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thatghost
12.10.2012 , 07:25 AM | #21
Quote: Originally Posted by iamthehoyden View Post
Lol, she's in good company. And the shock of Rusk enjoying himself - I may keel over.
<3 Hoyden Yep. And after the dancer debacle I had to cut Rusk a little slack (I felt guilty). Just a little.

(possible next chapter late tonight, and I need to catch up with TSFWCT too...agh what a weekend it was)

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tipsy_llama
12.12.2012 , 07:20 PM | #22
So I'm ashamed to admit that I actually read the post mere hours after you updated(...roughly 4am EST...) and did not comment until now.

I blame finals.

The last post was a bit odd and disjointed as you said. Still delightful to read though.

(The username came from the mind of a twelve year old who just learned of the word "tipsy" and had a fixation on llamas due to a) the llama song and b) a llama who ate her favorite flowery shirt at some odd petting zoo when she was five. While she was still wearing it.)

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thatghost
12.13.2012 , 06:27 PM | #23
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So I'm ashamed to admit that I actually read the post mere hours after you updated(...roughly 4am EST...) and did not comment until now.

I blame finals.
Ouch, finals >_< hope you aced them and I'm disgustingly flattered that you'd even be wanting to read at 4 am after that <3

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The last post was a bit odd and disjointed as you said. Still delightful to read though.
I know LOL a horrid horrid bug and it made me more than a little bit wonky and unfocused..."delightful" = thank you so, another week made! more <3

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(The username came from the mind of a twelve year old who just learned of the word "tipsy" and had a fixation on llamas due to a) the llama song and b) a llama who ate her favorite flowery shirt at some odd petting zoo when she was five. While she was still wearing it.)
Aha...wait...ate her shirt? Llamas eat clothing?! ("llama song"- only one which comes to mind is Monty Python- is there another llama song I don't know?)

(next chapter is still in the works...if the rest of the night stays smooth I anticipate posting)

(JINX LOL...connection is fluctuating wildly, took a break from writing and may have just wiped in spectacular fashion in Maelstrom...d'oh...think it's bedtime)

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thatghost
12.17.2012 , 08:30 PM | #24
VII: Looking Sideways
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VIII: Unmasking
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IX: Chokepoints
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thatghost
12.24.2012 , 01:37 PM | #25
Getting this latest chapter finished and posted was my Xmas gift to myself
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iamthehoyden
12.26.2012 , 09:06 AM | #26
Mmmm Scourge
I've only seen a couple jk stories where the jk/Doc relationship works. Always seemed like a smuggler or bh companion. I like your Doc though, there's more to him than surface.
aren't you a little short for a stormtrooper?
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thatghost
12.26.2012 , 11:59 AM | #27
Quote: Originally Posted by iamthehoyden View Post
Mmmm Scourge
I've only seen a couple jk stories where the jk/Doc relationship works. Always seemed like a smuggler or bh companion. I like your Doc though, there's more to him than surface.
Scourge is a torturous enigma (no pun intended with the 'torturous')

I state the below as opinion only, ymmv:
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Thanks Hoyden <3

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thatghost
12.28.2012 , 03:55 AM | #28
X: Pale Blue
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XI: Just Walk Away
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XII: Gradations

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silvershadows
12.28.2012 , 10:52 PM | #29
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Scourge is a torturous enigma (no pun intended with the 'torturous')
Doc just doesn't seem to fit with JKs. Perfect Smug companion, possibly a good companion for a LS BH. He did constantly crack me up during the class story, though; the levity was wonderful, and maybe that's why he was slated for the JK crew.
I need to let up on him, I really do, I've been pretty harsh...
Thanks Hoyden <3

Doc fits the JK very well if you actually take the time to get to know his real personality and learn to look beneath the surface. There's a reason I enjoy writing Doc (the REAL Doc) and a reason I can't stand anyone else writing about him
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irishfino
12.29.2012 , 12:44 PM | #30
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There's a reason I enjoy writing Doc (the REAL Doc) and a reason I can't stand anyone else writing about him
This sounds like a personal attack. You're welcome to your own opinion and your own interpretation of a character, but do not belittle someone else's because you don't agree. A smiley face does not make your comment any less rude or any more of a joke. If you don't have actual criticism to offer, please, keep comments like these to yourself.

Please continue writing, thatghost. I haven't commented, but I'm always reading.
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