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Aurbere
01.19.2013 , 12:11 PM | #3
Quote: Originally Posted by konstadinosblue View Post
Very good.Don't take me wrong but I have one complain:You made the Master too ******.I mean,you made him
look like god.I know it's your first fan-fic and I'm not saying I can do any better but I suggest you to make him
more weak,more human,as much as he can be.No offense.
I understand. I think I went a bit overboard, but that kinda had to happen for him to actually pose a threat to Luke.

I already have plans to 'humanize' him.
Added Chapter 49 to The Shadows Fall
"Your only hope to survive is to give in to the rage boiling within you, to acknowledge the Dark Side you deny, and tap into it!"--Darth Tyranus