It's nice to know I might have just killed Luke.

 

Too bad you're all still fighting for second place...

Too bad you're all still fighting for second place...

 

Because you created the Hades of Star Wars.

Because you created the Hades of Star Wars.

 

Yes I did.

This isn't a thread to kill Luke, just to give him challenging enemies/obstacles.

 

I know but sometimes it's nice to dream.

Sounds interesting:

 

Name: Gorvlak San

 

Birthplace: Balmorra

 

Age: 30

 

Occupation: Head of SanStar Security Corporation.

 

Bio: Gorvlak San was born with a strange talent: He could see ten seconds into the future, constantly. This became apparent when he was able to subdue an a Stormtrooper at age 8. Realizing his son was strong in the Force, his father went with him to Coruscant to try and uncover Jedi holocrons, so that he may receive training. However, Stormtroopers were there ahead of him, killing his father and forcing Gorvlak into exile in the streets of the Coruscant underworld. He eventually grew into a cold-hearted individual, starting his own security business. By the time he was 28, he decided to strike out with his company to rise to the top, becoming a wild-card faction in the Galactic Civil War before fading into obscurity. Now, he seeks revenge on both sides: The Imperial Remnants, for his father's death, and the Galactic Alliance, for accepting their surrender.

I'd like them to do a twin thing, as a contrast to him and Leia. Except they are more like Tomax and Xamot, completing each others sentences and fighting as one. Might be campy, but think of how campy some of the things in Star Wars are already. Pons Limbic, Trioculus, and of course Klaatu, Barada, Nikto, the homage to "The Day The Earth Stood Still."

OK here it is took me a long while to get here but this is my "enemy"

 

Also for those that haven't seen the show in the links and want to avoid the last link its a major spoiler.

 

 

First must establish the world. The world in which this person lives on is incredibly primitive the most advanced things they have is the steam engine and hot air balloon's along with fantastic metal working. In this world they have not discovered chemistry yet and believe the world to be made up of only 4 elements Water, Earth, Fire and Air. Each portion of the world has adopted one of these "elements" as a part of their culture and the force sensitives born in each region believe that they can manipulate the element of their nation through martial arts thus their powers. because of the lack of powerful technology the most common weapons are melee weapons embewed with the force.

 

Those of the Fire nation can use incredibly powerful Alter Enviroment, Tutanimis and Force Lightning skills. Their Alter Enviroment skill is used solely for heating things up and they have both great control and great power with this ability literally able to heat the sky so much that fire is shot from their hands. Essentially this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-BnVP5Rlqnk. Obviously the standard increased reflexes do to seeing things just before they happen and the martial arts training is a given

 

Those of the Water nation can also use Atler Enviroment but only use it to affect the forms of water as they believe that is all they can do, changing its form from Ice to mist to liquid at a whim instantaneously. They also have the power of force healing and can heal most any wound near instantly. Of course incredibly powerful telekinetics are also part of their powers but most believe that they can only manipulate water though some have manipulated other things with the exuse that they were just moving the water inside that thing not realizing they were actually stepping into the larger world of telekinetics. A rare few have learned to telekinetically control others by bending the water inside the blood of the person. Though many can not do so with out a powerful force Nexus. Essentially this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-VKjGrhpJI

 

The people of the earth nation are also Master telekinetics but they to are limited in the belief they can only move rock, sand or things made of "earth". They also have some skill in force empewed strength at varrieing levels of strength with very minor when used against people but incredibly powerful when they are knowingly using it against the only "element" they think they can affect. A few have learned the ability to use the force to sense their surrounding by feeling the vibrations in the earth, as well as even manipulating Metal the same way they do stone.

 

Essentially this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ukr5c07gaUI

 

 

There is only one person left from the Air nation and he not only mastered his peoples style which was a powerful Variant on Alter Enviroment where large whirlwinds and gusts of air were easy to summon for them along with force pushes, pulls and force waves. force flight was particularly simple for them. As well as being capable of incredible feats of Force speed. Essentially this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OKmluL9VRAs. This person was also known by this world as the "Avatar" thus allowing him learn all 4 of the nations styles in addition to this he also learned to Sever some ones connection to the force if he got his hands on them. In addition he has millions of powerful force ghosts living inside him and when he calls on their power his abilities increase drastically. He is a genuinely good person and because of this Luke would hold back but he may see Luke as a threat to the balance of the world. He will never kill as it is not his way but he will do anything to restore balance he fights with a force embewed staff. Essentially this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j3dT8oK7y80.

 

When I said it was Avatar the last airbender inspired I mean a total rip off using the logic that was used as to why the nightsisters "magic" was different .

Edited September 16, 2013 by tunewalker

I'll try creating another enemy for Luke.....Luke Skywalker will be crushed

Sooooooooo I got a little bored and made this guy,

 

Age: Unknown

Homeworld: Unknown

Species: Unknown

 

Physicality: Standing roughly 8 feet tall and having a seemingly muscular frame, although not much can be told for sure beneath the pitch black armor he wears. His armor itself is imposing making him blend into the shadows. It’s made using a long lost art form that has by the standards of the Galactic Empire been completely forgotten. Whatever it is made from is strong enough that no dents can be found on it and it appears invulnerable to blaster fire.

 

Bio: Worshiped as a god by many ancient civilizations the Harbringer was eventually locked in a form of stasis several millennia before the rise of the Infinite Empire. Even though he was locked away his mind was still able to wander and he watched the galaxy bidding his time until his return. The temple in which he was imprisoned was eventually found in the Obroa-skai system, on a barren moon. Awakened in 19 BBY by an Imperial archaeological team he made his official return to the galaxy to fulfill his ultimate goal.

 

The Harbinger himself views his goal as balancing the galaxy, even though some would say the “cleansing” of advanced life is balancing. It was in ancient days that he began and many species rose and fell because of him, although he always came before the “Greater Destruction” as it is referred to in the few texts that remain from the days before the Republic. How he came to be locked away is all but a mystery but if the carvings in the temple like structure, where he was found, are any indication it was more or less willingly. The carvings seem to indicate that he and some other being similar to him, referred to only as the Father, held a long discourse that led to his internment inside the temple, where he has been waiting for over 40,000 years.

 

Now released into the galaxy once again he moves to reset the galaxy to its state of balance, this time though he must release the “Greater Destruction” for he alone can control it.

 

 

Powers/Abilities:

Force Possession: able to possess anyone he can see/hear from anywhere in the galaxy

Force Indoctrination: those who spend much time in his presence are indoctrinated and become slaves to his will

Force Blast

Force lightning-to its fullest extent

Force healing

Force speed

Force cloak

Exceptional Battle Precognition

Alter Environment

Deadly Sight

Drain Knowledge-can do just with a touch

Force Drain

Force Destruction

Force Slow

Pyrokinesis

Force Crush

Spear of Midnight Black

Memory Walk

Force Sight

Phase

Force Weapon

Shatterpoint

 

Lightsaber Skills: Wielding weapons of more archaic design, notably a huge battle-axe, which when wielded by him is just as powerful if not more so that a lightsaber.

 

Feats:

Destroyed Worlds-through several different methods

Indoctrinated those who sought to manipulate him

Possessed one of his minions from across the galaxy

Learned the modern history of the galaxy and basic through one short touch

Has never been defeated in combat no matter the odds

Ok Here Goes:

 

Name: His original name was lost, he now simply goes by The Outcast

Species: Yuzhaan Vong

Origin:

Originally a fanatic of the Yuzhaan Vong, he slowly developed doubts over the usefulness of their bio-manipulations, and eventually left them as a Shamed One, leaving everything about him behind including his name. He found refuge with the New Republic where he found he had a knack for technology, and set to work making equipment to help refugees settle on new planets, and eventually became a respected member of the republic.

 

However, everything was to go downhill. After the war, he began to reconnect to the Yuzhaan Vong, only to be rejected at every attempt to make contact. The feelings of loneliness at being rejected by his own people started to eat away at him. Eventually, he encountered Abeloth, who showed him that he was living a lie, and while Abeloth couldn't directly inflence him due to his lack of connection to the force, she still managed to convince him that the rest of the Vong had to die, because they couldn't accept him.

 

From that he went into seclusion, moving between planets on his custom-made starship, picking up different pieces of technology as well as learning more about how it works. Using his knowledge, as well as the materials he scavenged over his journeys, he made a suit entirely out of cortosis that runs using advanced cybernetics while combined with the best shield-generation techniques possible, giving him significantly improved strength, near invulnerability, and access to some of the most dangerous firepower in the galaxy with a mere thought, which he decides to use to commit genocide against his own species...

 

ABILITIES:

As a Yuzhaan Vong, he is completely immune to the force

His armor is made completely out of Cortosis, making lightsabers more than useless against it, to the extent they short out when they make contact with it.

The Shields are more powerful than those used by the trade federation on their droidekas, able to withstand pretty much every handheld weapon currently available, and even some vehicle-based weapons, such as those on an

AT-ST

Streamlined flight systems, as opposed to a traditional jetpack his armor has the ability to completely negate gravity (to a safe extent)

His armor also includes Infra-red, sonar and air-displacement sensors (the 3rd one is able to determine if something is taking up space, regardless of if there is a heat signature or if it has the same density as air)

Finally, he is able to communicate to technology with his mind due to the nature of the cybernetic implants he has, making any attempt at using computer-assisted weapons against him completely useless.

His weapons include:

A Cortosis Sword, technologically modified to have destructive abilities similar to that of a lightsaber

A heavily modified turbolaser array that is able to be mounted onto his armor without any issues in stability or mobility.

Wrist mounted missile system

And his shield generator can be modified on the fly to swap between unbreakable, and less invulnerable but causes feedback on any attack that hits it, resulting in immense pain for taking it on with a melee weapon, or blasters simply flying off.

I got one, try this on for size.

 

Name: Moyter

Place of Birth: Gen'Dai Homeworld

Age: approx. 4,000 years

Species: Gen'Dai

 

Powers/Abilities:

 

As a Gen'Dai he had all the natural abilities that entails including regeneration, reflexes, and strength. He learned from both Jedi and Sith eventually forsaking both and embracing a philosophy akin to Alema Rar's The Balance.

 

He is highly skilled saber duelist and over his thousands of years of careful study, mastered all forms save for Vaapad. He can then put this into use combined with telekenesis to wield six to eight sabers at a time. four through his mind, and one in each hand with the ability to produce an extra two hands. (he enjoys Jar'kai). USe of all the sabers is rare and difficult, only achieved in rare moments of perfect clarity. He prefers to dual wield with 2 sabers wielded telekenetically. He also learned to use and collected other weapons such as lightwhips, force pikes, and darksabers though he considers them inferior to sabers, but useful in their own ways. He wears a helmet of Mandalorian Armor designed and enchanted by Sith alchemists to enhance the power of his force illusions. He also wears a cloak that can tear away but is laced with corotis to resist saber strikes to his back and that can dissolve into a smoke cloud to provide a cover screen.

 

In his younger years he yearned for knowledge and learned from the Jedi, fighting against the Sith in the GGW after his planet was ravaged by them. Over time he witnessed jedi hypocrisy undo what he's achieved and felt he'd learned all he needed, so by the time of the New Sith Wars he defected. From here he learned the Sith ways and gained power, but he felt the Sith were too destructive after Bane wiped them out. His mind couldn't accept the hypocritical jedi or the power mad Sith who destroyed themselves so he returned to his home, and adopted the traditional Gen'Dai stance of non-interference with an exception for protecting his people. He then rejoined the Jedi and became a scholar all in order to better ensure the safety of his people. For centuries he studied Jedi and Sith holocrons in the temple, refusing to take missions or teach apprentices. After order 66, he fled from planet to planet to avoid Palpatine's reach. He studied on Korriban and Ziost as well as hid for a time on Yavin IV, Tatooine, Ilum, and Mandalore to name of few of his more well known stops.

 

He has a special hatred for Luke and Sidious. His travels during the Imperial Era where attempts to find a way to reach Sidious after the Dark Lord attacked his planet and decimated his people. When Luke destroyed the first Death Star, he'd just learned that a few survivors (mostly young Gen'Dai) of his race where being held aboard. He blamed Luke for their murders and was further enraged when Luke stole his kill of the Emperor.

Feats of his power/abilities

 

- Defeated 27 Sith Warriors at once during the GGW, utilizing for the first time his ability to wield 4 sabers. He also killed the last few by dueling them with sabers wielded telekenetically for the first time. He later expanded upon this.

- Stalked and killed each member of a 12 man Jedi strike team hunting him in the caves of Ryloth immediately post Ruusan. Driving them insane through strong force illusions, even getting one to kill another.

- Studied several Jedi holocrons in the Temple during the Golden Age for many centuries.

- Studied Sith holocrons for decades during both the New Sith Wars and Imperial eras.

- Slew a dozen Sithspawn and sith beasts during his time on Korriban.

- Butchered three platoon of Stormtroopers using nothing but illusions and force wielded sabers.

- contained a small bomb's explosion within a force shield without trouble.

- rebuffed and held his own against force attacks from several Masters of the Prequel order during sparring sessions and training

- Captured an Acclamator II-class assault ship in his escape from Coruscant single handedly

- withstood a direct hit from a concussion missile using a force barrier.

- Was entirely dismembered by Jedi twice during the New Sith Wars, walked away both times.

- Visited and lived with the Aing-Tii during the Vong War

- Killed many Dark Jedi and assassins sent by Palpatine.

- Countless examples of telekentic, saber, force shield, and force illusions abilities throughout 3 wars and 4,000 years. (GGW, NSW, and Vong War)

(these aren't all in order)

 

 

So we're making these up right? How does it look?

 

 

 

And........ He's the Most Interesting Man in the Galaxy.

I'll try my hand at this:

 

J'mpok is my main character from Sith Happens, a fanfic I am writing on the forums.

 

Species: Zabrak

Homeworld: Corellia

Age: 4000 years (approximate)

 

Stands a solid 7 feet tall. Often wears white and blue cortosis armor with a thick metal crest. Uses one silver-bladed saber and one gold-bladed saber.

 

Abilities/Powers:

 

Master of all forms of Force telekinesis and telepathy

Able to catch lightsabers and deflect blaster bolts with his hands (because of the cortosis gloves)

Able to do a sort of Force Walk, allowing him and other individuals of his choosing to join with the Force to preserve their consciousness while their bodies were kept in suspended animation.

Master of all 7 forms of lightsaber combat

Uses the emotions of his opponents to gain power

Is able to temporarily shatter his opponent's sanity with his force scream