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  1. Location: Deep Space, Unknown Regions. On board the XS starship. Time: Unknown. Closest system: Lehon. The Cap'n just woke up from a beep from his comlink. ''Hey Cap.. Sorry to wake you. But we've got a problem. Get to the cockpit, now.'' Said Corso Riggs. The Cap got out of his bunk slowly, trying not to wake up Risha. He put on his Privateer jacket on. His loose cargo pants and he holstered his E-52 Galactic Shrieker which he named Jumpy. (For its stun effect it has on people.) On his way to the cockpit he saw C2-N2. ''Good morning Master. Would you like a refreshment? Maybe something to eat?'' Said C2-N2. ''No Thanks, C2. Got to get to the cockpit. But bring a glass of water to my room.'' ''Certainly Master, right away Master. Said C2-N2 before heading to the kitchen. The Captain reached the cockpit to be greeted by Corso. ''What's so important that you had to wake me up? You know I get cranky when you do that.'' ''Sorry Cap, but take a look out of the window. I didn't know what to do.'' Said Corso. Out of the window, there was a vessel. Not just a vessel, but a weird looking vessel. The captain has never in his years of space-travel seen anything like it. ''Ah.. Good thing waking me up, Corso. Looks like an adventure to me, and you know what that means! CREDITS!'' ''You sure it's a good idea to venture out there without anyone knowing where we are?'' Said Corso. ''Oh, and split the winnings or get double crossed? No, we found it. We investigate. And don't worry, we'll all go aboard.'' Corso's face went from neutral to bummed out. ''Oh, and Corso... Wake up Risha. She's like a Rancor in the morning.'' Two hours passed and everyone was prepped and ready in the cockpit. ''C2, got the schematics?'' ''Yes sir. Ship computer just finished scanning.'' Said C2-N2. A lay-out of the ship's interior popped up in front of the group. There seems to be no electrical power active. And no life forms have been registered. ''...A ghost ship.'' Said Akaavi Spar. ''Would of been nice to have a welcoming party.'' Said Guss Tuno. ''Well, there isn't. So let's buckle up and go in. No living life forms on board, so it should be safe enough. We'll wear rebreathers just in case.'' The ship docked with the vessel and the group were at the ready in the airlock. A hiss. a stream is steam. And a dark hall was in front of them to greet them. No sign of a battle. And no bodies. The group walked in. The air was thin and cold. Cold as space. ''Where shall we go to first?'' Asked Corso. ''Grrr Arrrr!'' Said Bowdaar. ''Don't think it's wise to split up. I think we should head to the bridge. Try and restore power.'' The group walked past the living quarters, when all of a sudden they heard a yell. They all looked behind them in fear. ''I think that came from one of the rooms...'' They slowly and carefully check the rooms. They reached room 106. ''Oh my... Is... Is that blood on the door?'' Said Guss. ''I think it is.'' Said Corso. ''Okay guys, get your guns ready. Set to stun. We need to know what happened here.'' 3...2....1... The door slid slowly open. They entered the totally dark room. No visibility whatsoever. Thankfully they brought glow rods with them. *Crack* *Crack* *Crack*, they've got light. The room looked like it had seen 3 wars. It was a mess. The room was only 15 x 20 meters. The group spilt up to look for a clue to the sound. ''AAAH!'' Yelled Guss. Everyone came running towards him. They stood there, totally stunned. In the corner, behind a bunk bed, lay a figure. About 1,30 meters tall. Not very wide. Looked like a kid, but it wasn't moving. ''Guss, try and move it.'' ''I'm not touching that!'' Said Guss. ''Really Guss? You're the medic. I've got to do everything don't I? Said Akaavi. She took the figure by the foot and pulled it into the open space of the room where they could examine it better. It was indeed a kid, a young girl. Looked to be 12, she was alive, but unconscious. They laid her on the bed and waited. After awhile she still didn't wake up. ''What do we do? She isn't waking up. We can't bring her to the ship, she might be sick. We can't just wait here. What do we do, Cap?'' Asked Corso. ''Well, we can't leave her alone. Not like this. But we also can't wa...'' The girl wasn't in her bed. They saw her run into the corridor to the right. The Cap ran after her. ''Wait! We don't want to hurt you!'' He was catching up with her. She was weak and didn't get far. He managed to catch her and hold her down. The rest were running their way. The girl struggled. The Cap shushed her and comforted her. After moments she became relaxed. And started to actually hold onto the Captain. The rest were standing around them. They were looking at the girl and Captain with wide eyes. ''You gave us a scare, and I think we scared you too. Let's get you safe and you can tell us what happened. Okay? They were back in the room where they found her. ''What happened here? Where is everyone? Why did you yell?'' Asked Akaavi. The girl was silent. ''Where are you parents?'' Asked Risha. The girl was still silent. ''Don't think you guys are helping her. Risha, look through the cupboards. Look for something to drink and to eat. ''Good idea Cap, I could do with something to eat.'' Said Guss. ''it's not for you, stupid fish. it's for this poor girl!'' Risha found something to eat and drink and gave it to the Cap. The Cap gave it to the girl, who accepted it. She looked the Captain in the eyes with scared eyes. ''What's your name?'' ''Asali.'' ''Hi Asali, we're friends. Okay? We want to help you. ''Okay...'' Said Asali. ''Were you the one who yelled? ''Yes...'' Said Asali. ''Why?'' ''They were chasing me.'' Said the scared girl. The group were looking at each other. ''...Who was chasing you?'' Asked Corso. ''Them.'' Said the girl. The group didn't say a word, they only shared a look. They left the girl sitting at the table while they were discussing. ''That's it. She killed everyone and went crazy.'' Said Akaavi. ''You silly? She's a kid!'' Said Risha. ''So? I was a kid when I killed people.'' Said Akaavi. ''Yeah, but we all know for sure you're nuts.'' Said Risha. ''Enough! We need to decide what to do now. She's the only one who actually knows what's going on. But she still can't tell us. ''Grrrr Arrr Rrrrr?'' ''Excellent idea Bowdaar. Let's just get the heck outta here. No amount of credits is worth this!'' Said Guss. ''Out of the question. We're gonna find out what happened and we're going to make a profit out of it. Let's stick to the original plan. Head to the bridge and restore power. There must be a record of what happened and why it's in Deep Space.'' ''And we leave the crazy little girl here?'' Asked Guss. ''No, she's coming with. She knows the way.'' They were heading towards the bridge now. On their way to the bridge they heard stuff... A moan. A distant scream. A creak. Sounds without an answer for. They never felt like this before. It felt like they were being stalked. But they just didn't know by who... Or by what. They got to the bridge. Everything was still intact, but the horror on their faces when they saw it's state. Blood... Blood everywhere. Enough blood to fill a space freighter. Corso touched the blood. It was dry. ''Must of been like this for ages.'' Said Corso. ''Okay guys, try and get the power back on. But be careful.'' The group split up across the bridge. Except the girl, she followed closely behind the Cap. Part 2. Location: Unknown Vessel. Previously, the crew stumbled upon an unknown vessel and went in to investigate. They found out that there's a mystery on board and are going to find out what it is.... Risha managed to get the power restored to the ship, but not all lights in the vessel worked. The crew went through the computers. ''Cap, I've found the ship's logs. Last entry was two weeks ago. It says that they encountered a small object in space. And moments after taking it in they lost communications and the ship lost power.'' Said Corso. They all gathered around Corso. ''So, this piece of junk has been floating around for two weeks with one live passenger, so far we know?'' Asked Akaavi. Geuss it has. Got to give credit to the girl for staying alive for so long! ''It wasn't difficult to stay alive when it's only you.'' Said the girl. ''Are you going to tell us where the rest are? They might be hurt.'' Said Guss. ''Leave her be, Guss! We'll find the passengers and the crew. We just need to check the other decks.'' Said Risha. ''You'll find them down below... In the storage units.'' Said the girl. The group stared at the girl, afraid of asking one question. ''....What are they doing there?'' ''....Waiting.'' Said the girl, with an ominous voice. ''Waiting for who?'' Asked Guss with a tremble in his voice. The girl didn't answer. She just stared at the group. ''Well? Who are they waiting for? Are they alive?'' Asked Akaavi. ''No. They're dead. And soon... You will be too!'' Yelled the girl. At this point, the group were shocked as they saw her face. It was pale white with the exception of her eyes and mouth. Her eyes were dark green, no pupil. Just green. And her mouth... It was foaming. She attacked Guss, pinning him to the floor. Guss yelled. He was as stiff as a stick. Risha pulled out her blaster, and blasted the girl in the head. The blaster shot echoed through the cold empty vessel. ''WHAT WAS THAT!?'' Said Corso. They gathered around the dead corpse of the girl. Still smoking from the blaster shot. ''I don't know what that was... Looked like she went rabid.'' ''Arrr Grrr Arrgg?'' Asked Bowdaar. ''Y-Y-Yeah. I'm fine. Not a scratch.'' Said Guss. *Yell* *Yell* *Scream* *Scream* ...It came from within the ship... The group left the bridge, into the hall. It was long. And it was cold. Then out of nowhere, a black figure stood at the end of it. And beside it another figure. And beside that one were two more. And behind them were more as well. ''Seems we found the rest of the passengers.'' Said Guss relieved. ''Wait a minute. Something doesn't seem right...'' ''Hello, we're here to help! We don't want to hurt you!'' The black figure ran towards them with great velocity. It scream. It was deafening. ''STOP! OR I'LL SHOOT!'' The figure didn't stop. It seems like it was going to attack them. *Blast!* Corso was standing in front of the Cap with his blaster raised. The black figure dropped dead in front of them. It's face... Green eyes and foamed mouth. The group looked up from the dead body. The other figures.... They were gone. Like they were never there. ''What the heck is going on here!?'' Asked Akaavi. ''No idea. But I'm not planning on finding out. No amount of credits is worth this. Let's get back to the ship!'' The group headed back to the ship. Only to find the corridor to be blocked by debris. ....It was planted there. ''What!? You've got to be kidding! Is this some sort of sick game!?'' Said Guss. ''Geuss we'll need to go around it.'' Said Corso. They turned back. *Crash* The group looked behind them. They were missing someone. Akaavi. She fell through the floor tile. One deck below. ''Akaavi, are you alright?'' ''Yeah, I'm fine! Just jumped me, is all.'' Said Akaavi. ''Okay, sit tight. We're on our way! Try and make your way to the stairs.'' ''Yes Cap!' Said Akaavi. And that was the last they saw of her for awhile. ''I hope she doesn't run into trouble.'' Said Guss. ''She'll be fine, she can hold her own. Let's just make sure we get to her first!'' Said Risha. They headed towards the stairs. Same as the bridge. Blood everywhere, but no bodies. The repulsor lifts were out of order. So that means going down a dark flight of stairs, not knowing what to expect. ''Keep your eyes peeled.'' NOTE OF DISCLAIMER: First time writing a story in a thread. As you may tell if you read it. It's the Smuggler class. No spoilers, IMO.(Companions and ship are the only spoilers). Location is pure imagination. Everything is owned by Star Wars. Hope you like it so far. Any feedback is welcome. Might work on part three. Let's see the feedback first!
  2. So many worlds are left out of lore and exploration. Look at Tython, so many area's have been left out that, we as fans, would love to explore! The Tho Yor pyramids, The Chasm, maybe take a space shuttle to Bogan or Ashla. Or Coruscant, all we have is a sector, while we could explore a lot more! Maybe even add Star War 1313 into SWTOR. And there are only a couple of planets in SWTOR, I'm sure you can take the time to expand them. Let people see stuff instead of rushing to meet the end. There are more people playing SWTOR with the lore of TOR and before that, than you think. I'm just saying. These worlds have continents, cultures, races, just like ours. Yet we only explore just a bit. I'd say, make exploring a bigger part of SWTOR. SWTOR is the closest yet at exploring the Expanded Universe of Star Wars first hand. Just think about it. - Mal-rym, Peacekeeper. Jedi Knight. Defender of The Republic.
  3. 1.2.3.4.5. I'm an ex SIS Agent, been enlisted for 25 years. I have been undercover on Zoist, Korriban and Dromund Kaas, that is why I now go by an alias. I've seen pretty most every planet that the Czerka Corp. is involved in. I love their love for the Universe and it's citizens, the security, the customer-service and it's product! I have an old friend who works for the Czerka Security. My special skills are: Hand-To-Hand Combat, Slicing, Interrogation and Marksmanship. I've received various medals in the line of duty. I follow order to the direct. Yet I still understand my actions and what it may lead to. If something happens not according to plan, I use my improv. to turn the tide of the situation to my advantage. A skill I learned while being undercover. If you have any questions about me, please ask for the Director of the SIS, and he'll tell you what you'd like to know.
  4. Let planets have time! (In sync with the time-zone where the player is) It would be nice to see some darkness over the planets while exploring them! Please give this some thought!!!!
  5. As you can see, it took them 2 years to give us Makeb, so who knows? Might take another 2 years!
  6. I think SWTOR should have another cinematic in honour of the new Expansion pack! Give the fans 8 min. of pure awesomeness!
  7. Well, me and my Guild have a weekly/Daily thing. It's still in progress but these are really good idea's for other Guilds too! #1 Quiz nights: Questions about the Star Wars Movies I-VI (Since everyone knows about the movies) And with every contestant they'd chip in so many credits, and at the end of the match, the three winners (Top three who get the best awnsers) Will devide the credits that they have won. #2 World Raid Bosses, Here we'd have an Ops group and beat a World Boss (And if you'd like, filming it.) #3 Dueling contest: Here we'd have a ranked match within out Guild at have little battles. The winner per battle will get a prize! #4 PvP raids: Here we'd go into a Group or Ops and go onto PvP and just own. Of course we wouldn't want to spoil the whole game for other players, so we'll keep it clean and short. If you're interested in our Guild, please join us or spread to word of our Guild!! The Boondock Saints, Europe Server, Nightmare Lands.
  8. Game Idea's - Like every other Sandbox game, they have day to night gameplay. So maybe the game would be a bit better with that too. And that it will take affect in which Timezone you are in. And maybe that every player can hire a shop to sell items, instead of on the GTN, because having a own shop would include communication. That's one big reason to have players have their own shop. In-Game Idea's - Taxi's, they should have taxi drivers. (To know how they look like, watch SW Ep.I Anakin arrives in Coruscant and enters a Taxi with Jar Jar Binks.) Public Planet departures, have NPC's waiting there.
  9. Before I bought a PC and the game I was like: MAKE IT FOR THE XBOX 360!!! But after playing it on PC I can see why they aren't going to make it for other consoles. It with the multiple key choices. Here there are 1 purpose per button. While if you did it for a different console it would be more. And with the playing it online would be bad for the money that they earn. On PC you pay to play, while on XBOX 360 or PS3 you pay to be Online. Not for the gameplay itself. So that's why I think they shouldn't make it for other consoles. And I think that more people should get a PC, way better hand-to-eye movement
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