What an unrealistic Vette.
Clearly, she should have a funny quip in every second line.
Kidding, kidding. I quite like where you're taking this story. Just how far should I expect it to go?
Aaaaagh I have failed as a writer
But seriously, thanks for the comment. To keep one of this thread's motifs going, people talking about my story is like popcorn for the soul
I've written most of the story already, but not all of it. (That's why the updates have been so fast thus far.) There're about twenty chapters, and it's going to go up partway through the Warrior's Chapter 2. I wanted to demonstrate Jaesa settling in, finding her place in Aly's crew, and then coming up against a big moral and physical challenge to cap it all off. I don't really want to say more than that because it'd give the game away.