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05.21.2013 , 04:09 AM | #10
I was a little confused when you out of nowhere started referring to someone called Cheeznuts, a character you had not introduced, and then just as soon stopped using this name. I guess this is the little old lady? Seems obvious but it comes over kind of odd the way you do that.

Other than that, it's a great read. Keep it up, please.