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09.11.2012 , 04:57 PM | #8
Squee! I've been checking out the pages as they come up, now I have proper time to sit down and focus on cri-ooh shiny objects over there

I mean, um.

First off, I like how recognizable the models from game are. Both character appearances and clothes (love Selena's jacket!).

Spacing and overlay on panels is good...it's one of those things you don't often notice until it gets screwed up. And for heaven's sake, you actually work with a natural reading/gaze-flow pattern down the page. Page 3 in particular just leads the eye exactly where it needs to go. Easy to follow.

Ooh, I like the zone map in background of the rebel base!

In conclusion, yay!
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