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Vesaniae
12.26.2012 , 05:46 PM | #320
Quote: Originally Posted by MilaniGrey View Post
You ninja-poster, you!
Who, me?

Now, for our next bonus material, here is the first version of Chapter Six. The original chapter may be found here, for comparing purposes.

The first part of this early version is pretty much the same as what I ended up posting, but the last bit was rewritten entirely. Behold:


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Force Lightning: The solution to every problem. Every. Problem.
Afterimages * Walking Penumbral * Like Moths to the Flame
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