SvengalX Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 Hey guys! My buddy and I made this short video from some funny comments we have been seeing in General chat.. if you could just take a moment and watch and give us some feedback! Thanks Part 1: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8VGZHKw6m7Y Part 2: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CAZoPKmHAtk&context=C39ea089ADOEgsToPDskLOdCTYgrjYs2Oi4TadwY_2 Hope you all enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercato Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 Hey guys this is Ashur, Please let us know what you think about this series and provide constructive criticism as you see fit. we want to make funny content for you guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shuno Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 (edited) *watches* EDIT: Er.. ok....... Edited January 22, 2012 by Shuno Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SamuraBob_Fl Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 It's not bad. It seemed like the time to joke ratio was a little off. Probably my big suggestion is not to limit yourself to things people actually said in general, exaggerate and make it funnier. After all, you're aiming for entertainment, not truth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annedromeda Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 Amusing, thanks!! Make more!! I miss Machinima from SWG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SvengalX Posted January 22, 2012 Author Share Posted January 22, 2012 Let us know what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shuno Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 and turn off floating names! plus make it actually funny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SvengalX Posted January 22, 2012 Author Share Posted January 22, 2012 and turn off floating names! plus make it actually funny. Good idea on the names.. and thanks for your input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aazendi Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 (edited) I really loved these, very quaint sense of humour Hahaha. Edited January 23, 2012 by Aazendi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luminat Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 Really cool idea ! Not a big fan of the second part, but really cool first part. Would have loved to see ships cut scenes parts instead of a whole one though. With several ships, dynamic mix of parts of scenes. Feels a bit slow somehow. Needs mojo ! Not sure i make much sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercato Posted January 24, 2012 Share Posted January 24, 2012 Would have loved to see ships cut scenes parts instead of a whole one though. With several ships, dynamic mix of parts of scenes. Feels a bit slow somehow. Needs mojo ! Not sure i make much sense. Could you elaborate a bit more on this please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luminat Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 Could you elaborate a bit more on this please? Yep, sorry. What i mean is that the scene of the ship coming out of the hangar slowly and then moving away could have, in my personal and uneducated opinion, been replaced by a serie of really short and dynamic pieces of ship scenes from different ship types. Bam there's a ship ! And Bam, hey, another ! And bam-bam-bam-b-b-b-baaaam ! Instead of just that one ship. I don't know, it feels like it would have more humoristic impact. Hope it helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ebolaface Posted January 26, 2012 Share Posted January 26, 2012 Not a bad idea, has potential. Consider putting in subtitles, such as: [somefakename] how comes no flying mounts? lolkthxbbq at the bottom of the screen when the avatar is acting it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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