Cyborg

Age: 29 Years old

Hair Color: / (he is bald since his accident)

Eye Color: Red

Height: 1,85 Meters

Homeworld: Before it's destruction, Ziost. Now, Dromund Kaas

Class: Sith Marauder

Titles: Lord, Enforcer of the Triumvirate

Guild: Translated, The Sith Triumvirate. Original name, Das Sith Triumvirat (german guild)

Nickname: The monster of Taris

Weapon(s) of Choice: 2 Lightsabers with black-purple color crystals

Armor: Enhanced Assailant (used as a Vader like Suit that keeps him alive/helps him healing)

Special Events in his life:

The Duel on Taris: Glukho hunted down the Zabrak Jedi Knight Kenzera on the planet Taris. The duel started in the ChemWorks, near the Brell Sediment. The duel ended after the Jedi destroyed the catwalk under Glukho's feet. He fell into a vats of acid like chemicals.

The Recreation: After the duel on Taris, the Sith somehow managed to survive and crawled out of the building, where he was found by a group of imperial soldiers. He was handed over to the Triumvirate, where he was turned into a cyborg, so he would survive. Shortly after he became a Lord of the Sith.

The Duel at Axial Park: During the battle of Corellia, Glukho was one of the many Imperials that fought at Axial Park. Spies of the Triumvirate told him, that the Jedi, that turned him into "the monster of taris", was in a hotel nearby. With the order from his master, he grabbed a squad of Mandalorians that worked with them and began the attack. While the Mandalorians fought against the SpecForce soldiers of the republic, searched Glukho for the Jedi. He found him on the roof of the Hotel, where he was watching over the battle. The Jedi told him that he was now a Jedi Master and that Glukho would have no chance against him. The Duel ended when the Jedi was thrown of the building thanks to a kick from Glukho.

 

Personality: Glukho was a nice (as nice as a Sith can get) person, who loved a fair fight and had, most of the time, respect for his enemies. That changed after the accident on Taris. Now, filled with rage and alway in pain, he had no more respect, he didn't care about a fair and honorable fight, all he wanted was destroying his enemies.

He only trusts the people that fight for the Triumvirate and sees imperial troops as cannon fodder.

 

Weakness (because, I don't want a mary sue like character) : His Rage can be his greatest strength, but most of the time, it's a weakness. In blind rage, he loses any caution, goes into the full offensive, but forgets his defense. A skilled Jedi/Sith, or even a non force user that acts from the shadows (a sniper, for example) could easily get him while he is raging.

Also, even after almost 2 years, he is still in pain from the wounds he got on Taris. They only heal slowly and sometime the pain gets so intense, that he will collapse.

His suit, while it gives him strength and helps him with the healing, can be his downfall. If someone manages to damage it to much, the life systems will fail and Glukho will die slow and painfully, when no one has the chance to get him back into a medbay.

 

Once again: Sorry for my bad english. Never wrote something like this in english :o

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