Ha! That's so something 2V-R8 would be doing if the writers had thought of it.
Came here by way of the writers' wrant thread, actually, having seen you post there. I like it! The absence of paragraph breaks in dialogue sequences is a little hard to follow, but I do like the content. I'm especially enjoying visualizing Titus's poor beat-up gear kit.
Thanks for the feedback!
What do you mean when you say "absence of paragraph breaks?"