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09.06.2012 , 04:11 PM | #15
Action doesn't just happen, but it should D:<
I should just be able to convey my character's emotions and movements without it sounding contrived and pathetic, like some poorly written cheap romance novel you see middle aged women reading on the bus.
My characters are living, breathing creatures but instead of ACTING they stand around like a bunch of wooden *****!

And plot! Ugh! I think I lost it when I moved house :/