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Jdast
05.17.2020 , 10:55 PM | #5
A couple of points and I hope you view this as constructive criticism b/c I want you to succeed (that's not sarcasm).

1) Your intro paragraph is a mess. It's crammed together and very difficult to read.

2) You should identify something about your guild other than you are 34 y/o. Do you like Ops, Conquest, PvP, etc.. As of now, there is nothing to identify why someone would want to join your guild other than you are committed to making it work. It's fine to say you like a range of activities, but more specificity would help. Nothing stood out about why I would want to join your guild.

Cheers and G'Luck,

Dasty