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01.19.2013 , 11:38 AM | #2
Very good.Don't take me wrong but I have one complain:You made the Master too ******.I mean,you made him
look like god.I know it's your first fan-fic and I'm not saying I can do any better but I suggest you to make him
more weak,more human,as much as he can be.No offense.
Ahsoka: "Well, you want the bad news, or the really bad news?"
Obi-Wan: "Well, let's try the bad news laced with a little optimism."
―Ahsoka Tano and Obi-Wan Kenobi, attempting to flee from Mortis