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08.28.2012 , 08:10 PM | #7
Quote: Originally Posted by bright_ephemera View Post
o.o Okay, color me jealous! I have yet to get a recognizable sonnet from initial notion to paper...uh, under an hour.

"Trust" is an interesting element for a final couplet on Quinn. Interesting, indeed. And to get all nerdy, I <3 your solid meter and imagery; this one reads well.
Don't give me too much credit here, I just took Shakespeare's Sonnet 18 and switched around some of the words.

I was surprised that I managed to do it in under half an hour. Most of that time was spent trying to find a rhyme for "merciless". *grumbles*
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