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11.21.2012 , 03:21 PM | #225
Finally finished reading this.

I was reading it before the wipe and found it to be an incredibly fun story. Glad to see that it was just as fun when I came back and finally finished the whole thing.

I think Draco is probably my favorite, as there are still so many questions left unanswered about him. But oh well, maybe your next story Targon.

Again, great work and very fun to read.

As far as editing goes...well, everyone always has room for improvement. It's good that you're rereading it. Fix the little things like grammar and typos first. Then fix the larger problems, like continuity errors and such. At least that's how I would do it.