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09.30.2012 , 10:09 PM | #4
Goodness. A version in which Quinn was actually competent in programming the droids? That's refreshing. And I really like the way you work in a variety of his conversations' lines in a way that makes sense.

Your writing flows quite well, the only difficulty I caught was that the act of exhaling is sighing/a sigh rather than sighting/a sight.

I really enjoyed this
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