That is not the best build I've seen. Drop jedi crusader, you really shouldn't have any focus problems. Pick Valor, it is a must, seriously. Higher force sweep dmg, I don't know, you are not going to aoe much as combat and you won't use it as a filler either.
I use this one for pve/casual pvp http://www.torhead.com/skill-calc#501bcZhGMRRrbdGzZG.2
If you want more pvp oriented drop insight and pick one point stagger and two points displacement (this works in pve too).
Also, accuracy talent is really great. More passive accuracy => you can afford more surge rating => more dmg.