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happysister's Avatar

10.14.2012 , 04:46 PM | #11
enjoying everyone's stories!

My Gunslinger

Lorhin and her sister Sashel were found on Nar Shaddaa by a chiss jedi when they were little children. he took them back to the jedi temple where they met his pure blood friend. the latter eventually adopted them and raised them in the freighter ship he lived in. when the girls grew older, their adopted father enlisted in the Republic military and left them to live in the freighter alone. Lorhin and Sashel started their smuggling careers by delivering supplies to their father's unit whenever there was an emergency. what started as small jobs turned into a "family business", and a profitable one at that. Lorhin continued smuggling cargo throughout Republic territories while her sister eventually went back to Nar Shaddaa to set up her own medical business in the underworld. eventually, Lorhin took that fateful job which carried her to her current occupation as a Republic Privateer. She still keeps up her old smuggling job on the side.

For those of you who want a chart:
Name: Lorhin Kipplar Riggs
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Planet of Origin: Nar Shaddaa
Occupation: Smuggler/Republic Privateer
Ship Name: The Harvester - Lorhin named it that since she flies it around, "harvesting" credits with every new job.
Relationships: married to Corso, close to Risha, good friends with Bowdaar, Akaavi, and Guss
Physical Attributes
Hair color: burnette
Hair length: Short
Eye color: green
Body type: 2
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 136 lbs
Blemishes: none...that are visible anyways
Tone of voice: sarcastic and playful

1. Hutts
2. not getting paid
3. sith - they're so overrated
4. bullies in general
5. betrayal

1. her family and crew
2. credits
3. her ship
4. keeping busy
5. revenge

1. Lorhin eventually meets a Mirialan jedi who she teams up with on a couple Republic jobs. Lorhin becomes the jedi's go-to contact, and the two become close friends.
2. during her short stay on Tython as a child, she scammed a padawan out of his lightsaber.
3. she has a stuffed womp rat she sleeps with every night. its name is Jinkies.
Lorhin - SS/DF Gunslinger
Sashel - Sawbones Scoundrel

Timarick's Avatar

10.14.2012 , 08:05 PM | #12
Name: Taoré Timarick
Age: 25
Species: Human
Eyes: Green
Hair: Dirty Blond
Height: 5'9
Weight: 175lbs
YOB: 3665 BBY
Homeworld: Ossus (born on Corellia)

Class: Jedi Knight
Advanced Class: Jedi Guardian

Affiliation: Jedi Order, Galactic Republic, Champions of the Force

Rank: Jedi Master
Status: Alive
Marital Status: Married to Kara (Kira) Carson (Carsen)
Known Apprentices: Kara Carson (Kira), Artimos, Nexer


Personality: Despite attaining the rank of Jedi Master, Taoré is still very youthful, and with that comes a seemingly endless pool of energy from which he draws upon to connect with people and the galaxy around him. Often making people laugh, telling jokes, always with a light-hearted, if occasionally explosive and sarcastic demeanour. However, underneath it all lies wisdom and knowledge far beyond his years, as well as a seething pool of internal struggle between utmost serenity and stillness, and a furious storm of chaos. Despite his ever-present energy, he firmly believes in the past and the future both influencing one another, and the present, but that ultimately, choice is what people have, and that choice seperates good from bad, and that we as people can always choose to do what is right. He can be a bit obsessive over things he enjoys (but not to any extreme his peers would frown upon), and always the first to speak out and rattle off fun facts and occasional useless information all for the sake of entertainment. He is also born with a HUGE rebellious nature, and will always stand for what is right, even when it goes against what his superiors believe, which is often, such as his belief in attachments, and isn't in the slightest afraid of telling anyone and everyone off for their foolishness. For this reason, above all, he is considered a maverick (a womanizer for a time) and labelled a "Gray Jedi" by his peers. He cares very deeply for others and will happily throw himself in harm's way to defend others.

Allies: Jedi Kara Carson (Wife, Former Informal Padawan);
Doc Kimble;
Lord Scourge;

Sergeant Shonto Reed-Timarick (Half-Brother/Clone);
Jedi Cayst Timarick (Sister-in-Law)
Captain Josh Grantan
Vera Varela
Master Ashling Cato;
Jedi Astarra Vin;
Jedi Artimos (Former Padawan);
Padawan Nexer; (Informal Padawan)
Padawan Lunika Koumori (Informal Padawan)
Padawan Laranna (Informal Padawan)
Padawan Zoralia;
Master Ty Eid (Former Master, MIA);
Master Rahmé Timarick (Father; Status: Active, Whereabouts: Unknown);

Grand Master Satele Shan;
Master Orgus Din (Deceased);
Revan (Status: Unknown)
Colonel Jace Malcolm
Lieutenant Larin Moxla

Enemies: Lord Kayven (Brother)
Sith Apprentice Saeja Kanno (Former Ally)
Agent Angeleecka Dimock
Darth Gabronth

Darth Malgus (Status: Unknown)
Darth Angral (Deceased)
Grand Moff Kilran (Deceased)

Weapons and Gear: Lightsaber (Hilt: Standard, Crystal: Green), Standard Jedi Equipment (including commlinks, jump lines, rebreather, scramblers, medkits, image caster, homing beacon), Jedi Robes (of black, grey, and beige colour) with additional light armor plates. Owner of a small Corellian Corvette, courtesy of the Jedi Order

Skills: Expert Hand-to-Hand combatant;
Master swordsman (specializing in Form V of Lightsaber combat in both variations, with adequate training in Form I, Form III, Form IV, and Form VI);
Capable of using the Dun Moch capability, often considered a "Sith" skill, but without succumbing to the Dark Side
Talented Speaker with great communication skills
Underrated Leadership Skills;
Underrated Tactical knowledge
Vast Knowledge of Myth and History
Capable Piloting skills
Skilled Archaeologist

Powers: Underutilized, but potent, telekinetic capabilities, capable of sending droids several times his size and strength flying with a simple push through the Force or sending charged telekinetic bursts focused through his lightsaber. He can also bend this telekinetic prowess to slow or even stop foes dead in their tracks for a short while or even break out of even the tightest restraints, including another Force user's own telekinetic use. He can also throw his lightsaber in conjunction with his telekinesis for sneak attacks and long range blows that seldom miss.

He has also shown an aptitude for the Affect Mind capabilities, one being very skilled with the "Mind Trick" but also in the subtler fashion of influencing people's thoughts, either to rally or to debuff, whether it be a war cry, taunting opponents to attack him, or get inside their heads with the often considered "Sith" technique known as the Dun Moch.

He has shown on many occasions he has an aptitude for Battle Meditation and minor skill in the Art of the Small, capable of using it's healing capabilities to great effect, though it requires the utmost concentration to effectively use the latter, whilst it is an simple matter for him to execute the former.

Taoré is also quite capable of using the Force to greatly enhance his strength, agility, speed, and leaping capabilities, often incorporating his natural agility to incorporate other elements of lightsaber combat outside of his comfort zone.

Though limited in his telepathic abilities, he can sense changes in people's emotions, and when he focuses, can often guess what a person is thinking without actually knowing for sure what it is inside their minds.

Though entirely unaware and can never access this ability, his spirit is unique in the Force that every few generations after his death, will return from the Force to the land of the living to continue to battle as one of the many avatars of the light against the darkness, returning at times when the galaxy is on the brink of collapse, and hope is lost. ((ie. NOT WHEN SOMEONE LIKE A LUKE SKYWALKER IS AROUND TO SAVE THE UNIVERSE!))

Likes - People who take charge of their lives
Strong Women
People with a good sense of humor
Helping others (even when he doesn't like them)
His Friends

Dislikes - Authority
People who hurt others for pleasure
People who don't even try to take care of themselves
Giving Up

Jessnjam's Avatar

10.15.2012 , 04:43 AM | #13
Wow! Great stories, guys! I updated my story so I can have more details. And I have a shout out to Spikespiegel! XD
Thanks for the help for JK Finale.
Healing like a boss.
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GloriousMelody's Avatar

10.15.2012 , 10:41 AM | #14
I actually re rolled my inquisitor so now she is now Aureva! anyway...

Aureva was born and spent most of her childhood in space and so considers her ship to be the closest thing she has to home.

A former slave to a once great imperial Political figure. experienced a shocking amount of comfort despite the cruel treatment her master inflicted on most of his other slaves.

soon before the events that led her to Korriban, A rival politician revealed to Aureva that the reason that her master did not mark her face and treats her almost like a human instead of a slave, is because he is her biological father. (not that he refrained from working her mother to death)

just as she was trying to comprehend this new found knowledge, Aureva was liberated from her position mostly due to collateral damage. she and her master were on a planet for business when her master was among the slave masters killed due to an order to liberate the slaves strong in the force.

Aureva is 19 at the start.

Has red brown hair and amber eyes.

has a slim figure

initally was wary of Andronikos becaue of her dislike of men believing them to be cruel by nature. (her primary examples being her master and Harkun) after Zash betrayed Aureva, she became very aware that women can be just as horrible as men. so she gradually adjusted and is now very close to Andronikos whom after getting to know him, she permitted herself to embrace her attraction to him. possibly due to the fact that he embodies traits she wishes she could allow herself to embrace.

Wants to be friendly with Ashara but cannot bring herself to be fully comfortable around her. (possibly due to their contrasting back rounds)

Gets along quite well with Talos as they share similar interests.

Adores Khem and teasingly refers to him as Khemmy!

Tolerates her apprentice. if she had her way she would be mentoring the Twi'lek..

This is a work in progress, I will add more later...

Ekas's Avatar

10.15.2012 , 11:57 AM | #15
Hey, Jessnjam, you might wanna keep the part of your post that has actual Jedi Knight story bits under a spoiler tag. You don't want people to get spoiled with no warning, do you?

I'll edit later with my story.

Edit: Here's the one of my characters.

Name: Oridan Bendolo (His name is not derived from Obi-Wan (Ben) Kenobi. The similarity is a coincidence, I swear!)
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Hair color: Dark Brown
Eye color: Blue
Class: Jedi Guardian
Lightsaber Color: Blue
Planet of Origin: His family was originally from Alderaan, born on Coruscant.
Romance: Kira Carsen.
Padawans: Kira Carsen, Parthunir Pan (my twi'lek Shadow) and an unknown Chiss Consular (a planned character of mine)

Generations ago, Oridan's family, the Bendolos, were minor nobles on Alderaan. The family fell on hard times, and lost their noble status long before Oridan was born. The Bendolos would still cling to their old ideals of honor and integrity however, and many members of the family would serve in the republic military with distinction, all the way up to Oridan's own time, when his brother, Cid Bendolo, joined the Republic Special Forces.

Perhaps Oridan would have joined the republic military as well, had he not been found to be force-sensitive at a young age. As a padawan of the Jedi Order, he proved to be capable lightsaber duelist, and a bit of a recluse; Oridan would prefer to keep to himself when he could. He eventually ended his training on Tython and became a full knight of the Order.

There's more, but that's all I felt like writing right now. Ciao.

TalonVII's Avatar

10.15.2012 , 03:39 PM | #16
Ok, I have a new toon, an Imperial Agent.

Name: Kiaran'salee
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Race: Chiss
Planet of Origin: Csilla
Occupation: Imperial Operative
Hair color- Blue
Hair length- Close Cropped
Eye color- Red
Body type- Wiry
Weight- 135 lbs
Tone of voice- Soft spoken and quiet.

1. Sith Interference
2. Ineffiency
3. Jedi
4. Beaurocrats
5. Bad intel, or whitewashing events.

1. Excitement
2. Adventure
3. Doing the job right
4. Good Tech
5. Good whiskey

Growing up on Csilla, Kira[for short] went to the Chiss Military academy from a young age, and was chosen for infiltration and wetwork due to solid sense of self and the ability to think on her feet. Transferring to Imperial Intelligence at 18 she went to Dromund Kass for further training and now does spying, espoinage, and anything that needs done.

She has done ops from the outer rim to the core to the unknown regions. Where ever she is needed, that is where she goes.
Pretty, so what do we blow up first? -Wraith Squadron Motto
Ebon Hawk
Skiratta Legacy

Jessnjam's Avatar

10.15.2012 , 04:41 PM | #17
I added spoilers! forgot that not everyone has leveled their knight... XD put the whole story in spoilers so people can skip over it if they want to.
Healing like a boss.
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Reynaga's Avatar

10.19.2012 , 12:32 PM | #18
Given name: Krone Korbin
Name: Darth Gargauth
Known aliases: Many aliases, most are unrecorded.
Species: Human
Age: 34
Height: 2.2 m
Weight: 122 kg
Eye color: Grey
Hair color: Silver
Skin color: Tan
Faction: Empire, Grim Determination
Birthplace: Sernpidal
Relatives: Triplet Miraluka daughters and a Sith daughter.
Occupation before Sith Warrior: Wanderer
Ship Name: The Wandering Servant
Romance: Jaesa Willsaam (married)
Relationships: Darth Gargauth's crew is expendable if it serves the Empire (especially Quinn, minus Jaesa) but he will fight to the death for any one of them.
Blemishes- Scars over the right eye, and over his entire body (a road map of pain and anguish)
Tone of voice- Calm and even hiding the rage that blazes just below the surface.

1. The Republic
2. Betrayal
3. Disruptions
4. Self important attitudes
5. Spiders (nothing in the universe needs eight legs)

1. Jaesa's smile
2. Plans coming to fruition
3. Crush his enemies
4. See them driven before him
5. And to hear the lamentation of their women

Follow the link in my signature for the synopsis of the origins of Darth Gargauth.
The Korbin Legacy B.C.
"When fighting monsters, one must take care not to become a monster themselves." F. N.

VarrusTheEthical's Avatar

10.19.2012 , 01:24 PM | #19
My Commando

Volk Starshield was born on Coruscant during the Great Galactic War. He was fourteen years old when he witnessed the Sith Empire's attack on Coruscant at the end of the war. During the attack, he was able to save his ten year old sister, Valarah, but their parents were killed during the attack.

With the help of relatives and a moderate inheritance, Volk was able to raise is sister in comfort until he reached the age of eighteen, when he enlisted in the Republic Army. After basic training, Volk was immediately sent into combat operations in the Outer Rim, where he fought for six years, distinguishing himself in combat against separatists, pirates, and the Sith.

It was at the end of his tour, having earned the rank of sergeant, that Volk had his first encounter with Sith Lord, who killed his squad to a man, and left Volk to die after scourging him with force lightning.

Rescued by the Republic, Volk spent a year in a military hospital, with cybernetics derived from the Power Guard project used to mend his injuries and return him to active service. After being cleared for duty, Volk was sent to Ord Mantel to join the elite ranks of Havoc Squad...

Name: Volk Starshield
Age: 25 (at game start)
Gender: Male
Homeworld: Coruscant
Occupation: Major, CO of Havoc Squad.

Physical description:
Standing a full two meters tall, Volk's body was left heavily muscled after his Power Guard derived augmentations, allowing him to wield even the heaviest of assault cannons with ease.

Volk has brown hair and one brown eye. The left side of his face is covered with lightning scars, and his left eye is covered with a metal patch to protect the delicate cybernetic eye that allows him to fire his assault cannon accuratly.

The Sith Empire
Sith Lords

Big blasters
Shooting Sith with said big blasters
Elara's accent
The Republic
The Army

Fun facts:
Personal nemesis to the Emperor's Wrath.
Ally of the Hero of Tython.
His younger sister, Valarah, grew up to become a Smuggler.
The Starshield Legacy

Volk- Commando, Dahl- Jedi Guardian, Palantine- Sith Juggernaut.

stormdrakelord's Avatar

10.19.2012 , 08:21 PM | #20
I'll do my Agent

Khatria was not actually born in the empire, But the republic. She lived on the streets of Coruscant with her former friend and lover, Kai-Lynne, of Republic Special Forces. Kai-lynne was the muscle of the pair, and Khatria was the brains. They always talked about Kai-lynne's dream to fight for the republic, and Khatria always disagreed. When they were both of age, Kai-lynne went to Republic military boot camp, which ended the relationship. Khatria came to join Imperial Intelligence due to infiltrating a transport that was carrying Dark council member Darth Jaedus (spelling?). Due to her Cybertech and Slicing skills, which took her all the way to the engine room of said ship, Darth Jaedus asked her to join the empire's Intelligence agency instead of killing her. She agreed, using it as a chance to get back at the republic for taking her lover from her.

Basic info
Name: Khatria
Age: 21
Race: Blonde-haired human Cyborg (Had an implant to help with her slicing and "Droid craft", Got visible cybernetics when she "joined" Imperial Intelligence)
Planet of Origin: Coruscant
Occupation before Agent: Pirate looking for loot on the wrong ship
Ship name and reason: Heartbreaker: Because her job breaks the heart of anyone affected by it
Reason for naming: just because
Romance: none, for she thinks that romance=heartbreak
Physical Appearance
Hair color: Blonde
Hair length: Ponytail type look
Eye color: Blue
Body type: Average
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 150 LBS.
Blemishes: None to speak of

Planned build:

Also here is my Trooper:

Kai-lynne was born in the republic. She lived on the streets of Coruscant with her former friend and lover, Khatria. Kai-lynne was the muscle of the pair, and Khatria was the brains. They always talked about Kai-lynne's dream to fight for the republic, and Khatria always disagreed. When they were both of age, Kai-lynne went to Republic military boot camp, which ended the relationship. Since then, Kai-lynne swore that she would never fall in love again. She was the top in her class in both assault specialization and Melee-range tactical combat. She was just getting use to her military career when she was sent to Ord Mantell.

Basic info
Name: Kai-lynne
Age: 21
Planet of Origin: Coruscant
Occupation before Trooper: none
Ship name and reason: Does not name ship
Reason for naming: just because
Romance: Still missing her lover, my agent
Physical Appearance
Hair color: Brown
Hair length: short
Eye color: gold
Body type: Amazonian
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 195 LBS.
Blemishes: scar from grenade backfire

Planned build:
Han Solo: Great, kid. Don't get cocky.