@Ereiniel, My lord, I
hot pants? Marvelous.
@almostinsane, I figured that love was actually a pretty useful emotion for a Sith. After all, they're all about passion. What could be more passionate than love, lust, jealousy, envy, etc. Love's all about powerful emotions! But as for parents, that direction you took is
rather Sith-y. The Inquisitor line has a lot to do with family (at least so far), so I was surprised that the warrior one hasn't.
@Striges, I actually think that the tense and perspective really suit the situation. It really conveys a sense of being overwhelmed.
@Tatile, those two stories caused my heart to go hnnnnrgh. The first one, because of how it ended
and the second one because of the adorbs. My heart goes out to Broan.
And thanks for your comment, I'm glad you liked it! Though it's too bad the best line got censored. But if that
didn't get in, there's no way I could write about what happened in that taxi