Meh, think i'll give some nice feedback instead cuz you didn't rage at my post ^^ It's a impressive edit for 1st time, no doubt about that and you have lots of potential. I've been editing in Sony Vegas 7 for about 4 years, CS 1.6 mainly but quit some time ago. And my impression of the editing scene is all about sync and camera angles, that's pretty much the deal ^^ So I would recommend trying to sync the edit to the music even more, experiment a little. In the end you will have an awesome video for sure