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06.04.2012 , 01:52 PM | #1
I love the story lines but i think the jedi end of chapter 2 needs a little more, maybe the character needs a visible scar, the crew needs some input in what happened to them, and the end with the mind struggle needs to be a bit deeper it just seemed a bit too easy.

I am trying to write this without giving too much of the story line away for furter people.