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Mrtwo
02.27.2013 , 08:48 PM | #2811
Prompt: Enemies, Rivals, and Nemeses
First fic I've ever wrote for, well, anything, so constructive critisism would be welcomed appreciated! I like getting introspective with my characters so not a lot of dialogue in this one. Slight allusions to child abuse, nothing that serious. Pre-chapter 1 BH. Some advice on formatting would also be nice, it's one of my fatal flaws. 586 words.

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