Knightless: A Jedi Knight Alternate Universe
View Single Post
09.14.2012 , 09:08 AM |
@bright_ephemera Thanks for the feedback. I'm terrible at layout and color so I keep looking at other comic books going how do they figure out to DO that.
The Prologue That Wasn't Comic Script Page 4
Panel 1: Maks and Selena exchange fire with Imps
Panel 2: They run for cover to a small building
Panel 3: Selena looks injured and canít run
Panel 4: They exchange a look and lure the imps into the building.
Panel 5: Building Explodes
Comic Page 4 in FanArt thread
Again, major deviation from script. I'm not sure if I'm making it more active or just trying to avoid drawing redundant scenes
. Also, this was page 6 but page 4 and 5 were boring and putting this after them broke up the page 3 build up (at least I thought so.)
Short Fic Challenge Thread
Remi the Grey