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01.01.2013 , 07:16 AM | #20
Quote: Originally Posted by Syart View Post
The Minder waited patiently, without comment, sipping his coffee.

After about ten minutes, the boy turned around and came back to the table. The confusion had gone from his face; he was still nervous, but determined. "All right, I'm in", he said.

The Minder smiled, almost triumphantly. "Excellent, I hoped you would." He stood up, put down his coffee cup and extended his hand for the boy to shake. "Welcome to your new life, Eckard Lokin."
*gasp* brilliant! Just read all of this in one go and its brilliant. Few fan fictions on here click with me but I really like this one. Keep it up!